【写作素材】新高考概要写作“高级词汇”的运用——考试拿分就靠它

新高考概要写作“高级词汇”的运用——考试拿分就靠它高级词汇的运用应遵循以下几条原则：原则一：弃旧取新原则阅卷老师偏爱学得晚的单词，因为使用学得比较晚的单词，可以体现学生学以致用的意识。例如，表示美丽的形容词，同学们首先想到的是初中词汇beautiful，用高中词汇appealing，attractive，charming和fascinating等来替换beautiful，可以为书面表达提分不少。原则二：短语优先原则高考书面表达中，多使用词组和习语来代替一些单词可以起到增加文采的作用。例如，first可用tobegin/startwith替换；besides可以用inaddition和whatismore替换；consider可以用takesth.intoconsideration/account替换；remember可以用keepinmind替换。原则三：避免重复原则同学们要想写出一篇好的书面表达，就要尽量避免重复多次使用同一个简单的单词。例如，反复使用should，这时考生应该充分发散思维，灵活地运用短语besupposedto和hadbetter等进行替换。第1组：代替important的高级词汇〔简单〕Educationisveryimportant.〔高级〕Educationisofmuch/vital/greatimportance.〔简单〕Theworkhedoesisveryimportant.〔高级〕Theworkhedoesisabsolutelyvital.〔简单〕Abalanceddietisveryimportantforus.〔高级〕Abalanceddietisabsolutelyessentialforeveryone.〔简单〕Moneyistheonlythingthat’simportanttohim.〔高级〕Moneyistheonlythingthatmatterstohim.〔简单〕Firstimpressionsareveryimportant.〔高级〕Firstimpressionsreallydocount.〔简单〕Parentsareimportantinchildren’slearning.〔高级〕Parentsplayanimportantrole/partinchildren’slearning.〔简单〕Children’seducationisveryimportantforChineseparents.〔高级〕Chineseparentsattachmuchimportancetochildren’seducation.〔简单〕It’sveryimportantforparentstobehonestwiththeirchildren.〔高级〕It’sveryvital/essentialforparentstobehonestwiththeirchildren.第2组：代替good的高级词汇〔简单〕Heisagoodfootballplayer.〔高级〕Heisanamazingfootballplayer.〔简单〕Thisisaverygoodplace.〔高级〕Thisisafantasticplace,reallybeautiful.〔简单〕Theviewfrommybedroomwindowwasverygood.〔高级〕Theviewfrommybedroomwindowwasabsolutelybreathtaking.〔简单〕ThisisaverygoodopportunitytolearnaboutAmericanculture.〔高级〕ThisisauniqueopportunitytolearnaboutAmericanculture.〔简单〕Theschool'sexaminationresultswereverygood.〔高级〕Theschool'sexaminationresultswereveryimpressive.〔简单〕Thefoodwasverygoodandwehadawonderfulnight.〔高级〕Thefoodwassuperbandwehadawonderfulnight.（superb：杰出的，极好的）〔简单〕Thestaffaredoingagoodjob.〔高级〕Thestaffaredoingasplendidjob.（splendid：辉煌的，灿烂的，极好的）〔简单〕Ican'tstandhim,butmywifethinkshe’sverygood.〔高级〕Ican'tstandhim,butmywifethinkshe’smarvelous.（marvelous：非凡的，不可思议的）〔简单〕Youlookverygoodinthatdress.〔高级〕Youlookabsolutelygorgeousinthatdress!第3组：代替cause/make的高级词汇〔简单〕Hisactionscouldmakehimlosehisjob.〔高级〕Hisactionscouldleadtohimlosinghisjob.（leadtosbdoingsth：导致某人做某事）〔简单〕Theaccidentcausedtwopassengerstodie.〔高级〕Theaccidentresultedinthedeathoftwopassengers.〔简单〕Thereareseveralreasonsforthestrangephenomenon.〔高级〕Severalreasonsmayaccountforthestrangephenomenon.（accountfor：对……做出解释）〔简单〕Thefloodscausedthedeathsofoverahundredpeople.〔高级〕Thefloodswereresponsibleforthedeathsofoverahundredpeople.