08高考英语写作专题：第八讲 写作提升---模板范本的写作与训练

第八讲写作提升---模板范本1.对比观点题型写作模板1：思路：论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法，比如“失败是坏事还是好事”，“少看电视多看书还是多看电视少看书”。基本结构：先提出某问题有两种不同观点，先讨论第一个观点，然后讨论相反的观点，最后给出自己的看法。参考模式如下：Recently,wehavehadadiscussionabout________(主题).Therearetwooppositeopinionsaboutit.Thosewhofavortheideathink／Somestudentsholdtheirviewforthereason／Somestudentsagreetothepointthat________(支持A的理由一).Whatismore,________(理由二).Moreover,________(理由三).Ontheotherhand,themajorityofpeoplebelievethat／Thosewhoareagainsttheideathink／Othersprefertodo…Firstly,________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(Besides),________(理由二).Thirdly(Finally),________(理由三).Personally／Frommypointofview／Ithink________(我的观点).Thereasonisthat________(原因).Asamatterfact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.写作范本Recently,wehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Therearetwooppositeopinionsaboutit.60percentofthestudentssupportthepointthatfeeshouldbechargedforparks,becausetheyneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers.Moreover,buyingplantsandyoungtreesalsoneedalotofmoney.Ontheotherhand,40％disagree.Intheiropinion,peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.Besides,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofthecity.Personally,Ithinkanentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.However,feesshouldbechargedlow.1.对比观点题型写作模板2：思路：思路：首先给出一个观点，说明持该观点者的理由；然后说明自己反对该观点，并列举几点理由。参考模式如下：Somepeoplebelievethat________(观点一).Forexample,theythink________(举例说明).Anditwillbringthem________(为他们带来的好处／坏处).Inmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint／itsdisadvantagesarefarmorethanitsadvantages.Foronething,________(反对理由之一).Foranotherthing,________(反对的理南之二).FromallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat________(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).即时训练：依照模板仿写段落假设你是李华，最近你班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：太空探险的意义。请结合下表内容，用英语给校报写一篇文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点(开头已给出)。赞同的理由反对的理由你自己的观点1.获得新的知识1.耗资巨大？2.从太空取得新资源2.宇航员的安全问题3.扩大人类的未来生存空间OuterSpaceExplorations，YESorNO?Wehadanargumentoverwhetheritwasnecessarytocarryoutouterspaceexplorationsataclassmeetingtheotherday.。Onepossibleversion:OuterSpaceExplorations，YESorNO?Wehadanargumentoverwhetheritwasnecessarytocarryoutouterspaceexplorationsataclassmeetingtheotherday.Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardsit.Someofusthinkitimportanttoresearchtheouterspacebecause，firstofall，peoplecangetabetterunderstandingoftheouterspacethroughtheirexploration.Second，newresourcescanbefoundthereforhumanuse.Third，thisexplorationcanpossiblybringaboutnewlivingspaceforhumanlifeinthenearfuture.However，othersarestronglyagainstit.Theybelievethatittakessomuchmoneytodothiskindofexploration，whichisnotworththevalue.Besides，itisverydangerousforastronautstodosuchworkintheouterspace.Inmyopinion，itmakessenseforushumanbeingstoexploretheouterspace.Aslongaswekeepstudyingspace，wewillgraduallygetabetterunderstandingofitandmakeitserveusandhelpusbetter.2.对阐述主题型写作模板3：思路：从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述。基本结构：第一段阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义；第二段分析并举例使其更充实；最后表明自己的立场。参考模式如下：Thegoodsaying________(名言或谚语)remindsusthat________(释义).Indeed,wecanlearnmanythingsfromit.Firstofall,________(理由一).Forexample,_______(举例说明).Secondly,________(理由二).Anothercaseisthat________(举例说明).Furthermore,________(理由三).Inmyopinion,________(我的观点).Inshort,whateveryoudo,pleaserememberthesaying________(这句名言或谚语).Ifyouunderstanditandapplyittoyourstudyorwork,you’11necessarilybenefitalotfromit.写作范本Itissaidthatwearewhatweeat.Soit’sveryimportantforustoformhealthyeatinghabits.However,badeatinghabitsarestillverycommonamongusstudents,whichwillsurelydoharmtoourhealth.Tokeepfit,firstofall,weshouldhavehealthydiets.Forexample,wecanofteneatproperamountsoffish,meat,vegetables,fruitaswellasmainfood.Secondly,we’dbetterhavemealsregularly.Inmyopinion,weshouldtrytodevelophealthyeatinghabitstobuildupastrongbody.Inshort,whateveryoudo,pleaserememberthesayingwearewhatweeat.Ifyouunderstanditandapplyittoyourlife,you’llsurelybenefitalotfromit.即时训练：依照模板仿写段落古人云：“天生我材必有用。”通过描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小，都能成为有用的人.ThereisanoldEnglishsayingthattheremustbeauseformytalent.Ihaveregardeditasmymottoformanyyears.Frommypointofview,thereisnodifferencebetweenonepersonandanother.Withsomeusefultalent,you’resuretomakeyourcontributionstooursociety.WhenIwastenyearsold,therewasanoldmanlivingatthecornerofxxroad/nexttome.Hedidn’thavetheopportunitytostudyinschool,buthelearnedhowtomakewoodenfurniture.Everytimepeoplewenttoaskhimtosolvesomeproblemsoffurniture,hewasalwaysreadytohelp.Tomysurprise,inhissparetime,hewouldmakesometoyswithsmallpiecesofwood.Someofthemweresoldinthetoystoreandtheothersweregiventous.ThemomentIseethelovelytoysmadebyhimIwouldremember/sightofthoselovelytoysusuallyremindsmeofthehappychildhood.Fromtheoldman’sstory,wecanseewhateverkindoftalentyouhave,youcanfindyourownmethodtodisplayyourtalent.Theimportantfactorisyourconfidence.Ifyoubelievethattheremustbeauseforyourtalent,youwillsucceed/Aslongasyoubelieveyoucan,youcan.1.对比观点题型写作模板1：思路：论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法，比如“失败是坏事还是好事”，“少看电视多看书还是多看电视少看书”。基本结构：先提出某问题有两种不同观点，先讨论第一个观点，然后讨论相反的观点，最后给出自己的看法。参考模式如下：Recently,wehavehadadiscussionabout____