中考英语写作技巧指导2014年4月

初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导•认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步审健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork找出题目的关键词根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点•如何度假•调查报告•倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel写作第二步列•用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。•Alotofpeopletravel.•Somepeoplestayathome.•Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.•Afewpeoplework.•Enjoyyourvacation.列Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.aniceheadanicetailanicebody加•加首尾，使结构完整。•可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.•Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Thepeoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连•恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,notonly…butalso,neither…nor;2.表示选择:or,either…or;3.表示转折:but,however,although,though,afterall,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,not…but,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords;8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示强调:also,besides,what’smore,actually,infact,10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,关联词Let’spLaythegame.•_____Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.•Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert_____.•Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking.•_____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback._____,hesmiled.•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.•Accordingtoit,mostpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连•Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisoursurveyreport.•Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美美•选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：书面表达写作技巧审列加连美中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（1-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。书面表达•以“Ihaveadream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。•Sentencepatternsforreference(以下句型供参考）•Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…•Ienjoy/like/prefer…•Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…•Ifmydreamcomestrue…IhaveadreamHaveyoueverwatchedabikeracing?Theridersarecool!Yeah,it’smydreamtobeaprofessionalbikerider.IfellinlovewithbikeriderforthefirsttimeIrode.Sincethat,I’vebeenridingfor5years.Somepeoplethinkit’sdangerous,Idon’tthinkso.Duringabikeriding,youwillbeinahighspeedandfeelthewindrushesquickly.Exciting?Thatis!Tomakemydreamcometrue,I’llpracticemoreaftermiddleschool.Also,I’llwatchmorebikeracingtolearnfromtheriders.Ihopemydreamwillcometrue,ifso,IcanenjoythelifeIlikebest.PassageOneIhaveadreamAnybodyhasadream.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentdreams.Mostpeoplealwaysdreamtobepopularorrich.Butmydreamisveryspecial,Ijustwanttobeabird.WhyIhavesuchadream?JustbecauseIadmirethey’refree,theycandoeverythingtheywant.Whenthey’reflyinginthesky,theylookbeautiful,eventhey’rethemostbeautifulanimals.Ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky.However,Iknowitwon’tbeachievedanymore.It’sjustadream,inmyheart.PassageTwoPassageThreeIhaveadreamMydreamistobeabasketballplayer.IlikeitbecauseIthinkitveryinteresting.Itcanmakemebecomeveryhappyandhealthy.Tomakemedreamcometrue.Ineedtrytodoit.AndIneedtakesometimetodoit.Ineedpracticeeveryday.Ifmydreamcometrue,Iwillmorethytodoit.自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学生觉的好，有些学生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的刊物上，开头已经写好。Ididasurveyaboutwhethermiddleschoolstudentsshouldrun1500meterseveryday.Herearetheresults.观点原因你的观点赞同可以放松，更健康，帮助学习更好不赞同太累，跑步后上课不能集中注意力，想睡觉Allofushaveholidaysinourdailylife,buthowdopeoplespendtheirholiday?Wedidasurveyandherearetheresults.—fromCaiPiaoliIt’snothingbetterthanhavingarestafterworking!Sohowdopeoplerestthemselvesonvacation?Accordingtooursurvey,thereareseveralways.—fromZhangShiyiAllinall,differentpeoplehavedifferentwaystorelaxthemselves.ButIsuggestthatweshouldenjoytheholiday,thenwemayworkbetter.—fromLiuMiao