2018年何kk点睛班作文(同学总结)

第一段：第一句图画描述1、Indicatedaboveisapicturedemonstratingtheimportanceoftheculturalheritage（图画主题），whichissymbolizedbyanoldman，ayoungmanandtraditionfestivals.（图中元素）2、Asisshownabove，thepicturedepictsasceneinwhichare/isanolddevotedresearcher（图中元素）.Thedistinctivefeatureofthepictureisthedemonstrationofimportanceconcerningprofessionalethics(道德-主题).3、Asisshownabove，thispicturepresents//depictsathought-provokingsceneinwhichis/areanintervieweeandinterviewerintheoffice.(图中元素)Thefeatureofthepicturethatimpressmemostistheimportanceofdetailandactionforone’ssuccess.(图画主题)第一段第二句：1、Thisdrawing，ifsharedbysocialmediausers，willdefinitelybethetrendingtopicandtriggeraheateddiscussionforitsrefreshingandsparkingimplication.2、Thispicturewillstimulateaheateddiscussion,whenpostedonsocialmediasitessuchasWeibo,asthey/itstrikeadeepchordwithmanyInternetusers.3、IfsharedonMomentsofWechat,apopularsocialmedia/networkthisdrawingwillcapturegreatattentionandabundantimaginationforitsprofoundsocial/personalimplication.4、Thispicture,ifpostedonWeibo,aninfluentialsocialmedia,willattractmuchattentionforitsgreatbearingonsocial/personalgrowth.个人品质:Thispicturedemonstrates//illustrates//showsusthattheabilitytotransformambitionintoreality(主题词)isandremainstobeanintegralpartofpersonalgrowthandbyextensionnationalprogress.Tobesure,theabsenceofthis(quality//trait//merit//virtue)(主题词)willeventuallyleadtoone’spoorperformanceandlowerachievementincareer,nottomentiondeepregretsinlife.Thedown-to-earthspirit,noonewoulddenythat,makesthoseoutstandingstandout.Accordingtoasurvey,thosewhoareequippedwiththistrait(主题词)aremorelikelytoachievetheirgoalsthanthosewhoarenot.各种人名,Huangdanian,apatriotandbrilliantscientist,servesasshiningandinspiring//fittingexamplehere.Itisthecouragetofacethechallenge(主题词)thathelpshimattaingloriouspersonalsuccessandcreategreatvalueforthesociety.思路:1.个人品质----个人成功//社会发展很重要2.缺失很有害3.确实重要4.举例5.没听到..接了个电话第三段:Obviously,thispictureinspiresustoexplorethedeepmeaningofdare-to-action/actspiritperseverance(主题词).Fairlyspeaking,withtheguidanceofthisspirit,peoplewillsurelyattainfavorablepositionsandcommonsuccesses.Moresignificantly,however,itwillhelpusfindthewaytorealizeourfullpotentialandgaintherealhappiness,Ifirmlyargue.思路:确认重要---成功确认重要对于个人价值—幸福应重视//培养Frommypersonalperspective,thisquality(主题词)isthefundamentalattributeoftopperformers,whichboostsandfacilitatestheircareer.So,thegreatimportancetothecultivationofthistrait(主题词)shouldbeattachedbyindividuals,organizationsandeventhewholesociety.无形社会:Thepictureshowsusthatthetraditionalculture(主题词)playsanindispensableroleintherationalgrowthofsocietyandtheimprovementofcitizens’well-being.Tobesure,iftheinvaluableheritage(主题词)iseverneglectedinanypossiblemanner,wewillinevitablesuffergreatlossesandpossiblyfacedesperatesituation.Totakeitastepfurther//Beyondanydoubt,thetraditionalvalues(主题词)willmakeoursocialfabricstronger,familyhealthierandpeoplehappierwithitspositiveinfluence.思路:后面有两种1.重要性2.忽视有害,缺失有害3.确实重要第一种:4.认识不够第二种:4.必须重视5.必须重视5.所幸已经重视6.好的开始第一种:Althoughwehavefullyacknowledgedtheimportanceofthismerit(主题词),someofus(sometimes)tendtoallow(容忍)ourneglectonthisvaluabletreasure.(主题词)[Someofusstillfailtotranslateitintoourdailypractice.替换二者择其一alternative]Sodueattentionmustbepaidtocultivationandpromotionofthisquality//treasure(主题词),especiallyinthischanginganddynamicnewerafullofpossibilities.第二种:Sodueattentionmustbepaidbyindividuals,organizationsandeventhegovernmentagencies.Fortunately,thistopiclistonsocialmediaandbeenhighonsomeprestigiousinstitutionsagenda.Thisisagoodstart.Frommypersonalperspective，thetraditionalculture(主题词)demandsmorethanourattentionbutactionaswell.Expertsandscholar，forexample，areexpectedtoworkoutproperandpromptproposalonhowtoenhancethispreciousheritage(主题词).Admittedly，thereisstillalongwaytogobeforewefindthemostfittingproposal.Withapracticalattitudeandourjointefforts，Ifirmlybelieve，apromisingfuturecanbeanticipatedbyallofus.思路：1、****确实重要2、必须行动3、展望未来社会有形话题：主要涉及影响（中性-新鲜事物/负面-社会问题）Thepicturedoesshowthatourcitizenslivelihoodandwell-being/youngsters’studyandgrowth（图中场景）aregreatlyinfluencedandevenreshaped（中性话题）seriouslythreatenedandevenendangered（负面话题）byartificialintelligence（中性主题词）//environmentalpollution.（负面主题词）.Totakeitastepfurther,therapidprogressofournationinthepastthreedecadehasbroughtusmanydefinitebenefitsandgeneratedastringofnovelties（中性）/challenges（负面），amongwhichare（1）（2）andthelike.Obviously，AI/environmentaldamageisthemostevidentandprominentone.So，thegreatimportanceshouldbeattachedbyallofustotreatitrationally中//toguarditsadverseandevenevileffects.负Fortunately，thistopichascapturedwidemediaattentionhitthenewspaperheadlineandsparkedheatedthediscussiononInternet.Thisisgood，butonlyastart思路：1、主题对于我们生活有影响2、确实产生很多新东西//负面的东西3、主题是最值得关注的4、应该关注5、已经关注6、好的开始第三段：Frommypersonalperspective，itisimperativeforustotakeinstantactionandmakejointeffortssoastoguidethisnewtrendinvirtuousdirection（中）//putthesituationonhold（负）Admittedly，thereisstillalongwaytogobeforewefindthemostfittingproposal.Withadvisableattitudeandsolideffort，apromisingfuturecanb