高三英语短文改错专题课件

Proof-reading短文改错白雪莹LearningAimsKnowthestepsofcorrectingacomposition.Knowthecommontypesofmistakesappearedinproofreading.Besensitivetothesekindsofmistakeswhilecorrectingacomposition.Therules假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。1.Icangotohomenow.2.Ilikeplayingpiano.3.IamfondatEnglish.theWrongword∧MissingwordofUnnecessaryword高考短文改错的考察方式年份冠词介词连词形容词；副词定语从句名词性从句词性转换非谓语动词代词名词单复数主谓一致、时态语态情态动词、助动词201511010111112020161011010111122017120310001110一、动词形1.动词的时态和语态错误。高考链接1：1.However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturday.(2011全国）flew2.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecameanewnumberoftheschoolmusicclub.(2017全国3卷)taken2.主、谓不一致的错误.高考链接:3.Istayedthereforoneandahalfhoursandmadesurethatthegirlwereallright.(2009全国卷2)was4.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.(2015全国)looks3.非谓语动词错误5.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.（2011全国卷2）buying6.Skilledworkersalsocombinevarioushardwoodsandmetalcreatespecialdesigns.（2016全国卷2）to7.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetables.(2017全国2)interested现在分词过去分词不定式∧二、名词数指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。高考链接2：1.Besides,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.(2017全国2)information2.Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.(2016全国3)yearsprogress,furniture,weather,news,information,advice,knowlwdge三、还要注意形和副１．形容词和副词的误用高考链接3：1.Lotsofstudieshaveshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.(2015全国1)serious2．比较级和最高级的混用或误用.2.Theywerethebestandtheworseyearsinmylife.(2015全国2)worst四、代词格，细领悟3.it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏(feel,find,think)高考链接4：1.WiththehelpofTina,aroommateofme,Ifinishedmytask.(2015重庆卷）mine2.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgewecannotgetfrombooks.(2016全国2）3.Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.ourit1.人称代词，物主代词,反身代词的使用．2.代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的逻辑错误.五、介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住．高考链接５：1.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbymyself.(2016全国2)for2.NowIamleavinghometocollege.(2015全国2)名词性从句和定语从句中引导词。六.句子成分多分析1.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestedinplantingvegetablesintheirgarden，thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.(2017全国2)which2.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.(2016全国2)what高考链接６２．连词but，and，or,so，because,besides和although等的逻辑性用法错误．高考链接7：七、冠词连词常光顾1.Theylivedfarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.(2017全国2)2.Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloor.(2011新课标卷）１.冠词a,an和the的用法错误．andan\one动词形，名词数。还要注意形和副。代词格，细领悟。介词短语常常考。习惯用法要记住。冠词连词常光顾。ALimerick（打油诗）句子成分多分析。解题步骤1.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3.（检查核对，攻克难点）短文改错应注意的问题:1.标点符号不改2.大小写不改3.次序错误不改4.单词拼写不改Yesterdayallthestudentsweretellingaboutthesafeissuesintheclassmeeting,andthenthesummervacationfinallycame.Ihadbeenlookingforwarditforalongtime.Ihavemakesomeplansformysummervacation.First,Iwantedtovisitmygrandparents.Imissthemallthetimeandtheymissme,either.told∨tomadewanttoo习惯用法要记住动词形动词形动词形习惯用法要记住Iwanttospendmuchtimewiththemthanbefore.Mygrandmawillcookkindsofdishforme.Second,Iwanttoplaythefootball.Ispendlittletimeonitatschoolbecausewehavetofocusonmystudy.Ifit'stiring,it'sgoodformyhealth.moredishesThough\AlthoughI还要注意形和副名词数习惯用法要记住代词格，细领悟冠词连词常光顾Neverforgetwhyyoustarted,andyourmissioncanbeaccomplished.不忘初心，方得始终。5.Heusedtogettingupearlytotakephysicalexercise.∨werelikesexcitingget1.Notonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherlikethefilm.2.Whentheycamehere,Iwillshowthem.3.TheyeagertoknoweverythingaboutChinaandaskedmelotsofquestions.4.Ifoundthegameexcitedandmydadexplainedtherules.practicecome1.Don’tlosehearts,you’llbesuccessfulintime.2.Ineedsomemoreinformations.3.Thesemachineslookthesame,buttheyareofdifferentkind.heartinformationkindspractice绝不可数名词progress,furniture,weather,fun,news,information,advice……1.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.2.Yes,itisclearlythatyourlifeinyourcountryisquitedifferentfrommine.3.Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappiertoday.angrilyclear4.SoIgratefulacceptedtheoffer.gratefullypractice2.IwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.3.IalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.4.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.myselfeverythingit1.Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.theirpracticepractice1.I’msuretheywilllaughtomeandseemeasafool.2.Atlastwereachedtothevillageatthefootofthehill.3.Whenayoungmanstartstoearnhisownliving,hecannolongerexpectotherstopayhisfood.4.Thegentlemaninsistedatmyreceivingthemoney.atforon1.Icameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.2.Hewillstaythereoneandtwodays.3.EverykindoftheChinesefoodisworthtrying.4.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrella.andoran