高考英语作文专题-求助信

高考作文满分练—求助信题型解读：在求助信中应开门见山，直截了当地把你遇到的难题或者困惑告诉对方，并向对方求助。应注意：（1）向别人征求意见，态度一定要诚恳，语气委婉；（2）把握时态：应用一般现在时表明目前自己存在的困难，用一般将来时描述自己得到帮助后的进步。写作思路满分词汇满分短语满分句型Para.1:点名身份+直接说明写信的求助目的bothertroublev.dosb.afavortakethetroubletodo...havetrouble/difficultyindoing…havenochoicebuttodo…turntosb.forhelp1.IamamiddleschoolstudentandI'mwritingtotellyoumyproblemwhichhastroubledme.2.I'mwritingtoyoutoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.3.I'mwonderingifyoucouldtakethetroubletohelpmewith…4.I'msorrytobotheryou,butIhavesomedifficultieshereandIneedyourhelp.5.Ihavesomedifficultyindoing…,whichbothersmealot.SoIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.Para.2:说明自己存在的困难、困惑并请求对方的帮助。言辞一定要礼貌得体confusedconfusingupsetworriedanxiousanxietyfitinwithwithothers=geonwellwithothersbeaccustomedtolongtoloseheart1.Iseemnottobeabletofitinwellwithothershere.2.Idon'tfeelquiteaccustomedtothelifehere.3.IlongtolearnEnglishwellbutIdon'tknowhow,whichmakesmeupset.4.Ican'tconcentrateonmylessonsthesedaysandIfailedinthelastexamwhichworriesmealot.5.Ioftenfeelleftoutinthisschool,andIdon'tknowhowithascomeabout.6.Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties,IhavetoturntoyouforhelpPara.3(客套话)情真意切表达期盼之情。timelyeagergratefulappreciaterequestaccountsb.wouldappreciateitif…take…intoconsideration/account.1.I'meagertogetyourtimelyhelp./I'meagerforyourtimelyhelp.2.Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucouldhelpme...3.I'dappreciateifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration/account.4.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldreallygive/lendmeahand.注意：作文的主体时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时偶尔穿插。满分模板：Dear__________(写信对象),Mynameis__________;I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavour.Ihavehadmuchdifficulty/troublein___________(交代自己面临的困难).Besides,I’mveryupsetthat___________（提出令自己苦恼的问题）.What’smore,Idon’tknow___________（进一步说明自己的困境）I’mwonderingifyoucouldbesokindasto_________sothat____________（再次请求对方的帮助）.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua优秀作文欣赏：题目1：（2016全国卷1）假如你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请和个人简历（resume）。给外教MsJenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯Sample:DearMsJenkins,I'mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.Inordertogainsomesocialexperienceandimprovemyworkability.I'mgoingtotakeapart-timejobduringthesummervacation.Sointerestedinthepositioninaforeign-capturedcompanyamIthatI’vealreadywrittenanapplicationletterandmyresumeallinEnglish.However,I’mafraidthattheremightbesomegrammarmistakesorinappropriateformatinthematerialsthatIprepared.Wouldyoubesokindastocorrectthemistakesandimprovetheformatoftheapplicationandresumeforme.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakethetroubletohelpme.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua题目2.假如你是李华，你家乡的梨花节(EwhaFestival)负有盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮忙润色。请根据提示用英语给Bob写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.求助事由；2.求助内容；3.表达感激注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Sample:Deerbob,I’mwritingtoyouinthehopethatyouwillbesokindastodomeafavor.WhenitcomestotheEwhaFestival.There'snodenyingthatitenjoysagreatreputationinmyhometown.I,foralongtime,havebeendesiringtowriteanappealingarticletomakeitbetterknown.However,onlywhenIputtheideaintopracticedidIfindmyEnglishfarfromsatisfying.AsfarasIknow,youhavesuchagoodcommandofwrittenEnglishasimpressesmealot.Therefore,I’mwonderingwhetheryoucouldtakethetroubletohavemydraftpolishedatyourconvenience.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua