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大学英语四级写作1.类型2.框架3.段落4.语言大学英语四级作文类型大学英语四级作文大体可以分为：1、现象解释型2、对比选择型3、问题解决型4、观点论证型5、应用文（书信/图表）18HanzhengStreetWuhan,Hubei430020P.R.ChinaOct.25,1994DearMr.WilliamMadison,--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Yourssincerely,PatrickBakerMr.WilliamMadisonGeneralManagerRossEngineeringAssociates1767PalmStreetLongBeach,CA96104U.S.A.英文书信IamasophomoremajoringinCivicEngineering.Iamwritingtoyoutosaysomethingaboutthecanteenserviceoncampus.Whensteppingintothebrightandspaciouscanteen,weareimmediatelyattractedbythewhitericeandthesmellofvariousdishes.Theservicepersonsarealwayssmilingandfairlyenthusiasticfortheirwork.Butwegetalittlesurprisedwhenpayingforthefood,becauseitspriceistwicethatoftheuniversitynearby.Thehighpriceisthebiggestobstacleforustohaveadeliciousmeal.Onthisaccountanumberofstudentshavetochoosethefoodthatischeapandwithlittlenutrition.Itisunhealthfultoourhealthandreducestheeffectivenessinourlearning.Soitisadvisabletodropthefoodpriceinourcanteen.Astowhatpercentageofpriceshouldbereduced,astudentpollmaybehelpful.Iamoneofthousandsofthestudentswhoarezealoustoseeouruniversitytakeeffortstoreducetheprice.Yoursrespectfully,LiMingJanuary12th,2002DearMr.President,常见的图表类型有:1.table(表格)2.curvegraph(曲线)3.BarGraph(柱状)4.PieGraph(饼状)图表作文1)表格(table),它表示多种事物的相互关系EDABCmnfgezpqxyoh01020304050607080第一季度第二季度第三季度第四季度2)曲线(curvegraph),它常用表示事物的变化趋势:3)柱状(BarGraph)它用来表示几种事物的变化情况及相互关系0102030405060708090第一季度第二季度第三季度东部北部4)饼状(PieGraph)表示各事物在总体中所占的比例及相互关系第一季度第二季度第三季度第四季度20.420.427.490图表式作文内容一般涉及5个方面：描述图表、指明寓意、分析原因、联系实际、给出建议.四级考试一般从这5项内容中选出3个内容考察学生的写作水平。图表作文图表作文的写作步骤1)分析图表及说明文字2)观察数字变化趋势,分析主旨,得出中心论点3)列提纲4)正文图表作文描写图表常用句型：(1)Accordingtofiguresshowninthetable/graph/chart/piewecansee/concludethat…(2)Thegraphshows/tells/revealsthat…(3)Asisshown/canbeseeninthechartthat…(4)Thetableis/givesinformation/about…(5)Thetablerepresentsthedevelopmentandchangesin…(6)Afterconsideringtheinformationinthetablewemightconcludethat…图表作文大学英语四级作文结构：三段（12句）Paragraph1:观点/主题/问题(3-4)Paragraph2:论证/阐述/分析(6-7)Paragraph3:结论/观点/解决方法(2-3)大学英语四级作文框架段落的组成主题句(Topicsentence)扩展句（Developingsentences）结尾句(Endingsentence)大学英语四级作文段落1.主题句主题句明确地表示全段要展开的中心点,四级短文写作中最好是把主题句放在段首。E.g.Smokingisharmfultopeople’shealth.Medicalsciencehasnowprovedthatsmokingcancauselungcancerandotherdiseases.Yourchancesofhavingaheartattackalsoincrease.Smokingisdefinitelyahealthhazard.大学英语四级作文段落2.扩展句扩展句是用来说明，解释，引申，或论证主题句所表达的中心思想的句子。E.g.Smokingisharmfultopeople’shealth.Medicalsciencehasnowprovedthatsmokingcancauselungcancerandotherdiseases.Yourchancesofhavingaheartattackalsoincrease.Smokingisdefinitelyahealthhazard.大学英语四级作文段落3.结尾句结尾句是用一句话对段落的主题进行重述,评论,或总结,借以强化主题,加深读者的印象E.g.Smokingisharmfultopeople’shealth.Medicalsciencehasnowprovedthatsmokingcancauselungcancerandotherdiseases.Yourchancesofhavingaheartattackalsoincrease.Smokingisdefinitelyahealthhazard.大学英语四级作文段落二.段落的基本要求要写好段落就要清楚段落应具有的基本特征:统一性(unity)，连贯性(coherence)，用字遣句有变换(variety)大学英语四级作文段落1.段落的统一性一个段落只有一个主题。组成该段落的所有句子都应为这个主题服务。任何与主题无关的内容，任何不能支持段落主题的内容都必须舍弃。例如：Autumnisagoodseasonforpicnic.Theweatherisfineanditisnotashotasitisinthesummer.Peoplefeelcoolandcomfortable.Thesceneryisverybeautifulwithallkindsofflowershereandthere.Andtherearevariouskindsoffruits.Thepeasantsbegintogatherincropsandfruits.修改后：Autumnisagoodseasonforpicnic.Itiseasyforpeopletochooseafinedayforanoutingbecausetheweatherisalwaysnice,neithertoohotnortoocold.Thesceneryisbeautiful,too.Theredleavescoveringthemountains,thewildflowersboominginthefieldsandcolorfulfruitshangingonthetreesareallpleasanttolookat.1.段落的统一性2.段落的连贯性一个段落除了内容统一,意思完整之外,句与句之间还必须按一个清晰,合乎逻辑的顺序安排内容,转折自然,结构紧凑.例一：(1)Todeveloptourismhasmanyadvantages.Tourismhelpsdevelopanation’scommerceandcontributetoonenation’seconomy.Tourismprovidesjobsformanypeopleandhelpsussolveoreasethesocialproblemofunemployment.Tourismhelpsincreaseunderstandingbetweenpeoplesandhelpspeoplelearnaboutdifferentculturesoftheworld.无连接词语，是一堆简单句的组合，读起来枯燥单调。2.段落的连贯性(2)Todeveloptourismhasmanyadvantages.Inthefirstplace,tourismhelpsdevelopanation’scommerceandcontributetoonenation’seconomy.Inthesecondplace,tourismprovidesjobsformanypeopleandhelpsussolveoreasethesocialproblemofunemployment.Third,tourismhelpsincreaseunderstandingbetweenpeoplesandhelpspeoplelearnaboutdifferentculturesoftheworld.上段虽然也是由简单的句子组成，但由于有效使用了连接词语，读者可以正确地了解到作者所陈述的manyadvantages的具体内容。2.段落的连贯性修改后：作文常用句式和过渡连接词:Aproverbsays…Astheproverbsays…Somepeopleholdthat…Manypeoplebelievethat…Noonecandenythat…Asweallknowthat…Asisknowntoall,…Itisquiteclearthat…Itisobvioustoallthat…Variousviewsexistasto…,but…2.段落的连贯性引出话题Clearly,However,Obviously,Similarly,Moreover,Likewise,Inadditionto…,Meanwhile,Incontrastto,Inprinciple,First,second,Third,Finally,Lastbutnottheleast…Notonly…butalso…Foronething,…foranother,Ononehand,…Ontheotherhand,Itistruethat…but…Thereisnodoubtthat…2.段落的连贯性作文常用句式和过渡连接词:阐述话题Tosumup,AsfarasIamconcerned,Toconclude,Asaresult,Tobefrank,Ithink…Forthese(very)reasons,Withrespectto…Fromthispointofview,Allinall,Insummary,Inshort