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玩转图表，不再烦恼朱宏讲座安排•万丈高楼平地起，千里姻缘一线牵。•千丝万缕相萦系，多线如何写？中间段写作黄金法则•跟时间推移有关换曲线•跟时间推移无关换饼状多线•Accordingtothegraph,therewasadramaticriseinthepercentageofradioaudiencesfrom8%at6amto25%at8am.Afterthat,thetrendshowedagradualdeclineintheproportionofradiolistenersto3%at6amonthenextday,althoughthepercentagewentupslightlyfrom3pmto5pmandfrom4amto6amrespectively.•……多线•From1940to1990,theproportionsofpeopleaged65+intheUSAandSwedenaresimilarandfollowthesametrend.In1940thefigureswere9%and7%respectively,risingto15%and14%respectivelyin1980,beforedippingto14%and13%respectivelyin1990.Thereafter,American’sproportionofpeopleaged65…However,Sweden’sproportionofpeopleaged65…Then,thereisexpectedtobeaslightdropto18%in2030,followedbyasteepclimbto25%in2040.多线•总：一句话三要素•分：一条线一个段，每条线分区间描写~大区间详：（6）小区间略（6，只写时间和趋势，不写变量）合并区间描写！•（1）把一条线当中的好几个区间合并在一起先写出这段时间的变化总趋势，然后通过except/excluding之类的词汇表述出其中的小例外~•（2）把两条线的一段时间（由于趋势一致，数据差不多）合并在一起写出这段时间的共同变化过程•总：对比异同~点线面：随便~•预计：在6句话各自的动词前方添加就可以表达将来的变化了~•beexpected/predicted/projected/estimated/forecast/anticipatedtoThepiechartshowstheamountofoilproductionmeasuredinmillionbarrelsperday(MB/D)insevenregionsin2001.•22.26.8•147•7.888.7中间段•Accordingtothegraph,theamountofoilproductionintheMiddleEastisthelargest(22.2MB/D),whileEuropeistheregionwhichproducestheleastoil(6.8MB/D).Inaddition,itcanbeclearlyseenthattheoilproductionintheAmericaandCanada(14MB/D)istwiceasthatinLatinAmerica(7MB/D).Moreover,therearethreeotherregions,namelyAfrica,Asia-PacificandFormerSovietUnion,allofwhichhavethesimilaramountofoilproduction—7.8MB/D,8MB/Dand8.7MB/Drespectively/correspondingly.Thepiechartsshowtheamountofoilproductionandconsumptionmeasuredinmillionbarrelsperday(MB/D)insevenregionsin2001.从相同写不同•7.82.5•820.9•6.816.1•8.73.4•22.24.3•1423.4•74.7首段•ThepiechartsshowtheworlddividedintosevenregionsandtheamountofoilproducedandconsumedinthoseregionsinMB/Din2001.Intotal,theregionscanbedividedintotwogroups—onewhereproductionoutpacesconsumptionandtheotherwherethereverseisthecase.中间段•TheformergroupconsistsofAfrica,theFormerSovietUnion,theMiddleEast,andLatinAmerica.TheMiddleEastisbyfarthelargestproducer(22.2MB/D),butitsconsumptionisrelativelylow(4.3MB/D)–justafifthofwhatitproduces.Africaproduces7.8MB/D,aboutthreetimeswhatitconsumes(2.5MB/D),theFormerSovietUnionabout250%more,andLatinAmericaabout150%more.•Theothergroup…联系我•新浪微博：@新航道朱宏