【无老师整理】托福写作优秀段落

无老师优秀范例：Amorerealisticandrationalcriteriontovalueteachers’work(andthereforedecidetheirsalary)shouldincludefactorssuchascomprehensivedevelopmentsofstudents,teachers’owncapacitytocultivateandeducate,andparents’feedback.Yetmydisagreementdoesnotsuggestthatstudents’performanceshouldbeabandonedbutratherincludedalongwithotherindispensablefactorsinevaluatingteachers’work,sinceschoolreportisstillamongmostparents’topconcernsandstudentshavetouseitasanchorwhenapplyingforfurtherstudies.Also,itisreasonablethatteacherswhocanenhancestudents’performanceshouldbepaidbetter,asthemeasurewouldmoderatelymotivateteacherstoworkhard.优秀范例：Therearetwohalvestoachievinganewreality:Youmusthavetimetodream,andyoumusttakeaction.Giveyourselftimeforcreativevisualizationdaily.Noteideasthatcome,andkeeparecordofthese.MakearulethatyouspendXamountoftimedailytakingactiononyourdreams.Artistsproduceartwork.Authorswrite.Ifyouarenottakingaction,youwillnotachieveyourdream。无老师优秀范例：Rampupyournetworking.JoinLinkedInandPlaxo,andaskforrecommendationsfromcurrentandpastcoworkers.UseTwittertoupdatetheworldonyourcurrentprojectsaswellasnetworkwithotherlike-mindedindividuals.Lookforlocalnetworkinggroups,andstartattendingthem。无老师优秀范例：Nevertheless,itwouldnotworkeitherifeverybodyjustkeeptothemselveswithoutcommunicating.Itisalsoessentialforroommatestosharetheirexperienceswithoneanotherandthusgetcloseintheirrelationship.Inthiscase,agoodsenseofhumorcanbeasuchavaluablequalityasasinglejokemaybreakthesilenceandopenupaniceconversation.无老师中文释义：但是，如果每个人都与外界封闭的话，其实幽默也是没用的。室友之间就该分享他们的经验，这样才能拉近彼此之间的关系。在这种情况下，幽默感，就是一个很重要的品质，比如一个笑话就有可能打破长久以来的沉默，让大家立即活跃起来。无老师优秀作文范例：Furthermore,moderntechnologygivesstudentsanillusionthatinformationandrealknowledgeiseasytolearn–justbyclickingmouseorwatchingvideos.Butinfactthisformsonlythefirststeptowardsusefulinformationandeffectivelearning,aslearningofanykindrequiresfullconcentrationandinteractivethinking,whicharealmostabsentintheprocessofpopulare-learningexperience.无老师中文翻译：不仅如此，现代科技会给学生一个感觉，也就是信息和真正的知识是很简单易学的，只要通过点击鼠标，或者看录像就可以了。但是，实际上这只是获得有用知识和高效学习的第一步，因为学习任何一门知识，都需要全神贯注和深入浅出的思考，而这些又恰恰是大众网络学习过程中最欠缺的。无老师优秀范例：Second,technologyhasequippedchildrenwithprofessionalapparatuswhichcouldfinallyrealizetheirimagination.Thistakesfromparticularlyascomputersoftwaresandapplications,suchasPhotoshopforcreatinggraphicdesign,Overtureforeasilycomposingapieceofmusic,3DMaxforbuildingupavirtualworld,etc..Allthesoftwareswereneverashandyastheyareatpresent,andthisworldabsolutelyprovidesourchildrenaneffectivetoolforrealizingtheircreativity.