新高考英语读后续写典例分析16-Different-Christmas

专题16新高考英语读后续写典例分析16新高考英语DifferentChristmas目录01表达积累02原文分析03续写扩展04续写赏析01表达积累表达积累1.一整天假期2.一只小手在擦我的脸3.与时间赛跑4.寻找礼物5.房间里充满了喜悦。thewholedayoffasmallhandrubbingmyfaceraceagainsttimehuntforgiftsDelightfloodedtheroom.表达积累6.空气柔和清新7.四周静悄悄的，没有一丝声响。8.她深深吸了一口秋日清爽的空气9.第一道晨光出现10.大雨正在猛浇房子Theairwasdelicatetherewasacomplete,absolutesilence.shebreathedinthecrispautumnairthefirstmorninglightstartedtoappearastormwasthrowingrainheavilyagainstthehouse.表达积累11.衣服被汗水浸湿了12.我的血沸腾了。13.他不想谈细节。14.凯特挣扎着站起来。15.自掘坟墓clothesweresoakedwithsweatMybloodboiled.Hedidn'tfeellikegoingintodetails.Katestruggledtoherfeet.digginghisowngrave表达积累16.脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容17.像雕像一样一动不动地坐着18.他感到耳朵发红了19.他感到一阵震惊20.船倒过来，半埋在土里。Abigsmilespreadacrossone'sface.satasstillasastatueHefelthisearsredden.HefeltajoltofastonishmentTheboatlayupsidedown,halfburiedinthedirt.02原文分析DifferentChristmasSeveralyearsago,IwaslivinginNewYorkandworkingforanairline,soInevergotbackhomeforChristmas.MyChristmaswashappytoowithsomeothercolleaguesaround.ButinmyheartIwassadbecauseIcouldn’tstaywithmyfamily.SometimesmycolleagueswouldsayourChristmaswasfilledwithtears.ButthisChristmaswasdifferent.Iwaslucky.Ihadthewholedayoff,whichmeantIcouldstaywithmyfamilyonChristmasEve.原文分析介绍往年圣诞我都缺席，今年我可以陪同家人。WhenChristmasmorningcame,Iawoketoasmallhandrubbingmyface.“Dad,MerryChristmas!”wasallmyyoungersonhadtimetosay.Heseemedtoberacingagainsttime.Iknewhewashuntingforgiftswithhisbrothereagerly.Igotdownstairsjusttoseethetwolittleboys’facesastheylookedatthepocketrocketsSantaClaushadleftthem.IrealizedthattherealChristmaswasforthechildrenwhohaddeepbeliefintheamazingpowerofSantaClaus.Atfirst,theirfingerswentalmostshylyovertheirtoys.Whentheirinspectionhadbeencompleted,thetwoboysensuredthatthegiftswerereallydeliveredbySantaClausandtheydraggedeverythingintothecenterofthelivingroom.原文分析圣诞节的情景。孩子们寻找圣诞老人给的礼物。Delightfloodedtheroom.Astheirmotherbegangivingoutgifts,Ismiledtomyself,wonderinghowmyunexpectedgiftsthisyearwouldbereceived.WithsomanyChristmasspentoutside,IhadpreparedsomanygiftsformychildrenandtogetherwithmywifeIhidtheminseveralsecretplaces.Butthechildrenwereexcellentdetectivesandtheyfoundallofthem.TheywerehappilyopeningpackagesconstantlythankingconsiderateSantaClausforhiskindnessandabilitytoknowtheirdesires.ButIhadnotreceivedasingleone.IknewtheyhadforgottenmyexistencewithmyabsencefromtheirChristmastheseyears.原文分析我准备了好多礼物给孩子们，但是自己没有一分礼物。Paragraph1：Ihadtoadmitthatmydisappointmentwasgrowingsteadily._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Suddenlymywifewalkeduptome._______________________________________________________________________原文分析没有礼物我挺难过的。下文应该是期待圣诞礼物的过程。希望谁能给我准备一个礼物。妻子向我走来。后面应该是妻子给我准备了一个特别的礼物。03续写扩展Paragraph1Paragraph1：Ihadtoadmitthatmydisappointmentwasgrowingsteadily.Iexpectedthegiftfrommyson…Hesharedhisgiftwithme…Istilldisappointed…Paragraph2Paragraph2：Suddenlymywifewalkeduptome.SheshowedmetheChristmastree…Ijustthoughtthattreewasbeautiful…Butunderthetreewasagiftforme…句子润色当我的小儿子跑来找我的时候，我在想是否能得到一份礼物，他真的很好，会顾全我的面子。IwaswonderingwhetherIcouldgetagiftwhenmyyoungersonrantome,whowasreallykindenoughto.savemyfaceIwaswonderingwhetherIcouldgetagiftwhenmyyoungersonrantome,andhewasreallykindenoughto.句子润色他让我欣赏他的礼物，他深信这是圣诞老人精心挑选的礼物。HeaskedmetoadmirehisgiftwhichhedeeplybelievedwascarefullychosenbySantaClaus.admirehisgiftdeeplybelievedwascarefullychosenby句子润色他高兴地说，他会分享他的一些礼物，让我从中挑选一个。sharesomeofthegiftsofhisHesaidhappilythathewouldsharesomeofthegiftsofhisandallowmetochooseonefromthem.句子润色我由衷地感谢他，仍然感到失望。fromthebottomofmyheartIthankedhimfromthebottomofmyheart,stillfeelingdisappointed.句子润色她似乎猜到了我的感受。ItseemedthatshehadguessedhowIfelt.Itseemedthat句子润色她让我看看装饰着这么多盒子的圣诞树。SheaskedmetolookattheChristmastreewhichwasdecoratedwithsomanyboxes.Bedecoratedwith句子润色我想她是在炫耀她在装饰上的努力，但她摘下一个小盒子，微笑着递给我，说这是给我的。Ithinkshewasshowingoffhereffortsonthedecorationbutshetookoffasmallboxandpassedittomesmilingandsayingitwasforme.showingoffTakeoff句子润色我打开它，看到一封信，上面写着。“我们永远不会忘记你。圣诞快乐！”Iopeneditandsawaletterwhichread.“Wewillneverforgetyou.MerryChristmas!”句子润色信下面放着一块表，它高兴地滴答作响。我感动得哭了。Undertheletterwasawatchwhichwasclickingwithdelight.Iwasmovedtotears.clickwithdelightTherewasawatchundertheletterwhichwasclickingwithdelight.Iwasmovedtotears.04续写赏析续写赏析Ihadtoadmitthatmydisappointmentwasgrowingsteadily.IwaswonderingwhetherIcouldgetagiftwhenmyyoungersonrantome,whowasreallykindenoughtosavemyface.HeaskedmetoadmirehisgiftwhichhedeeplybelievedwascarefullychosenbySantaClaus.Hesaidhappilythathewouldsharesomeofthegiftsofhisandallowmetochooseonefromthem.Ithankedhimfromthebottomofmyheart,stillfeelingdisappointed.高端句式续写赏析Suddenlymywifewalkeduptome.ItseemedthatshehadguessedhowIfelt.SheaskedmetolookattheChristmastreewhichwasdecoratedwithsomanyboxes.Ithinkshewasshowingoffhereffortsonthedecorationbutshetookoffasmallboxandpassedittomesmilingandsayingitwasforme.Iopeneditandsawaletterwhichread.“Wewillneverforgetyou.MerryChristmas!”Undertheletterwasawatchwhichwasclickingwithdelight.Iwasmovedtotears.倒装句的妙用作业1.积累细节描写的词汇和短语。2.摘抄默写本节课所有高级表达。