邀请信课件

第二篇分类写作本书所有作文题的写作要求相同，为了避免累赘，不再每篇附上。统一附注如下：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称；4.如果有提供开头语或结束语，或者两者都有，所给内容不计入总词数；5.答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。thenursinghome敬老院showourrespect表现我们的尊敬gainabetterunderstanding获得更好的理解aromanticstory一个浪漫故事sincerely真诚地befamiliarwith对……熟悉artgallery艺术馆judge裁判speechcontest演讲比赛deliverone’sspeech做演讲isconvenientforsb./sth.对……方便locate位于promotestudents’interest提高学生的兴趣theme主题participant参与者，选手competewithsb.和某人竞争比赛feelhonored觉得荣幸dragonboatracing龙舟赛trainingcamp训练营1.I’mnowwritingonbehalfoftheclassmatestoinviteyoutocomeandattendit,ifyoucansparethetime.我代表同学写信邀请您来参加，如果您能抽出时间的话。2.I’msurethatyou’llhaveagoodtimestayingwithus.我相信您会和我们一起度过愉快的时光。3.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.期待着您的到来。4.Wewouldfeelmuchhonoredifyoucouldcome.如果您能来，我们会觉得非常荣幸。5.Ifyouhaveanysuggestions,pleaseletusknow.如果您有任何建议，请告诉我们。6.Isincerelyinviteyoutowatchtheshowbecause...我诚挚地邀请您来看演出，因为……7.Youcanreachmethroughmyphonenumber44876655atyourconvenience.您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话，号码是44876655。8.Iwonderifyou’dliketogowithme.我想知道您是否想和我一起去。1.Wehopeyouwillacceptourinvitationifitisconvenienceforyou.1.convenience改为convenient2.Letmeknowassoonaspossiblethatyouareabletocomeornot.2.that改为whether/if3.SinceyouaresucheagertoimproveyourEnglish,itwillprovetobeagreatchance.3.such改为so4.I’vereadinthepaperaboutafive-daystour,whichIthinksuitsyou,sonowI’dliketorecommendittoyou.4.five-days改为five-day5.CCTYisinvitingforeignstudentstoperformattheSpringFestivalGala,thatwillbeheldatCCTVStationontheeveningofFebruary9,theChineseNewYear’sEve.5.that改为which6.PleaseletmetoknowassoonaspossiblesothatIcanmakesomearrangements.6.删掉to7.I’mwritingtotellyouwe’llhaveanEnglishCorneractivewhichwilltakeplaceinthelibraryonSaturdayafternoon.7.active改为activity8.Wehaveneverbeenabroadago,soweareveryinterestedinwhatitislikeinyourcountry.8.ago改为before9.ThisisLiHua,amonitorofClassTwo,GradeThreeofGuangMingHighSchool.9.删掉a10.Therefore,tomakeitasuccess,wewouldliketoinviteyoutobeourguide,giveussomehelpwithourspokenEnglish.10.give改为giving；或give前加and【2012全国2卷：邀请外教参加生日聚会】假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：1.时间：周五晚8点至9点2.地点：学生俱乐部3.内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等4.要求：备小礼物满分佳作（一）Hi,Susan,We’rethrowingasurprisepartyforXiaoming’sbirthday.①Justasthenamesuggests,thepartyisstillkeptasecretfromhim.ThisFridayevening,we’llgatherattheStudents’Clubat8pmtocelebratehis18thbirthday.②I’mnowwritingonbehalfoftheclassmatestoinviteyoutocomeandattendit,ifyoucansparethetime.③Thedetailsofthecelebration,whichwilllastaboutanhouruntil9pm,areasfollows.