高三英语课件书面表达技巧高三英语课件

书面表达一、学生失分的原因1．由于字乱而失分。以2002年的考题为例Wetookallthethingsweneeded.Forexample,food,map,compass,flashlight,first-aidkitandsoon.Weshouldgotothefeath.Butariverinfrontoftheforest.Sowemustswimmedandputourbagsonapieceofwood.Whenweintheforest,wecouldn’tfindoutthewaytooutoftheforest.Soweusedthecompassandthemap.Finallywegotoutoftheforest.Atthenight,wearrivedatthecompsite.(10分)下面这篇作文书写时字体潦草，猜一猜它得了多少分。下面这篇作文书写时字体潦草，猜一猜它得了多少分。YesterdaymorningheandIsetoutthesurvivalprogram.Hetookabagwhichhadaknife,clothes,matches,amap,afirst-aidkit,flashlightandbreadwhiletherewereatentandacompassinmybag.Afterclimbingupthehill,wefollowedthemarktoariver.Weusedawoodenfloatingtocarryourbagsandswamacrosstheriver.Werealizedthedirectioneasily.Afteralongwalking,wegotthecampsiteintheevening.WeheldafireandIcookedthesupperwhileLiMingheldthetent.2.文章结构而失分a/不要认为使用长句，复句就是好文章。例文:LiMingandIstartedoffwhenthesunwasrisingfromtheeast,singinghappily,withourcompass,camp,bread,map,light,matches,knife,clothes,flashlightandfirst-aidkitinourbagsandlookedforwardtothehardtrainingwehadprepareforalongtime.Weclimbedahill,thenswamacrossariverwithourbagsplacesonapieceofwood.Afterthat,weenteredaforest,IwasjustwonderingwhichwasthecorrectwaywhenLiMingusedthecompassandshowedmetheway.Aftertwohours,wefinallyarrivedatthecampsite,whereIwasinchargeofsettingupthecampwhileLiMingmadeafireandcookedourdinner.Believeitornot,itwasthemostdeliciousmealI’veeverhad!Words:132Sentences:6Wordspersentence:22b/杂乱无章，没有逻辑性。例如：Thenarrowpathledusintoaforest,andverysonwefindourselvessurroudedbytreesthatsoaredintothesky,theirthickleavesblockingalmostallthesunlightandthusmakingthedayhalfnight.Wehelpeachother’shandandwalkedtowardwhatwebelievedwest,yetanhourlater,werealizedwehadbeencirclingaroundthesameplace.Welostourway.C/丢失要点二、对策1．背诵是个好方法2.基本句型的训练1/主语+谓语2/主语+系动词+表语（adj./n）3/主+谓+宾4/主+谓+双宾语5/主+谓+宾+宾补6/Therebe…3.习作指导一、抓四个环节1．明确要求2．列出要点3．扩写成文4．查漏补缺二、注意两个写作技巧1．用词造句要扬长避短①IspenttwothousandyuanonthecolourTVset．②IspenttwothousandyuaninbuyingthecolourTVset．③ThecolourTVsetcostmetwothousandyuan．④TwothousandyuanwasspentonthecolourTVset．⑤IpaidtwothousandyuanforthecolourTVset．⑥IusedtwothousandyuantobuythecolourTVset．2．适当使用过渡词④TwothousandyuanwasspentonthecolourTVset．⑤IpaidtwothousandyuanforthecolourTVset．⑥IusedtwothousandyuantobuythecolourTVset．2．适当使用过渡词为了使所写短文通顺、连贯，句子与句子之间过渡自然，适当加上一些表示并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的过渡词是很有必要的。常见的过渡词有：递进型：besides，what'smore，letalone，tosaynothingof，whatwasworse,moreovereven等；解释型：thatis（tosay），inotherwords，or，inthesameway，等；转折型：however，but，yet，although，otherwise,instead等；列举型：firstly…secondly…finally，first，atfirst，atlast，next,举例型：forexample,suchas,thatis,like,等；因果型：because（of），since，as，therefore，so，asaresult，thanksto，thus，owingto，seeingthat等；让步型：though，although，inspiteof等；时序型：first…next…andthen…finally，atthesametime，meanwhile，first…then…afterthat…finally等；并列型：and，or，also，aswellas等；时间型：now，justnow，justthen，afterwards，soon，fiveminuteslater，beforelong，shortlyafterthat，tothisday，soonaftersupper等；强调型：aboveall，indeed，surely，certainly，ofcourse，afterall，atleast，atmost，firstofall，等；归纳总结型：inconclusion，inaword，intheend，atlast，finally，tosumup,inshort,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,inall,inaword等；转换话题型：bytheway，I'mafraid，inmyopinion，totellthetruth，tobehonest，afterall，infact等。怎样做看图作文一、写作技巧1．认真阅读文字说明、参考词语和画面，确定作文体裁。2．仔细观察画面，抓住题目中心。3．编写提纲。1）描写的顺序；2）段落的安排。二、写作实例假若下面图画中的学生就是你，根据以下六幅图画，用英语写一篇故事。生词：callingcard名片注意：1．故事须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使故事连贯。2．词数100左右。我们可以分三步来写这个故事。第一步：确定体裁。第二步：确定主题。第三步：编写提纲。这个故事的提纲为：1）我放学回家2）我在323路公共汽车站附近捡到一个钱包3）我打开钱包4）钱包里有许多钱和一张名片5）我给失主打电话6）我在323路公共汽车站等候失主7）失主前来认领钱包8）失主表示感谢Oneday，onmywayhomeafterschool，IfoundawalletneartheNo．323BusStop．Iopenedthewalletandsawlotsofmoneyandacallingcardinit．FromthecallingcardIknewtheowner'sname，addressandtelephonenumber．SoIwenttothepublictelephoneandcalledtheowner．ThenIwaitedatthebusstop．Beforelongtheownerarrived，andIgavethewallettoher．Theownerwassothankfultomethatshetookouta100-yuan-notetorewardme．ButIpolitelyrefuseditandwentbackhome．