【3年高考2年模拟】2016届人教版新课标高三英语一轮复习课件 写作指导六 话题类夹叙夹议文

1写作指导话题类夹叙夹议文应该注意以下几点:第一,根据话题内容叙事。考生可以通过外表、行动或变化用语言描绘一个人、一个物体、一个地方或一个场面。第二,发表议论,不同人对事件的不同看法,或正反观点的对比。发表议论的过程中要紧扣材料中心,确立论点,论据要真实可信,论证过程要有说服力和感染力。第三,发表自己的观点,同时对文章做出总结。写作指导2常用句式Ithink...AsfarasI’mconcerned...Formypart...Personallyspeaking...Astome...AsIseeit...Itseemstomethat...Inmyview...I’moftheopinionthat...Ibelieve/feel...Ifyouaskme...Iadviseyou...3写作典例(2014福建)如何理解“成功”,不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation),按要求用英语写一篇短文。“Successistheabilitytogofromonefailuretoanotherwithnolossofen-thusiasm.”—SirWinstonChurchill内容要求:1.你对该引语的理解;2.你的相关经历;3.恰当的结尾。注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息;3.词数:120左右。ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthat【范文】ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthatweshouldn’tgetdis-couragedrightafterfailures.Instead,weshouldkeeptryingwithenthusiasm.Successconsistsintheabilitytocontinueeffortsthroughfailures.Attheageoftwelve,Igotanicebikeasabirthdaygift.SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn’twaittotrymyhandatridingit.However,itwasharderthanex-pected.Thebikeseemedtooheavyanddifficulttocontrol.Worsestill,Itookmanyfallsoffthebike.Iwasabouttogiveupwhenmyfathercameandencouragedmetokeepgoing.Withmoreprac-tice,Ididbetterandbetter.Lookingback,IfeelIwouldn’tbeabletorideabikeifIhadlostheart.Actually,wecan’tsucceedineverythingwetry.What’simportantisthatweshouldstickatit.【写作点评】(1)段落层次分明,对该引语的理解、相关的经历、结束语分段描述。且动词时态运用恰当:一般现在时与一般过去时交替使用。(2)恰当地使用了过渡词语,使整篇文章连接顺畅、结构紧凑。(3)使用了SoexcitedwasIthat...,Iwasabouttogiveupwhen...,Lookingback...等,提高了文章的档次,增加了表达的多样化,提高了得分点。 4跟踪训练(2015河南太康期中)下面4幅图描述的是高三学生Tom和Mike的一次经历,请你根据图画内容和文字提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文。注意适当发表个人观点。【范文】Atpresent,playingcomputergamesisbecomingmoreandmorepopularwithpeople,especiallywithschoolstudents.TakeTomandMikeforexam-ple.Everydayafterschool,theygotothenetbartoplaygamestilldeepintothenight,andtheyoftenhaveacompetitiontoseewhowinsmorescores.Once,Tomdidn’tgohomeuntileleveno’clockatnight.Whenhegothome,hetoldhismotherthathehadbeengoingoverhislessons.Poormom!Shebelievedhimandcookedtwoeggsforhim.“Takemorecareofyour-selfasyouworktoohard,mydearson,”shesaid.ButTom’sfaceturnedredathismother’spraise.Laterhemadeuphismindtoworkreallyhard.