作文中的句子

作文中的句子修改unityandcoherence1.BorninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly1950s,hegrewuptobeafamousmusician.HewasborninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly1950s.Inhischildhoodhelikedtosingsongs.Later,heenteredaconservatory.Inthe1970shebecameafamousmusician.2.DuFuwasoneofthegreatestpoets.DuFuwasoneofthegreatestpoetsoftheTangDynasty.3.Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobyhisdeeds.Amanisjudgednotonlybyhiswordsbyalsobyhisdeeds.4Wethoughtshewascharming,intelligent,andaverycapableyoungwoman.Wethoughtshewascharming,intelligent,andverycapable.Wethoughtshewasacharming,intelligentandverycapableyoungwoman.5.Wehavegreatfaithandhighhopesforher.Wehavegreatfaithinandhighhopesforher.6Shetoldmysisterthatshewaswrong.“Iamwrong,”shesaidtomysister.Mysisterwastoldthatshewaswrong.7.Hewasknockeddownbyabicycle,butitwasnotserious.Hewasknockeddownbyabicycle,butwasnotbadlyhurt.8.Lookingoutofthewindow,thegrasslandstretchesasfarastheeyecanreach.Lookingoutofthewindow,Icanseethegrasslandstretchingasfarastheeyecanreach.9.Onenteringtheclassroom,thestudentsstoodupandsaid,“Goodmorning!”Onenteringtheclassroom,theteachingwasgreetedbythestudents,whostoodupandsaid,“Goodmorning!”10.Togetreadyforthetrip,allthethingssheneededwereputintoasuitcase.Togetreadyforthetrip,sheputallthethingssheneededintoasuitcase.11.Sheboughtseveralpicturebooksandputthemintoherbag,whichsheintendedtogivetoherchildren.Sheboughtseveralpicturebooksforherchildrenandputthemintoherbag.Sheputintoherbagthepicturebooksshehadboughtforherchildren.12.Theideahementionedatfirstsoundedgood.Theideahementionedsoundedgoodatfirst.13.Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,whichnobodybelieved.Hegaveareason,whichnobodybelieved,fornotattendingthemeeting.Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,areasonwhichnobodybelieved.14.Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,youshouldnotplagiarize.Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,he/sheshouldnotplagiarize.15.ThosewhowishtotakeLinguisticsareexpectedtosignhisnameonthissheetofpaper.ThosewhowishtotakeLinguisticsareexpectedtosigntheirnamesonthissheetofpaper.16.Studentsshouldlearntoanalyzeandsolveproblemsindependently.Don’trelyonyourteachers’help.Studentsshouldlearntoanalyzeandsolveproblemsindependently.Theyshouldnotrelyontheirteachers’help.17.Shereviewedthelessontaughtlastweekandalltheexercisesassignedbytheteacherweredone.Shereviewedthelessontaughtlastweekanddidalltheexercisesassignedbytheteacher.Thefollowingsentencesarenotunifiedorcoherent.Trytoimprovethem.1Shebegantospeakveryfastatthemeetingatteno’clock.Themeetingstartedatteno’clock,andshebegantospeak.Shespokeveryfast.2BernardShawwasoneofthebest-knownplaywrights.BernardShawwasoneofthebest-knownEnglishplaywrightsofthe20thcentury.3Thehousesweremereshanties,andragswerestuffedinthecracksandholes.Thehousesweremereshanties,withragsstuffedinthecracksandholes.4Ireadthenovelonthetrain,whichdidnotinterestmeatall.OnthetrainIreadthenovel,whichdidnotinterestmeatall.5Awell-dressedmanadmittedustothehouse,andwelaterlearnedthathewasathief.Welaterlearnedthatthewell-dressedmanwhoadmittedustothehousewasathief.6Ilostsomeimportantdocumentsandfoundthemthreedayslater.Thepolicehadhelpedme.ThepolicehelpedmetofindsomeimportantdocumentswhichIhadlostthreedaysbefore.7weenteredtheshop,andasalesmangreetedus,andallkindsofshoeswereontheshelves,andthepriceswerequitereasonable,andalotofcustomerswerebuyingthem.Asalesmangreeteduswhenweenteredtheshop.Wesawallkindsofshoesonthem.8TellHelen,ifsheisathome,Iwillcometoseeher.TellHelen,ifsheisathome,thatIwillcometoseeher.9Listeningattentively,afaultysoundwasheard.Listeningattentively,heheardafaultysound.10Onenteringtheroom,noonewasseen.Ienteredtheroomandsawnoone.11Fredisenergetic,capableandamanyoucanrelyon.Fredisenergeticandcapable.Youcanrelyonhim.12Thechildrenpromisedtobecarefulandthattheywouldreturnhomeearly.Thechildrenpromisedtobecarefulandreturnhomeearly.13Dickens’novelsoffernosolutiontothesocialinjusticesheexposesinthem.Dickens’novelsoffernosolutiontothesocialinjusticesexposedinthem.14Mywatchiseitherfastoryoursisslow.Eithermywatchisfast,oryoursisslow.15Glancingoutofthewindow,abeautifulviewattractedmyattention.Abeautifulviewoutofthewindowattractedmyattention.16Henearlyfinishedreadingtenbooksduringthevacation.Hefinishedreadingalmosttenbooksduringthevacation.17Ifinterestedinpainting,acoursecanbetakenattheeveningschool.Ifyouareinterestedinpainting,youcantakeacourseattheeveningschool.18Shesaidthatshewouldcomeifshecould,butnottowaitforher.Shesaidthatshewouldcomeifshecould,butweneedn’twaitforher.19Totellmyfriendthegoodnewstheletterwaspostedatonce.Totellmyfriendsthegoodnews,Ipostedtheletteratonce.20Iwillgotothelecture,forIlikehispoems.Iwillgotothelecture,becauseIlikethespeaker’spoems.Conciseness1Itwasblueincolor.Itwassmallinsize.Maryisaquietandcarefulwoman.HereturnedintheearlypartofthemonthofAugust.2Hegavemanyreasonsforthefailure,butthereasonshegavewerenotconvincing.Hegavemanyreasonsforthefailure,butnoneofthemwasconvincing.3Inmyopinion,Ithinkyourplanisfeasible.Inmyopini