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SupportingsentenceandEndingsentenceUnitSixStepOnePresentation1.Note-writing祝贺便条除了时间、称呼、结尾客套话和署名外还需有：1）对祝贺的反应2）祝贺行为3）对祝贺的评价和对对方的钦佩4）美好祝愿SampleMarch,30thDearTom,Iamratherpleasedtohearthatyouhavewonthemasterdegree.Pleaseacceptmyheartfeltcongratulations.Iknowyoureallydeserveit,foryouhavebeenworkingsohardinyourstudy.IamalwaysadmiringyourpersistencyandIhopeyouhaveabrightfuture.Sincerelycongratulationsagain.Yours,BearSomeusefulexpression:祝贺之事和自己的反应：I‘mhappytolearnthatyou’vejustpassedyourthesisdefense.I’msopleasedtohearthatyou’vegottheadmissionbytheCambridgeUniversitytofurtheryourgraduatestudy.Someusefulexpression:祝贺行为:Congratulationsonyoursuccess.I’dliketoexpressmywarmestcongratulationsonit.Pleaseacceptmywarmestcongratulations.Congratulationsuponhavingreceivedyourmaster’sdegreefromBeijingUniversity.Someusefulexpression:对成功的评价和对对方的钦佩:Youreallydeserveitbecause…Thismeantyearsofyourhardwork,andit’sanachievementyoucanwellbeproudof.Ihavebeenappreciatingyourexcellentperformanceinstudyandabilityinyourwork.Someusefulexpression:美好祝愿:Youwillhaveabrilliantfuture.Ibelieveourschoollifewillbemorecolorfulunderyourleadership.Ibelievethattheknowledgeyou’veacquiredwillenableyoutobesuccessfulinwhateveraspectoflife.StepOnePresentation2.Someinformationabouthomework问题解决型StructureIntroduction－problemBody－reasonsConclusion－solutionsSomeimportantexpression:Recently,theissue/problem/questionofyouthcrimehasbeenbroughtintofocus./hasbeenbroughttopublicattention./hasbeenposedamongpublicattention.Accordingtoarecentsurvey/report/study,_________.Therearemainlythreecausesofthisproblem-thenegativeeffectofmassmedia,increasingpressurefromsocietyandhighdivorcerates.Inthepastfewdecades/Inrecentyears,therehasbeenasharpincrease/adramaticdeclinein___.Accordingtoarecentsurvey/report/study,___.Theanswertotheproblem/issueinvolvesacoupleofcomplicatedreasons/factors,whichwillbeillustratedasfollows.Thus,asfarasIamconcerned,itisofimportanceforpeopletofindoutitscausesandascertainsomepossiblesolutionstoaddressit.Oneofthemostimportantreasonsfortheincreaseinjuveniledelinquencyliesinthenegativeinfluenceofcommercializedmassmedia.………Anotherfactorforthesignificantchangeinjuvenilecrimeistheincreasingnumberofsingle-parentfamilies.Finally,theincreasingpressurefrombotheducationandsocietygivesrisetotheyouthcrime.Confrontedwith……,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,……Foranother……Finally…….Alongwiththeawarenessoftheabovementionedreasonscomethefollowingmeasureswhichshouldbetakenimmediately.Thetoppriorityis……Anotherapproachis…..Finally,…..Onlyinthiswaycanwe……..Nouns：Solution,approach,measure,action,method,step,MeansModifiedadj.:effective,forceful,immediate,practicalVerbs:Solve,dealwith,copewith,handle,resolve,address,tackle,workoutReviewTopicSentence:OneDefinition:ThefocusoftheparagraphTwoParts:TopicandassertionThreeFeaturesofTopicSentence:CompleteNotTooBroadNotTwoNarrowTip:NeveraquestionFoursentencestructuresI.Supportingsentence1.DefinitionSupportingsentencescomeafterthetopicsentence,makingupthebodyoftheparagraph.Theygivedetailstodevelopandsupportthemainideaoftheparagraph.Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisements.Muchaswemayprideourselvesonourgoodtaste,wearenolongerfreetochoosethethingswewant,foradvertisingexertsasubtleinfluenceonus.Intheireffortstopersuadeustobuythisorthatproduct,advertisershavemadeaclosestudyofhumannatureandhaveclassifiedallourlittleweakness.该段落的第一句话就是主题句意思是广告影响每个人，第二和第三句都是扩展句对主题句进行展开说明。2.Requirements好的扩展句能使段落结构更加清晰，更具说服力。要写出好的扩展句，应该注意把握以下几点：1．清晰翔实，说服力强(避免写出与主题不相关的句子)扩展句是用来体现段落中心思想的，因此不可含糊其辞、言之无物，而要清晰翔实；同时扩展句是用来支持主题句的，所以要具有较强的说服力，能清楚有力地表达思想，不可只考虑篇幅、凑足字数草草了事。例如：ThereareseveralwaystoimproveourEnglishwritingskillsandkeepingadiaryinEnglishissurelyoneofthem.Comparedwithotherformsofwriting,itisshorterandtakeslesstime.MymotheradvisedmetowritediarywhenIwasveryyoung.ItcanhelpuscultivatethehabitofthinkinginEnglish.Ifwecankeepthispractice,wewillgraduallylearnhowtoexpressourselvesinEnglish.MymotheradvisedmetowritediarywhenIwasveryyoung.2．层次分明，逻辑清楚主题句和扩展句除了要保持意义的相关性以外，还要保持思想逻辑的连贯性。为了清楚地表达主题思想，扩展句必须条理分明、脉络清楚。所以在写扩展句时，要注意连接转折词语的使用，扩展句之间一般会有一定的逻辑关系，如因果、转折、递进等，这就要求使用连接词使句子之间连贯，逻辑清楚。无疑，逻辑清楚的文章便于阅卷理解，也是阅卷者判分的重要标准之一。TherearereasonswhyIliketofish．Ienjoythepullofabigfishattheotherendoftheline．Myenjoymentincreasesifthefishisinthedeepwatersofalake．Thehopeofcatchingabigoneluresmetothelesserknownpoolsandthecoolwatersnearsomehiddenrock．Ilikethequietundertheopenskyawayfromtheweekendcampersandvacationists．TherearethreereasonswhyIliketofish．First，Ienjoythepullofabigfishattheotherendoftheline．Moreover，myenjoymentincreasesifthefishisinthedeepwatersofalake．Second，thehopeofcatchingabigoneluresmetothelesserknownpoolsandthecoolwatersnearsomehiddenrock．Finally，Ilikethequietundertheopenskyawayfromtheweekendcampersandvacationists．Ofthethreereasons，Ipreferthelast．3．句式多变，节奏明快为了使段落灵活多样，扩展句除了要有说服力，逻辑清楚以外，还要有多变的句式，否则段落语言会显得单调呆板，语言水平低下。如长短句、简单句和复合句并用可以使段落具有节奏感。读起来才有活力，令人回味。可以混合使用简单句、并列句、复合