英语六级应试高级句式与亮点词汇

高分作文的条件1：四级120-150字;六级150—180字;2、是否长短句交叉;3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说：Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。ComputerandIBySimmyIneverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.exceedingly替换verythrilling替换excitingsth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.google替换searchanarmyof替换alotofThedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!本文来源:恒星英语学习网Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopularCoincidentwith…非常地道的词汇，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…Advancement替换developmentPourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterintoCurrent(currently)替换nowAppealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeopleItisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.Forastart替换TobeginwithWecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动Additionally替换Inaddition/BesidesDeliver替换sendThereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,***,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型，还有however作为插入语，functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmtoEmerging代替appearing(fading代替disappearing)Netcitizen网民，属于精彩用词Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.Nogardenhasnoweeds替换EverycoinhastwosidesComputersdoplay，do强调Positive替换important/good等Asliceof替换apartofUnfavorable替换badImpacts替换effects/influencesWeshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/virtues)替换advantage(defects替换disadvantage)Facet替换aspect各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢!以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。1.individuals,characters,folks代替(people,persons)2:positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替good3:dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的)代替bad如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive代替eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,many,ifnotmost)代替many.注：用many,ifnotmost一定要小心，many后一定要有词。Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,代替most.5:asliceof,quietafew,several代替some6:harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)7:affair,business,matter代替thing8:shared代common9.reaphugefruits代替getmuchbenefit)10:formypart,frommyownperspective代替inmyopinion11:Increasing(ly),growing代替moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.12.littleifanything,或littleornothing代替hardly13..benefitialrewarding代替helpfulbebeneficialof14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer15.exceedingly,extremely代替very16.hardlyunnecessary,hardlyinevitable...代替necessary,inevitable17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替sbtakeinterestin18.captureone'sattention代替attractone'sattention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.beindicativeof,besuggesteiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger代替cause.22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth代替..reasonsforsth23.desire代替want.24.pourattentioninto代替payattentionto25.bearinmindthat代替remember26.enjoy,possess代替have(注意process是过程的意思)27.interaction代替communication28.fr