writing-非谓语动词在写作中的应用

Thebeautyofwriting“Readingmakesafullman;conferenceareadyman;andwritingan______man.”--FrancisBaconexact阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人精确。--培根阅卷老师喜欢的句子•、•同位语结构、with复合结构，使文章简洁、通顺；尽量使用动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。使用分词短语(非谓语动词）Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用1.Seeingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.3.—Whichteamisgoodatcooking?—Ateamcalleditselfthesuppercook.Correction写作中非谓语动词常见的错误Seenclimbingcalling1.Whensheheardthenews,sheburstintocrying._________thenews,sheburstintocrying.2.AustraliaislocatedonthewestcoastofthePacific.AustraliaisthelargestcountryinOceania.Australia，__________________thewestcoastofthePacific，isthelargestcountryinOceania.用非谓语结构改写句子Hearinglocatedon3.ThoughIadmitwhathehassaid,Istilldoubthedidn’tdohisbest.__________________________________________,Istilldoubthedidn’tdohisbest.4.BecauseImissedthebus,Iwenttoschoollate.__________________________,Iwenttoschoollate.AdmittingwhathehassaidMissingthebus5.WhenIwaswalkinginthestreet,Isawhim._____________inthestreet,Isawhim.6.Ifyouworkhard,________________hard,youwillsucceed.WalkingWorking7.Althoughhehadfailedmanytimes,hedidn’tloseheart.________________manytimes,hedidn’tloseheart.8.Asshewasscoldedbytheteacher,thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead._____________________,thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead.HavingfailedScoldedbytheteacher•例文(1)：•Gettingbackwhatyouhavelostwouldbeanunforgettableexperience.LastMonday,Ilostmyexpensivecellphone,onwhichmynamewasinscribed(刻).Fortunately,itwasreturned.•Thatmorning,Irushedoutofmyhouseandjumpedintoataxi,forIwouldbelateforthefinalexamination.Onarrivingatschool,Iheadedtomyclassroomquickly,notnoticingthatIhadleftmycellphoneonthebackseat.EnjoytwoessaysThereisalwayssomeonebehindus,caringaboutus.Oneverydaymorning,walkingoutofthedoorwaytogotoschool,wemaybetoldtopayattentiontothetraffic,nottofightorquarrelwithothers,andmayevenbetoldtochewslowlyattable.Beingachild,wemayfeeltiredofthosewords.whenwecomehomeafterschool,shehastriedherbesttoprovidewhatshehasforus.Evenifwhatweneedisjustaglassofwater,shewillalsokeepitinmind.例文(2)Whennoticinghergreyhairsandthewrinklesaroundhereyes,IrealizeIhavegrownupwhilesheisnolongeryoung.It’stimethatIshoulddosomethingforher,evenonlygivingherbacksomemassageormakingacupofteaforhercanmakeherfeelthatsheseemstobethehappiestwomanintheworld.Doyouknowwhosheis?SheisourMom.Funtime!PickoutapictureandfinishthetaskplaymusicmakehappyPlayingmusicmakesthemhappy.makeasentenceusingnonfiniteverbs___________bythereporterfromCCTV,themansaidhewasveryhappy.(interview)InterviewedFinishthesentenceusingnonfiniteverbse.g.Havingfinishedmyhomework,Iwentontohelpmyparents.listento/burstoutlaughingHavinglistenedtothesongcalled“Gangnamstyle”,weburstoutlaughing.Followtheexampleandmakeasentence.3.Moyanstoodthereandwassurroundedbymanyreporters.Moyanstoodtheresurroundedbymanyreporters.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子←Combinethefollowingsentences1.Assoonastheyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.2.IfIamgivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish(目的)Hestudiesharder.ToimprovehisEnglish,hestudiesharder.4.Whenhelefttheclassroom,hedidn’tsaygoodbyetome.5.Becauseheisill,hecan’tattendthemeeting.Whenleavingtheclassroom,hedidn’tsaygoodbyetome.Beingill,hecan’tattendthemeeting.6.Thepolicemansawthethiefwhowasstealingabike.7.Theboyswhoswamintheriverwereindanger.Thepolicemansawthethiefstealingabike.Theboysswimmingintheriverwereindanger8.Becausehehadn’tseenthefilmbefore,hewenttothecinema.Nothavingseenthefilmbefore,hewenttothecinema.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子•1.因为在这国家没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。用连词becauseBecauseshehasnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非谓语结构Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.2.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂用定语从句Thebook,iseasytounderstand.用非谓语结构Thebook,iseasytounderstand用非谓语结构改写和美化句子whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish,writteninsimpleEnglish,3.他们是来自于几个国家的游客。用定语从句Theyarevisitorswhocomefromseveralcountries.用非谓语结构Theyarevisitorscomingfromseveralcountries.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子4.发现他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。用并列句Hefoundhisbestfriendfrustratedandhedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非谓语结构Findinghisbestfriendfrustrated,hedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子①Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.②Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.4.用非谓语结构合并下列句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.用非谓语结构美化文章•Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.•Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.用非谓语结构美化文章↓Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.用非谓语结构