诗歌翻译-translation-of-poetry

PoetryTranslationTranslationofLiteraryWritings—PoetryPoetryTranslationLanguageFeaturesofEnglishPoetryContents1TranslatabilityandUntranslatability2ReproductionofOriginalSoundinPoems3TranslationofPoeticImage4TheTranslationofAncientPoem5PoetryTranslationLanguageFeaturesofEnglishPoetry01partKindsofPoetryFootMetreTheRhymePoetryTranslation3)DramaticPoems（戏剧诗）2)NarrativePoems（叙事诗）1)LyricalPoems（抒情诗）1.KindsofPoetry（1）IntermsofcontentSongs（韵文)odes（颂诗）Elegy（挽诗）Epics(史诗)(heroicpoems)ballads（民谣）e.g.DivineComedy《神曲》Usuindialogue；inblankversePoetryTranslation（2）Intermsofmetre（韵律）:1)MetricalPoems（格律诗）RegularRhyme;RegularRhythm;DefiniteNumberofLines2)FreeVerse（自由诗）IrregularRhymeandRhythm;IrregularNumberofLines3)BlankVerse（无韵诗）WithoutRhyme;WithRhythmPoetryTranslation2.Foot（音步）——thenumberofintervals(间隔)withinalinedimeter（双音步）monometer（单音步）tetrameter（四音步）trimeter（三音步）pentameter（五音步）heptameter（七音步）hexameter（六音步）octometer（八音步）e.g.tetrameter（四音步）ThesunisnotabedwhenIAtnightuponmypillowlie.1234PoetryTranslationThesunisnotabedwhenIAtnightuponmypillowlie.3.Metre（格/韵律）1)Iambus（抑扬格）/IambicFoot（抑扬音步）抑/轻/非重读扬/重/重读——Thearrangementofunstressedandstressedsyllables(音节)抑扬抑扬PoetryTranslation2)Anapaest（抑抑扬格）Thestreamwillnotflow,andthehillwillnotrise,Andthecolourshaveallpassedawayfromhereyes抑抑扬3)Trochee（扬抑格）Shakeyourchainstoearthlikedew,Whichinsleephadfallenonyou-----Youaremany------theyarefew.扬抑PoetryTranslationa)Takeheruptenderly,Liftherwithcare;b)Thisisagallopingmeasureahopandatrotandagallop4)Dactyl（扬抑抑格）扬抑抑扬抑抑PoetryTranslation4.TheRhyme（押韵）Alliteration（头韵）Assonance（腹韵）Consonance（尾韵）timeandlightAtonceavoicearoseamong[wʌns][vɔɪs]1)InternalRhyme（行内韵）Pleasepickuptheprettypinkpillsforpalepeople.——Rhymeistherepetitionofthesameorsimilarsoundsoftenoccurringatsetintervals——repetitionwithinalinesPoetryTranslation2)EndRhyme（脚韵）IfallbetruethatIdothink,Therearefivereasonsweshoulddrink.Workwhileyouwork,andplaywhileyouplay,Forthatisthewaytobehappyandgay.Allthatyoudo,dowithyourmight,Thingsdonebyhalvesareneverdoneright.e.g.——repetitionoftheendingwordsoflinesPoetryTranslation3)RhymingScheme(押韵格式)c)aabb（连续韵）:Workwhileyouwork,andplaywhileyouplay,aForthatisthewaytobehappyandgay.aAllthatyoudo,dowithyourmight,bThingsdonebyhalvesareneverdoneright.bb)abab（交叉韵）:Howdoyouliketogoupinaswing.aUpintheairsoblue?bOh,IdothinkitthepleasantestthingaEverachildcando!ba)abba（首尾韵）Iholdittrue,whate’erbefall;aIfeelitwhenIsorrowmost;b’TisbettertohavelovedandlostbThannevertohavelovedatall.aPoetryTranslationTranslatabilityandUntranslatabilityofPoetry02partUntranslatabilityofpoetryTranslatabilityofpoetryPrinciplesofpoetrytranslationExamplePoetryTranslation1.UntranslatabilityofpoetryAsweallknow,ChineseandEnglishbelongtodifferentlanguagefamilies.ChinesebelongstotheSino-Tibetan,EnglishbelongstotheIndo-European.DifferencesbetweenChineseandEnglishareasfollows:•PhoneticsystemChineseistonallanguage,whileEnglishissyllabic（音节的）language.•WritingstructureTheyhavedifferentgrammaticalstructures.•Rhetoric（修辞手法）寻寻觅觅，冷冷清清，凄凄惨惨戚戚。——《声声慢》李清照PoetryTranslation1.UntranslatabilityofpoetryBesidesthedifferencesinlanguage,therearemanydifferencesincultures.•biblestory•ancientGreekmythology(神话）•Buddhistculture•geographyculture……PoetryTranslationInChineseculture,summermeanshot,passionate.WhiletheUnitedKingdomistypicaloceanicclimate,thusthesummerinShakespeare'spoetryislikeamoderateandbeautifulgirl.Anexampleofgeographyculturaldifference:ShallIcomparetheetoasummer'sday?Thouaremorelovelyandmoretemperate.——Shakespeare’ssonnet（十四行诗）我想将你比作迷人的夏日，可是你却比她更加可爱迷人。PoetryTranslation1.UntranslatabilityofpoetryTherefore,lotsofscholars,suchasZhuGuangqian,ShelleyandRobertFrost,holdtheopinionthatpoetrycan’tbetranslated,i.e.theuntranslatabilityofpoetry.PoetryTranslationPoetryTranslationOntheotherhand,manyscholarsbelievesthatitispossible,thoughquitedifficult,totranslatepoemssatisfactorilyandsuccessfully.Asamatteroffact,thereexistmanythingsincommonamongmen.•thethinkingpowertoreasonlogically•thefeelingstoexpressjoyorsorrow•liveinthesameworldregardlessofrace•……Asaconsequence,poetry,aproductofmind,isunderstandableandtranslatable.2.TranslatabilityofpoetryPoetryTranslationPoetryTranslationPoetrycallsforbeautyinform,soundandmeaning.Atranslatorshouldnotbesatisfiedwiththemereconveyingofconceptionandstyleintheoriginal,butmuststriveforthereproductionoftheoriginalbeauty.•Retaintheoriginalmeaningandemotion•Makethetranslationbearacertaindueform,rhythmandthyme3.PrinciplesofpoetrytranslationPoetryTranslationPoetryTranslation4.Example哎！希腊啊！希腊啊你本是和平时代的爱娇你本是战争时代的天骄撒芷波歌声高女诗人热情好更有那德罗士菲波士两神明荣光常照此地是艺术旧垒技术中潮即今在否？除却太阳光线万般没了——梁启超译PoetryTranslation•Beautyinform•Beautyinsense•BeautyinsoundTheislesofGreece,theislesofGreece!WhereburningSappholovedandsung,Wheregrewtheartsofwarandpeace,WhereDelosrose,andPhoebussprung!Eternalsummergildsthemyet,Butall,excepttheirsun,isset.——byLordByronPoetryTranslationReproductionofOriginalSoundinPoems03partRhythmandEndRhymeTranslationofReduplicatedWordsinClassicalChinesePoetryTranslationofOnomatopoeiaPoetryTranslation1.Rhy