〔简单〕Dailyshavingcancauseanumberofskinproblems.〔高级〕Dailyshavingcangiverisetoanumberofskinproblems.（giveriseto：引起，导致）〔简单〕Wearestilldealingwithproblemscausedbyyourmistake.〔高级〕Wearestilldealingwithproblemsresultingfromyourmistake.第4组：代替becauseof的高级词汇〔简单〕We'vereachedourgoalbecauseofyourgreathelp.〔高级〕We'vereachedourgoal,thankstoyourgreathelp.〔简单〕Becausethemoneyisn’tenough,theprojectwillnotcontinuenextyear.〔高级〕Owingtoalackoffunds,theprojectwillnotcontinuenextyear.〔简单〕Becauseofthepilots'strike,allflightshavehadtobecancelled.〔高级〕Asaresultofthepilots'strike,allflightshavehadtobecancelled.〔简单〕Thefishesintheriverhavediedbecauseofwaterpollution.〔高级〕Thefishesintheriverhavediedasaconsequenceofwaterpollution.〔简单〕Therestaurant'ssuccesswasmainlybecauseofitsnewmanager.〔高级〕Therestaurant'ssuccesswasduelargelytoitsnewmanager.第5组：代替very的高级词汇〔简单〕Self-confidenceisveryimportanttooursuccess.〔高级〕Self-confidenceisabsolutelyvitaltooursuccess.〔简单〕Earthquakesareverydifficulttopredict.〔高级〕Earthquakesareextremelydifficulttopredict.〔简单〕Hismotherisaverysuccessfulpolitician.〔高级〕Hismotherisahighlysuccessfulpolitician.〔简单〕Hisattitudeisveryimportanttoitssuccess.〔高级〕Itssuccesswilldependtoalargeextentonhisattitude.（toalargeextent：在很大程度上）〔简单〕Shelooksverybeautifultonight.〔高级〕Shelooksextraordinarilybeautifultonight.（extraordinarily：非常，格外的）〔简单〕Conditionshaveimprovedalotoverthepastfewyears〔高级〕Conditionshaveimprovedconsiderablyoverthepastfewyears.（considerably：相当，非常）〔简单〕Raisingmoneyforthehomelesshasbeenverydifficult.〔高级〕Raisingmoneyforthehomelesshasbeenincrediblydifficult.（incredibly：难以置信地，很）第6组：表达“对……有好处”的高级词汇〔简单〕ThevisittoEuropeanuniversitieswillbegoodforus.〔高级〕WewillbenefitgreatlyfromthevisittoEuropeanuniversities.〔简单〕Weshouldworktogethertohelpthewholecommunity.〔高级〕Weshouldworkertogethertobenefitthewholecommunity.〔简单〕Abitmoreexercisewouldbegoodforyou.〔高级〕Abitmoreexercisewoulddoyougood.〔简单〕It'suselesstotellhim---hewon'tlisten.〔高级〕It'snogoodtellinghim---hewon'tlisten.〔简单〕Thesummercoursecanmakestudents’oralEnglishbecomebetter.〔高级〕Thesummercoursecanimprovestudents’oralEnglish.第7组：表达“对……坏处”的高级词汇〔简单〕Modernfarmingisverybadforthecountryside.〔高级〕Modernfarminghavedonemuchharmtothecountryside.〔简单〕Thesechemicalsisverybadfortheenvironment.〔高级〕Thesechemicalshavecausedseriousdamagetotheenvironment.〔简单〕Smokingcanbeverybadforyourhealth.〔高级〕Smokingcanseverelydamageyourhealth.〔简单〕Thefirewasverybadfortheschool.〔高级〕Theschoolwascompletelydestroyedinthefire.〔简单〕Alcoholanddrugswereverybadforhiscareer.〔高级〕Alcoholandd