无老师翻译：第二点，科技已经用很多专业化的仪器来驱动孩子的想象力，而这些专业的工具可以最终实现这些孩子们的想象力。所有的这一切都是源于计算机软件和应用的使用，比如说Photoshop就可以用来进行图像上的创作，Overture可以用来很容易的在电脑上剪辑歌曲，3DMax则可以创造一个虚拟世界。所有的这些电脑软件从没有像今天这么易用和便捷，这个世界绝对是为我们的孩子提供了一个强大的可以实现他们创造力的工具。优秀范例：Third,technologyitselfisamarketplacewherecreativeideasareeconomicallyencouraged.SteveJobsearnedmillionsofdollarsayearforhisunparallelcreation,andMarkZuckberggainedhisreputationforthegeniussocialnetwork.Therefore,technologyhasprovidedchildrentheinternalmotivetodeveloptheircreativity.Inanutshell,Istillregardchildrenasbecomingincreasinglycreativeintechnologydevelopment,althoughitmightbringminorsideeffect.Aslongaswekeepabalancedmoodonchildrenenjoyingthefruitoftechnology,theyaresuretocontributemoretoinnovationthaninthepast.无老师优秀翻译：第三点，技术本身也是一个能对创意本身起到了很大的经济上促进作用的一块市场。SteveJobs因为他无可匹敌的创意一年赚了数百万美元。MarkZuckberg则是因为他的天才的社交网络的创意为自己赢得了巨大的声望。因此，技术本身也是为孩子们提供了一个发展自己创造力的内在动机。总而言之，我坚持认为孩子是会随着技术的发展变得越来越有创造力，虽然有可能带来一点点负面效果。只要我们对于孩子们享受技术发展的果实抱有一个平衡的心态，技术的发展也一定为孩子们的创新做出更多的贡献。优秀范例：Firstly,peopleneedsturdybodiesbydoingexercising,includingswimmingintheswimmingpoolorplayingfootballontheplaygrounds.Tobehealthy,peoplethencanpursuittheenjoymentfromthementaltoappreciateart.Secondly,notallpeopleenjoyartinfact,butallpeopleneedtodoexercises.Thepeoplewhoarenotfavorableoftheartbarelyentertheartmuseumsormusicperformancecenter.Butifgovernmentbuildsrecreationalfacilities,itbenefitsallcitizensforprovidingplacestoexercise.无老师中文翻译：首先，人们通过在游泳池游泳，或者在场地里踢足球这样的锻炼形式来获得强健的体魄。为了（心理）健康，人们还可以通过欣赏艺术品来获得精神上的愉悦。第二点，实际上并不是所有人都喜欢欣赏艺术，但是几乎所有人都需要锻炼身体。对于那些根本不喜欢艺术的人，他们几乎不回去艺术馆或者音乐厅。但是如果政府建一些娱乐设施，这将会为所有人民提供一个锻炼身体的地方。无老师优秀范例：However,successdependsonmanyconditions,suchastime,hardworkandluck.Thelistgoesonandon.AsoneofthebooksbyBryanTracysays,thesuccessconsistsof21secrets.Nomatterwhateraoneisin,onehastotriesone’sbesttoworkatrighttimeatrightplacewithalittleluckinordertosucceed.Ifonelivestodaybutdoestakeaction,onewillendupnowherecertainly.无老师中文翻译：但是，成功取决于很多因素，比如是否有时间，是否愿意努力工作，运气是否足够好。这个单子，其实还可以很长很长。就像BryanTracy一本书里所说的，成功其实是包含了21个组成部分的。不管在哪一个时代，每一个人要想成功，都必须是在一个正确的时间，正确的地点，外加一点点运气，同时再加上百倍的努力才能成功。因此一个人住在今天这个不利的时代，哪怕付出全部努力，那么他将注定一事无成。无老师优秀范例：Firstly,artmuseumsandmusicperformancecenterisnomoreimportantthanrecreationalfacilities.Admittedly,artmuseumsandmusicperformanceisofgreatimportance.Confucius,greatestChinesephilosopher,commented,“Arthelpsapersongetsabetterlife.”Togotoartmuseumstoappreciatethoseartworksandtogothemusicperformancecentertolistentosymphonyhelppeoplegetimprovementinmentallife.Butitdoesnot