高中英语写作学生错误句子分析

1.用错较多的单词prove证明improve提高改进•broaden扩大，变宽（动词）broad宽的（形容词）abroad（副词）出国，在海外aboard(副词)在船上，在飞机上•arouse激发，唤醒arise出现，上升•month月mouth嘴•least最小，最少latest最新的，最近的•number数字member成员•社团团长theclubheadheader页眉，收割机（headmaster校长monitor班长cluber无此单词）2.大多数同学用错时态，俱乐部还没有成立，不能用过去时。3.First，Second...或者Firstly,Secondly.不能First...,Secondly.4.个别同学书面字体差，词数不够。使用英语不规范，汉式英语太多。日期表达2015.5.1×例如：1.2012年10月23日→October23(rd),20122.2002年1月17日→January17(th),2002英语日期的表达与汉语不同。英语表达的顺序为月、日、年因此2015年5月1日就可写成May1(st)，2015也可写成日、月、年，1(st)May,2015•1.TheclubwasbuildedupinMay1,2015.①时态改为将来时②build的过去式built过去分词built且build“建立”buildup“增进，加强”③在具体某年月日用介词onTheclubwillbebuiltonMay1,2015.•2.Theclubwillmakeoureyesbig.开阔视野/眼界openone'seyes=openone'smindwiden/broaden/expandone'shorizon(view/sight)•3.IadvisethosewholikesEnglishtojoinintheclub.①joinin参加某些竞赛、游戏、娱乐等活动join加入某组织，成为其中一员。②先行词those,定语从句谓语动词应与those一致IadvisethosewholikeEnglishtojointheclub.4.Youcanlearnsomethingwhatyoudon'tknow.定语从句，先行词something,what不引导定语从句。Youcanlearnsomethingthatyoudon'tknow.•5.WeworkhardEnglishtogether.workhard努力学习、工作workhardat努力学习XXWeworkhardatEnglishtogether.•6.Easternculturalisdifferenceofwesterncultural.注意词性：culture文化(n.)cultural文化的(adj.)difference差别（n.）different不同的（adj.）Easterncultureisdifferentfromwesternculture.•7.Ibelieveitisbenefitforyou.benefit(n.)利益，好处(vt.)使受益benefical(adj)有益的Ibelieveitisbeneficalforyou.•8.WealsohavesomeactivitieshereexceptEnglishstudy.除了：except(不计，把...除外)，besides（除了...还有）apartfrom(①除了，除去②还，不止)Wealsohavesomeactivitiesherebesides/apartfromEnglishstudy.•9.Theclubwilladdourlearninginteresting.add增加,加上提高兴趣increase/improveinterestinterset①名词“兴趣”（不可数）②名词“好处，利益”（可数）interesting形容词“有趣的，有意思的”Theclubwillincreaseourlearninginterest.•10.Hopeyoucanbecomeourclubnumber.Hopeyoucanbecomeourclubmember•11.Wecantalkwiththeleasttopic.①talkwithsb.与某人谈论talkaboutsth.谈论某事②least最小，最少latest最新的，最近的Wecantalkaboutthelatest/hottopic.•12.Iwillwaityou,andthechangewillwaityou!①wait不及物动词，后一定要加介词for②change改变chance机会Iwillwaitforyou,andthechancewillwaitforyou.•13.WehaveEnglishspeakingcontestonceamouth.month月mouth嘴WehaveEnglishspeakingcontestonceamonth.•14.Iwillhappyifyoujointheclub.happy形容词，前需加be动词Iwillbehappyifyoujointheclub.•15.Wecanlearnmoreknowledges.Beside,wecanheldvarietyactivities.①knowledge知识(不可数名词，不能加s)②beside在...旁边besides此外，而且③hold举行，握住（过去式过去分词held）④variety（名词）“多样，变化”various（形容词）“多种多样的”Wecanlearnmoreknowledge.Besides,wecanholdvariousactivities.•16.Wewelcomeyoutojoinourclub.①欢迎某人做某事welcomesbtodosth(错误)sb.iswelcometodo(正确)②欢迎某人来某地welcomesb.tosp.（错误）sb.iswelcometosp.（正确）（Youare）welcometojoinourclub.(形容词)Youarewelcometoourclub.（形容词）Youarewelcomedtojoinourclub.(动词)Wewelcomeyoutoourclub.（动词）AnEnglishclubwillbeopenedonMay1,2015.Itaimstobroadenthestudents'horizonsandarouseyourinterestinEnglish.Theclubisaplatformwherewecandomanythings.Firstly,wecandiscusslotsofthingsonourinterestorthehottopicaroundus.What'smore,wecandevelopourunderstandingofthedifferencesbetweentheeasternandwesterncultures.Inaddition,kindsofEnglishactivitieswillbeheldregularly,suchasEnglishSpeechCompetition,EnglishDebateContestandsoon.I'msuretheclubwillbeofgreatbenefittoourEnglishstudy.Andeveryoneofusiswelcomedtojoinit.