考研大作文指导及范文解析

大作文六、考研大作文框架结构：3段12句左右160-250词（英语二150-200词）5-7个关联词（适可而止）5-7个从句（多多益善）1、Introduction：第一段，提出问题，图画描述（图画作文）/图表描述（图表作文）/现状说明（情景或提纲作文），3句左右1）图画/图表描述：（1）Generaldescription：总体描述，人物+动作+环境或主题+对象+时间，1句（2）Details1,2,3：挖掘细节词，串联成句，1句（3）Caption/Symbolicmeaning：文字说明或象征寓意，1句2）现状说明：（1）Backgroundinformation：背景交代（2）Generaltalkofthetopic：引出主题（3）Thesis：Statespecificallywhatyouropinionis，确立论点2、Body：第二段，分析问题，意义阐释（图画作文）或原因列举（图表、提纲或情景作文），5句左右1）Topicsentence：Symbolicmeaning，主题句，象征寓意，1句2）Argument：论证，3句左右，考研写作四大论证手段（1）CauseandEffect：因果论证（2）Exemplification：举例论证A.Numerousexamplescanbegiven,butthis/thesewillsuffice.B.Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthanthefollowingone(s).C.This/Thesecase(s)effectivelyclarifythat…（3）联系现实：以小见大，把握象征寓意，个体想为群体，具体想为抽象（4）正反论证：3）Summary：小结，概括论证，总结本段，1句3、Conclusion：第三段，解决问题，建议措施/归纳结论，4句左右1）Concludingsentence：结论句，呼应象征寓意，1句2）Suggestions1、2：两点建议（针对双方提建议）或两句评论，2句3）包装结尾、展望未来：1句，考研写作三大优秀句型（1）倒装句：Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvethisproblem.只有这样我们才能解决这个问题。（2）强调句：Itispersistentworkthatisconducivetoyourgraspingaconsiderablevocabulary.只有长期学习才有助于你掌握大的词汇量。（3）虚拟语气：Itishightimethatwesolvedthisproblem.我们早就该解决这个问题了。七、大作文：1.伦理道德：冲刺班二十大必背范文之十一Directions:Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.Inthepictureaboveisanoldmantumbledontheroadaccidentally.Unfortunately,agreatmanypassers-byarehesitantaboutgivingtheoldmanahand.Seeingthat,nobodywouldliketoberesponsiblefortheaccident.Theabovepictureremindsmeoftherecentheateddiscussionaboutwhethertoassisttheseniorcitizenswhoaresuddenlysickorinjured.Suchdiscussionisashameforthesociety,forhelpingpeopleindistressshouldbeconsideredasthebasicsocialmoralityandtraditionalvirtue.Unfortunately,thedebateindeedbrokeoutafterseveralhelp-giversweresuccessivelyreportedtobefalselyidentifiedasoffendersandsentencedtopayeconomiccompensation.Duetothosecases,peopleworrythattheassistancerecipients,especiallyagedpeoplewithpoorjudgment,mayfailtotellrightfromwrongandhelpingthemwillprobablyincurtroubles.Thisthoughthaltspeople’sattempttohelpandhasindirectlymurderedsomeagedpeople.Severalmonthsago,anoldmandiedafterfallingbecausenobodydaredtoofferassistance.Suchtragedyshouldneverrecur.Toachieveit,firstly,helpingagedpeopleinneedshouldbeadvocated.Moreimportantly,effortsshouldbemadetoprotectthebenefitsofthosewhoprovidehelp.Onlyintheseways,canwebesurethat,ononehand,theelderlyreceivetimelyaidandontheotherhand,warm-heartedpeopleneversufferfromloss.Afterall,justasErnestHemingway,thegreatAmericanwritersaid,“Iknowonlythatwhatismoraliswhatyoufeelgoodafterandwhatisimmoraliswhatyoufeelbadafter”.(272words)2、图表作文：经济问题，2011年英语（二）真题，冲刺班二十大必背范文之十二Directions:Writeanessaybasedonthefollowingchart.Inyourwriting,youshould1)interpretthechartand2)giveyourcomments.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.WriteyouressayonANSWERSHEET2.(15points)2008、2009年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图（从左至右：国产品牌、日系品牌、美系品牌）ThechartabovedemonstratesclearlythatsomechangeshavetakenplaceintermsofthecarmarketofChina.Baseduponthedataofthechart,onecanseethatthepercentageofdomesticcarshasbeenonarise,whilethesalespercentageofcarsmadeinJapanhaswitnessedbeenonadecline.Intheyearof2008,thepercentageofcarsmadeinChinawasnearly25%,whilewithinnomorethanayear,itwentuptonearly33%.ThepercentageofcarsmadeinJapanwas35%,whileitwentdownto25%in2009.It’snodifficultyforustocomeupwithsomepossiblefactorstoaccountforthistrend.Atthetopofthelist,withtherapiddevelopmentofoureconomyandsociety,moreandmorepeopleprefercivilproductstoforeignones.It’sreportedthat,approximately55%offamiliesinChinesebigcitiesarefoundcarsmadeinChina.Inaddition,wemustadmitthatthegovernmentappealstoustosupportournativeindustries.Lastbutnottheleast,thefactcannotbeignoredthat,thecarsmadeinChinaareincreasinglyqualified.Takingintoaccountwhathasbeenargued,wecancometotheconclusionthatthisestablishedtrendispositiveandthereforeacceptable.AndIamfirmlycertainthatthistrendwillcontinueintheyearstocome.(232words)3、2000年真题：环境问题，冲刺班二十大必背范文之十三Directions:A.Studythefollowingtwopicturescarefullyandwriteanessayinatleast150words.B.YouressaymustbewrittenneatlyontheANSWERSHEET2.C.Youressayshouldmeettherequirementsbelow:1.Describethepictures.2.Deducethepurposeofthepainterofthepictures.3.Suggestcountermeasures.Asisvividly/symbolicallyshown/described/depicted/illustrated/revealed/portrayedinthecartoons/drawings/portrayals/photos/photographs/pictures,withtherapid/speedysocialandeconomicdevelopment,thenumberoffisheshassharplydecreased.Inonepicture,therewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyonefishing-boatin1900.Onthecontrary,in1995therewasonlyonefish,butmanyfishing-boats.Thepurpose/aimofthepicturesistoshowusthatdue/utmostattention/importance/significanceshould/must/hastobepaid/attachedtothedeclineofoceanresources.Owing/Dueto/Becauseofover-fishing,thenumberoffisheshasobviouslyshrunk.Ifweletthissituationgo/continueasitis,wedonotknowwherefishwillbeinthenear/forthcomingfuture.Bythattime,ourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.Therefore/Hence/Accordingly,itisimperative/necessaryforustotakedras