中考英语作文写作指导课件

中考专题复习课Writing检查口语爱好与学业1.迈克疯狂地迷恋足球，喜爱看足球比赛，当然也喜爱踢足球；2.放学后，他经常花1个小时左右的时间和同学们一起踢足球；3.他的父母不喜欢这一点，要求他在5点半之前回家；他认为在爱好上花些时间是重要的，希望能得到父母的支持。分析结构HobbiesandstudiesMikeiscrazyaboutfootball!Heloveswatchingfootballmatches.Ofcourse,helovesplayingfootballtoo.Heoftenspendsaboutonehourplayingfootballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Hisparentsdon’tlikethisandhaveaskedhimtogohomebefore5.30.Hethinksitisimportantforhimtospendsometimeonhishobbies.Hewisheshecouldhavehisparents’support.IntroductionMainbodyConclusionDiscussion抄组集连抓审作文集句成段组段成篇审清题意连词成句抓住要点抄写规范Writingskills—sixsteps自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇:makegooduseof,interestgroupssocialactivities,dosports,netbar不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏3.……看法我认为……建议（至少3条）1.合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组3.……第一步:审清题意认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息具体做法：用笔勾画自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏3.……看法我认为……建议（至少3条）1.合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组3.……注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数主题体裁人称结构时态字数已知信息未知信息以一般现在时为主第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！IntroductionMainbodyConclusionproblemsopinionssuggestionsWriteanoutline1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏3.------------1.合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组3.------1.Listsomekeywordsaboutproblems.Phrases:________________________________________________________________________2.Listsomekeywordsaboutopinions.Phrases:________________________________________________________________________3.Listsomekeywordsaboutsuggestions.Phrases:________________________________________________________________________第三步：抓住要点，列关键词notgoodforstudyandhealth,…Spend---on,hobbies,becrazyabout,---1.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutproblems.Sentences:__________________________________________________________________2.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutopinions.Sentences:__________________________________________________________________3.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutsuggestions.Sentences:__________________________________________________________________第四步：连词成句Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesandcan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.Idon’tthinkit’sgoodforourstudyandhealth.第五步：集句成段，组段成篇Therearemanythingswecando.wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.cansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?ForexampleBesidesthese,AndalsoweWe注意添加主题句，连接词！抓住要点，列关键词Problemsbecrazyabout(7B4)playcomputergames(7A1)watchtoomuchTV(8A1)spendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies(9A3)refusetodohomework(9A3)spend---on(7A2)Opinionsnotgoodforourhealthandstudy(7A2)focuson(9A3)Paymoreattentionto(9A1)Suggestionsplantimecarefully(9A3)achieveabalancebetweenstudyandbobbies(9A3)takepartindifferentafterschoolactivities(7A2)joininterestgroups(8A2)dosomesports(7A4)dosomehousework(7B5)Let’senjoyourowncompositions!二、评分档次：一档文(17-20分)写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构。二档文(13-16分)基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量语法错误。三档文(9-12分)写出大部内容要点，语言基本通顺有一些语法和拼写错误。四档文(5-8分)写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不通，影响理解。五档文(0-4分)言不达意，不知所云。一、评分原则：1.短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。一处大错扣1分。2.通篇人称错误，统扣2分。3.拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。2个小错相当于1个大错。4.相同错误，只扣一次。字数不足90词扣3分。5.文中若出现自己及老师、学校等真实姓名扣3分。6.书写潦草，卷面不清，扣2分。范文展示Hello,everybody!It’stimeagainforourEnglishBroadcastingProgram.Today’stopicis“HowtoMakeBetterUseofOurSpareTime”.Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethanbefore.Butquiteanumberofstudentsdon’tknowhowtousethetimeproperly.Theyspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.AlsosomeofthemwatchtoomuchTV,What’sworse,somestudentsoftengotothenetbarandarecrazyaboutplayingcomputergames.Wedon’tthinkit’sgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?Therearemanythingswecando.Forexample,wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.Andalsowecansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.Besidesthese,wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourliferichandcolorful!ThestructureofthearticleIntroductionMainbodyConclusionSummaryProblemsSuggestionsopinions写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息第二步就是要列出写作提纲（列关键词、连词成句、集句成段、组段成篇）写作前：确定人称、时态写作后：查错改错Homework1.复习本课要点2.背诵精彩范文祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩！ThankYou!Youradviceiswelcome!变换句式并列句复合句结果状语从句Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies.Theycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesandtheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontimeSomestudentsspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime常见错误时态是否正确主谓是否一致要点是否全面人称是否正确语序是否有问题语言是否符合习惯固定短语是否恰当