英语七年级写作训练课件何少琼

EnglishWriting七年级写作训练Hello,I’mKitty.Nicetomeetyou!WhereisKitty?_____theboxin_____theboxon_________theboxnextto_________theboxabove_________thebedunderMyBedroomWhat’s+介词短语...?Thereis/are…Writing要求：仔细观察图片，以“MyBedroom”为题目写一篇短文，用Therebe句型描述图片中的物品，至少写出5句话。HaveatryMyBedroomShowingTimeMyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabedinthebedroom.Thereisasofainthebedroom.Thereisalsoadeskinthebedroom.Thereisachairnexttothedesk.ThereisaTVonthedesk.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Passage:MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabedinthebedroom.Thereisasofainthebedroom.Thereisalsoadeskinthebedroom.Thereisachairnexttothedesk.ThereisaTVonthedesk.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Practice:MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabedinthebedroom.Thereisasofainthebedroom.Thereisalsoadeskinthebedroom.Thereisachairnexttothedesk.ThereisaTVonthedesk.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Use“and”：语言啰嗦Thereisabed,asofaandadeskinthebedroom.MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandadeskinthebedroom.Thereisachairnexttothedesk.ThereisaTVonthedesk.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.句式单一MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.Thereisachairnexttothetable.ThereisaTVonthetable.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.Thereisachairnexttothetable.ThereisaTVonthetable.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Youcanask:What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandadeskinthebedroom.What’snexttothedesk?Thereisachair.ThereisaTVonthedesk.TherearetwopicturesabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.Read：1.Wecandivide(分成)thepassageintothreeparts.Makethepassagebetterandbetter(使文章更好)BeginningBodyEndingThestructureofagoodpassage(好文章的结构)MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandadeskinthebedroom.What’snexttothedesk?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthedesk.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.BeginningBodyEndingBeginningBodyEnding总领全文——引出话题分层描述——诠释主题总结全文——深化主题Eachpartis:(文章各段的作用）2.Wecanwriteabetterbeginning.Makethepassagebetterandbetter(使文章更好)1.Wecandivide(分成)thepassageintothreeparts.MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.1、TopicSentence——主题句法Kindsofbeginning2、Askaquestion——提问式MyBedroomDoyouwanttolookatmybedroom?Pleasecometoseeitwithme!Kindsofbeginning3.Wecanwriteabetterending.Makethepassagebetterandbetter(使文章更好)1.Wecandivide(分成)thepassageintothreeparts.2.Wecanwriteabetterbeginning.MyBedroomThisismybedroom.Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.Ilikemybedroomverymuch.1、TopicSentence----总结主题KindsofendingTwokindsofending1、TopicSentence----总结主题2、Askaquestion——提问式MyBedroomDoyouwanttolookatmybedroom?Pleasecometoseeitwithme!Thereisabed,asofaandatableinthebedroom.What’snexttothetable?Thereisachair.WhereistheTV?It’sonthetable.Canyouseethepictures?Yes,theyareabovetheTV.Doyoulikemybedroom?Canyouintroduceyourstome?Whichisbetter?Why?Youridea:1.CorrectExpression语言准确2.RightLogicMind逻辑合理3.SmoothFlow条理清晰4.DiverseSentencePatterns句式多样5.CompleteStructure结构完整加点儿啥？多加一些增添色彩的句子层次感、深度的问题Summy:TopicMyBedroomBeginningDoyouwanttolookatmybedroom....BodyThereis/are..What's...?Canyou...?...EndingDoyoulike...?Canyou..?心中有图心中有词心中有方位、次序增添色彩句子Homework要求：1、仔细观察自己的学校，以“MySchool”为题目，写出一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、结构完整的短文。2、字数不得少于50词。NoImage