高中英语写作(概要写作范文答案与解析)

----阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。'slifehasbeenchangedthroughtheChina's“NewThewayofChinesepeopleFourGreatInventions”.Whatare“NewFourGreatInventions”？TheyareHigh-speedrail,Sharedbike,OnlineshoppingandAliPay.bringtousWhatdidtheChinaNewFourGreatInventions“'s？”High-speedrail—Moderntransportationmakeseverybodyneighbors.Theinventionofthehigh-speedrailwaymakesiteasytothousandsofmilesaday.TodaytheChinaaverageof4,000sdaily''srailtransittechnologyisthebest,Chinatrains,sendingabout4.6millionpassengers.Sharedbike—Shortwalksbecomemoreconvenientandfaster,andcarbonmissionsarereduced,whichisfriendlytotheenvironment.YoucandownloadtheAPPaboutsharedbikes,paysomemoney,thenyoucanusebicycleseverywhereinthestreet.TheChinesesharedbicycleprogramshavebeenbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Onlineshoppingng.Onlinetneedtogoouttofindtheneedsforlivi'—Donshopping,asthenameimplies,istopaymoneyonline.Purchases(购买物)canbesenthome.Chinahas751millioninternetusers,724millionmobilephoneusers;totaltransactions(December12hitarecordhigheveryyear.)onNovember11and销售额OnlineshoppingChineseinternetusersenjoycarnivallets”shoppingeveryday.“Alipay—Asoftwarewhichcanreplacecashpayment.Withintelligencephones'popularization,AliPayhasbecomeanindispensable(不可或缺的)APP.Throughscanningthewantstorealizetheambitionofcashreplacing““QRcode”,AliPaypayments”gradually.On11November2018,boththemobilepaymentaccountandthetransactionreached213.5billion.ThereisnodoubtthatChinahasalreadyuseditsownpowerof“NewFourGreatcountry,technologicalshowingthepowerpowerfultobecomethegreatInventions”ofChinaonceagain.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________---------___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________High-speedrail,Sharedbike,FourGreatInventions“【答案】China'snew”—OnlineshoppingandAliPayhavechangedChinesepeople'slife.High-speedrailmakestripsfasterthanbefore.Meanwhile,Sharedbikeletstheshortwalksbecomefaster,moreconvenientandenvironmentallyfriendly.OnlineshoppingcreatesmanybusinessopportunitiesontheinternetandAlipaywillgraduallyreplacecashpayment.Withoutdoubt,newfourinventionscontributetoagreatandpowerfultechnologicalChina.【解析】【分析】这是一篇概要写作应用文。【详解】如何提取要点，注意事项。本文是一篇说明文。主要介绍了中国新的“四大发明”：高速铁路，共享单车，网上购物和支付宝。文章结构为总分总结构。第一、二段总起全文，介绍了中国新的“四大发明”，因此围绕这一句话可以展开概述。第三、四、五和第六段详细介绍新的“四大发明”。第四段介绍高速铁路，其中“The”inventionofthehigh-speedrailwaymakesiteasytothousandsofmilesaday.指出高速铁路的发明使得交通更加快速，故可根据本句进行概述为High-speedrailmakesShort；第五段介绍共享单车“thanbefore.walksbecomemoreconvenienttripsfastertotheenvironment.”friendlyandcarbonmissionsarereduced,whichisandfaster,指出共享单车使短途行走变得更加方便快捷，减少了碳排放任务，对环境友好。故可根据本句进行概述为Sharedbikeletstheshortwalksbecomefaster,moreconvenientandenvironmentallyfriendly.totaltransactions(销售；第五段介绍了网上购物，指出“额)onNovember11andDecember12hitarecordhigheveryyear.”高额的销售额意Asoftwarewhichcanreplacecashpayment.”味着更多的商业机会；第六段介绍支付宝“cashpayment.graduallyAlipaywillreplace可替代现金支付，故可根据本句进行概括为。becomethegreatpowerfultechnological最后一段阐述新“四大发明”对中国的影响为：---------country。专业资料可修改可编辑范文范例可行性研究报告指导范文-----