中学生高考英语必备材料5 拓展句

谈论你个人对网上购物的看法。•(主题句—引入看法)Inmyview,wemusthaveapositiveattitudetowardsonlineshopping.Ononehand,onlineshoppinghasitsadvantages.Firstly,itismuchcheaper.AsfarasI’mconcerned,onlinestoresofferlowerpricestothecustomersandsomedon’tchargedeliveryfeeifwebuymorethanone.Secondly,itismoreconvenientascustomersneedn’twalkstoreafterstoreforwhattheylike.Andit’seasierforthemtocompareproductsonline.Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppinghasitsdisadvantages.Inaway,itisunsafetobuygoodsbycreditcard.Inaddition,itisimpossibletocheckthequality.Sometimesthegoodswereceivearenotwhatwewant,sowemaybecheatedandwastemoney.•(拓展句—正反式+列举式)列举式一方面利用正反式谈论其优点和缺点，另一方面利用列举式分别谈其优点或缺点。列举学校里的浪费现象要点：离开教室时……；吃饭时……；吃完时……(主题句)Wecouldseesuchkindofwastearounduseveryday.(拓展句)Forexample,whenweleavetheclassroom,wejustignorethelightsandcomputersandleavethemon.Whenwehavedinners,weoftenorderalotandsomefoodisleftuneaten.Whenwefinishsomedrinks,wethrowtheleftoververycasually.列举式谈论“互联网对人们生活带来的影响”(主题句）TheInternetplaysavitalroleinourdailylife.（拓展句）Itnotonlyprovidespeoplewithamountsoflatestinformation,butalsochangesthewaypeoplecommunicatewitheachother.Besides/Moreover,theInternetenablespeopletogoshoppingathomeeasilyandconveniently.递进式提供最新信息;改变交流方式;网上购物,方便快捷说明原因你读完这个故事（目标的重要性）的感受。（主题句-感受）Iwasdeeplyinspiredbysuchastory,(拓展句-原因)asitmakesmerealizethepowerofagoalinshapingone’ssuccessandgivesmestrengthtopursuemygoal,despitethehardshipsIamtogothrough.你对国家“禁止商场免费提供塑料袋”的看法。（主题句-看法）Itisnecessaryforgovernmenttoforbidshopsfromofferingfreeplasticbags.（拓展句-结果）Withthisban,shoppingcustomerswouldgraduallyformahabitofbringingenvironmentallyfriendlybagswiththemsothattheconsumptionofplasticbagswouldbegreatlyreduced.说明结果就“诚信的重要性”的主题发表看法，要点1）你读后的感受。（主题句-感受）Afterreadingthestory,Ifeelitisimportanttobehonest.(拓展句)It’sobviousthatanhonestpersonwilldefinitelywintherespectfromothers,whichisofgreatimportanceinourstudyanddailylife,letaloneinthebusinessworld.However,adishonestpersonwilllosehisfameandtrustfromotherssoonerorlater.Nomatterhowintelligentheis,dishonestywillruinhisfuture.正反式勇于认错和道歉的重要性。（主题句——重述要点）Sincenobodyisperfectandeverybodymaymakemistakes,itisofgreatimportanceforustodealwithmistakesproperlywheneverwearemistaken.(拓展句）(反面）Aspeoplesay,denyingafaultdoublesit.Ifwerefusetoadmitourmistakeswhenwearewrong,wewillnotbeacceptedandforgivenbyothers.（正面）Onthecontrary,ifweadmitmistakesandapologizesincerely,otherswillbelikelytoforgiveus,whichmakesusclosertoeachother.正反式就“如何减少交通事故”的主题谈论人们应该如何避免交通事故。Whatcanwedotoavoidtrafficaccidents?Astodrivers,carefuldrivingisofgreatsignificance.Driversshouldnevertrydrunkdriving(酒后架车).Moreover,theyshouldkeeptheiremotionsundercontrolandrespectothers.Ontheotherhand,pedestriansandcyclistsshouldstrictlyobeythetrafficrules.Besides,theyshouldvaluetheirownlives.相关式相关式是指围绕决定事物的相关因素谈论问题的方法。我们可以围绕造成交通事故的相关因素如司机和行人来谈论如何避免。相关式/关联式(主题句)Toridourselvesoftheterribleaccidents,weshouldtakesomemeasurestochangethesituation.Inthefirstplace,westudentsshouldbemoreawareoftheimportanceofsafety.Onlybydoingsocanweprotectusfromdangerimmediately.Ontheotherhand,schoolsshouldeducatestudentstopromotetheirawarenessofsafety.Furthermore,moreequipmentsuchasmonitorsshouldbeinstalledoncampusandmanagementshouldbestrengthenedtoguaranteethesafetyofteachersandstudents.(拓展句:递进式+相关式)你对考试作弊的看法。（主题-明示观点）Inmyopinion,thisphenomenonwillhaveaverybadeffectonmiddleschoolstudents’studyhabit.（拓展句）（细化）Thosewhousuallycheatinexamswillnevertreatstudyseriouslyagainbecausetheybelievetheywillalwaysgetgoodmarkswithoutworkinghard.Thosewhonevercheatinexamswillconsiderit’sunfairforthem,thinkingstudyinghardisnotnecessary.细化主题就“如何看待外貌”的主题举例发表看法要点：举例：某某……Asthesayinggoes,“Neverjudgeamanbyhislooks.”Whatmakesapersonbeautifulishisattractivepersonalityratherthanhisphysicalappearance(主题句).Inoneofmypreviousclasses,therewasabeautifulgirlnamedLucywhohadalmostaperfectfaceandslimfigure.Butshetreatedherbeautyinamatter-of-factway(平淡的方式)andshewaskindtoeveryone.Herpersonalitywasacceptedbyothersanditmadeheranoutstandingbeauty.(拓展句)类似故事或经历→故事归纳(主题句:引入经历）Thisremindsmeofthestoryofmyfriend,Lily.Beingahighschoolstudent,shehastoliveindormitoryinspiteofthefactthatherhomeisnotfarawayfromtheschool.IthappenedtobeaFridayafternoon.Thinkingofspendingtheweekendwithherfamily,Lilyranquicklyoutoftheclassroom.Shewassohappythatshecrossedthestreetwithoutpayingnoattentiontotrafficlights.Allofsudden,therecameabusandknockedherdown.Fortunately,itwasnotsoserious,butshewastoofrightenedandevencouldnotstandupbyherself.（拓展句:举例子适当增加情感态度）•遇到举例的写作要点，有时虽能将思路展开，把故事的经过表述清楚，但往住缺乏生动性，因此，表达时可有意识地多一些人物的心理活动的描写及情感态度表达，使之达到锦上添花的效果。如：•SoupsetwasIthatIwasunwillingtomakeanapologytohim.•Fortunately,withthehelpofhim,Igraduallyrealizedtheimportanceofbeinghonest.•Muchtomydelight,duetomyhonesty,oneyearlater,Ibecameoneofthepopularstudentsinmyclass.类似故事或经历→故事归纳[写作内容]1.以约30个词概括短文的要点；2.以约120个词就这“学生安全问题”发表看法，并包括如下要点：1）请谈谈你读完这则新闻的感受；2）请讲述你自己或身边朋友的有关经历；3）应采取何种措施保护学生的安全？（第一段:概括）Alotofstudentsdiedbecauseofavarietyofaccidents,includingfoodpoisoning,drowningandtrafficaccidents.Infact,themajorreasonsforthoseaccidentsares