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雅思小作文高分模版小作文结构开头段1-2句转述原题主体段11+X句每个主体段第一句话概括本段,X句介绍数字…主体段N结尾段1-2句第一句介绍总数total(如果没有就不写),第二句作结论开头段时态:一般现在时替换词proportion/percentageinformation/datanumber/figuresfamily/householdmales/menfemales/womeninfluence/affect(v.)effect(n.)categories/kinds/typesdemand/needsubway/undergroundrailwaystore/shopuniversity/collegeshow/describe/illustrate/demonstrate/summarize/indicate国家的替换(如美国,英国等)主体段时态:由题目的时间决定1.数据按顺序介绍,不要跳跃2.4类关键数据:maximum最大值,minimum最小值,trend变化趋势,intersection交叉点(线图)3.第一句,由图可见:Ascanbeseenfromthetablethat…Itcanbeseenfromthetablethat…Wecanseefromthetablethat…Accordingtothexxchart,…Itisinterestingtonotethat…Noticeably,(Interestingly)第二句,具体来说:Tobemorespecific,…=morespecificallyTobemoreexact,…=moreexactly替换词上升increased/anincreaserose/arise急剧上升rocketed(boomed)arocket(aboom)下降dropped/adropdecreased/adecreasereduced/areduction急剧下降slumpedaslump持平stabilizedremained/maintained/stayedstable/constant/steady波动fluctuatedafluctuation最高点peakedatreachedthehighestpointat(ashighas)最低点reachedthebottomat速度快/慢rapidrapidly/slowslowly幅度大/小significantsignificantly/gradualgradually/steadysteadily/slightslightly大约:about/around/approximately/justover/justunder到达某个数量reached/stoodat/arrivedat预期值(将来时间必须用这个写)Aisexpected/predicted/estimated/projectedtoreach…分别respectively占比accountedfor/madeup/representedthepercentageof/wasresponsiblefor/provided一些例句:Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,thenumberof…fluctuatedduringtheperiodof….Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,therewasaslightriseinthenumberof***from***to***Theperiodbetween***and***experiencedaslightriseof…,withthenumberreaching***.Itcanbeseenfromthechartthat***accountedforthegreatestproportionof***Asforothercategories,…Afterthat,anoppositetrendoccurred.Thehighest…wasA,followedby…结尾段Therefore,itcanbeclearlyseenfromthetablethat…流程图Theprocessdiagramillustratesin***stageshow…由图可见Inthefirststage(picture,period),…/Initially,Inthenextstep,…Afterthat(Next/Then),…Finally,…(thewholecyclestartsoveragain.)追加描述atthisstage/atthispoint/asthediagramshowsTherefore,theprocessdiagramclearlyshowsthat…雅思大作文高分模版–(1)立场类文章开头段1.Astheworldcontinuestoincreaseincomplexity,**(点题目的范围,比如education,crime,environmentalpreservation等)hastriggeredawidepublicconcernanddiscussion.2.Whenitcomestowhether…(这句从句一定要写对,就是点题),peopleholdconflictingopinions.3.Personally,Istronglythinkthat…第二段(你反对的那一方的有道理的部分。一般1-2个观点)双边结合:Ontheonehand,thereisnodoubtthatsth.hascertainadvantages(disadvantages).只选择一边立场:One’sfirstinclinationmightbetoarguethatsth.hascertainadvantages(disadvantages).第一个观点Tobeginwith,….第二个观点Moreover,….论据部分可能的连接词:asaresult/tobemorespecific/inotherwords/forinstance第三段(你支持的那一方的观点,一般2-3个观点)双边结合:Ontheotherhand,weshouldnotignorethedisadvantagesitmaybringalong.只选择一边立场:Aquicklookatthefollowingfacts,however,mayshowusadifferentpicture.连接词注意不要重复即可,如ontopofthat/besides/apartfrom结尾段(此类文章结尾必须要写)(仅以抽烟好不好为例)只选择一边立场:Overall,despitetheadvantagessmokingmaybring,Ithinkithasmoredisadvantagesintermsofindividualhealthandotheraspects.Therefore,peopleshouldnotbeencouragedtotakeupsmoking.如果为双边结合的,结尾可用notonly,butalso连接如果支持那方有新观点,也可以放在结尾段。雅思大作文高分模版–(2)解决问题类文章开头段Astheworldcontinuestoincreaseincomplexity,**(点题)hastriggeredawidepublicconcernanddiscussion.Newsolutionstothisproblemarebeingproposed,trialedandimplementedwitheverincreasingspeed.Thisessayaimstoanalyzethereasonsforandpotentialinfluences(effects)broughtbythisproblemandtriestogivesomepossiblesolutions.一定要看清楚题目问了哪几个问题,cause,effect,solution不一定都问的。第二段Thecausesoftheproblemfacingtheworldarediverse.第三段Obviously,thesituationhashadvariousinfluences(consequences)onoursociety,(bothpositiveandnegativeones).如果没有好的影响,逗号后面就写mostlynegativeones.第四段Consideringthesecauses,actionsshouldbetakeninseveralfields.(Theroleofgovernmentsinenvironmentalmanagementisdifficultbutinescapable.)这句话很好,但不适用所有的题目。结尾段(可以不写)以下两种写法根据题目任选一种1.Inconclusion,Ithinktherearemanyreasonswhy…,andcorrespondingmeasuresshouldbetaken.Onlybyconcertedeffortsofgovernmentsandindividuals,canthisdemandingchallengebeaddressed.2.Progressisbeingmade.Theproblem,though,remainsthesame.Willthechangecomequicklyenough?雅思大作文经典模板开头段:1.Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover......Manypeoplelike......,whileothersareinclinedto......2.Thereisadebate/controversytodayasto/over/concerningtheissue/problemof......3.Thosewhocriticize/oppose/arguethat......Theybelievethat......Butpeoplewhoadvocate/favor/arefor......,ontheotherhand,........4.Somepeoplesaythat......,otherpeoplesuggestthat......ButIcanhardlysharethispointofviewforseveralreasons.5.AsfarasIamconcerned/Personally,Iaminfavoroftheopinionthat......中间段:6.Undeniably,.......isgoodinmanyaspects.However,ithasitsdisadvantages,too.Foronething,it.......Foranother,it.......7.Thereisnodenyingthat......8.Itisgenerallyacceptedthat......9.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat......10.Nevertheless,peopleseldomreachanabsoluteconsensusonsuchacontroversialissue.11.Although......hasagreatadvantageof......,itcannotcompetewith......in.......12.However,viewsonthisissuevaryfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplebelievethat......结尾段:13.Inbrief/Toconclude/Inconcl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