④Atthestart,thecandlewillbelightedandwe’llsing“HappyBirthday”togetherforhim,afterwhichwe’llenjoythebirthdaycakeandhavefuntogether,playinggamesandsingingsongs.⑤I’msurethatyou’llhaveagoodtimestayingwithus.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yours,LiHua满分赏析①Justasthenamesuggests(正如名字所说一样)，语言运用地道，很自然地引出细节。②用到I’mnowwritingonbehalfof…to…(我代表……写信……)，句式高级地道，点明写信目的；ifyoucansparethetime又显示出交际中的礼貌，十分得体。③用到了which引导的定语从句；…areasfollows也是很好的引出列举的主题句。注意：follows不要漏了s，否则效果会归零。④用afterwhich介词提前的定语从句和playinggamesandsingingsongs现在分词短语，有效地把信息整合在一起，句式显得高级，句法复杂度高。⑤本句是作者添加的细节，详略得当，内容合适。满分佳作（二）Hi,Susan,We’rethrowingasurprisepartyforXiaoming’sbirthday.Asscheduled,alltheclassmatesinourclasswillgatherattheStudents’Centreat8pmthisFridayeveningtocelebrateXiaoming’sbirthday.①Wewouldfeelmuchhonoredifyoucouldcomeandenjoyit,whichistofinishat9,lastinganhour.Asthepartystarts,wewilllightthecandlesandsing“HappyBirthday”forhim.②Thenthebirthdaycakewillbepresentedandcutforallofustoenjoy,followingwhichwe’llsingsongsandplaysomesmallgames.③What’smore,asasurprise,we’llallpreparesomesecretbirthdaygiftsforhim,andit’llbegreattoseehowsurprisedhewillbeseeingthegifts.④Asit’sasurpriseparty,hewillknownothingaboutitbeforehand,andwedohopethatyoucouldmanagetoattendit.⑤Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yours,LiHua满分赏析①Wewouldfeelmuchhonoredifyoucould…，语气委婉礼貌，句式高级，用would和could的过去式更体现出客气语气；且用到了which引导的定语从句和lasting…现在分词，体现句法能力。②followingwhich…是一大亮点，现在分词短语中包含一句定语从句。③用what’smore连接自然，条理清楚；用and有效地整合了信息。④本句是自己添加的内容合适，且用do强调，更显邀请的诚意。⑤这是写信的必备用语，必须做到零差错。【2007湖北卷改编：邀请国际学生慰问老人】作文原题假设你是某中学学生会主席李华，你校与本地一所国际学校经常举办联谊活动，你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人，拟邀请国际学校的学生参加。请根据以下内容要点给国际学校的学生会主席Tony写一封信。要点：向老人赠送礼物(鲜花、自制贺卡……)；为老人提供服务(做清洁、陪老人聊天……)；为老人表演节目(唱歌、跳舞……)。作文翻译亲爱的Tony，重阳，中国传统的老人节日，即将到来。我们计划去敬老院庆祝这特别的日子，我们也想邀请你们学校的学生加入我们。我们计划了几项活动。当我们到达那里时，我们会分小组在老人们的房间拜访他们，给他们送花和自制的卡片，以表达我们的尊重和爱。然后，我们会在护士的帮助下为他们搞清洁和洗刷。因为有些老人觉得孤单，我们可以和他们聊他们以前的日子、我们城市的变化、或者他们感兴趣的任何事情。我们也可以给他们一些表演，例如唱歌、跳舞等等。我坚信我们都会对中国的老年人有更好的理解。如果你有任何建议，请让我知道。期待着你及早的回复。你的，李华DearTony,Chongyang,thetraditionalChinesefestivalfortheelderly,iscomingaround.WeareplanningtovisittheNursingHometocelebratethespecialday,andwewouldliketoinvitestudentsfromyourschooltojoinus.Wehaveplannedseveralactivities.Whenwegetthere,wewillvisittheelderlyintheirroomsingroups,presentingthemwithflowersandself-madecardstoshowourrespectandlove.Thenwewilldosomecleaningandwashingforthemwiththehelpofthenurses.Assomeoldpeoplefeellonely,wemaychatwiththemabouttheirolddays,changesofourcity,oranythingtheyareinterestedin.Wemayalsogivethemsomeperformances,suchassinging,dancing,andsoon.Iamsurewewillbothgainabe