高中英语ModuleLifeintheFutureSectionⅤWriting想象类作文课件外研版

Section_ⅤWriting—_想象类作文一、写作要领想象类作文是作者根据已有的生活经验和知识，超越实际生活来勾画从未见过的或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章。写作时应注意以下几点：1．采用记叙文或说明文的形式，围绕主题来逐一列举所给要点；2．可采用第一人称或第三人称来叙述；3．时态以一般将来时为主。二、增分佳句1．文章开头常用句式：①SometimesIdreamaboutlifeinthefuture.②Iimaginelifeinthefuturefromtimetotime.③Iamcuriousaboutfuturelife.④Itisfascinatingtoimagelifeinthefuture.2．表达预测的常用句式：①Maybeinthefuturewecan...②Thereisapossibilitythathumanbeingswill...③Perhapssomepeoplewill...④Wewillbeliving...inthefuture.3．文章结尾常用句式：①Ibelievethedreamwillcometruesomeday.②Inmyopinion,thedreamwillbeturnedintorealityoneday.③AsfarasI'mconcerned,wewillrealizethedreamsoonerorlater.[题目要求]随着科技的发展，人们的生活发生了巨大的变化，人们对自己的未来充满了期待。请展开想象，以“AnOutlookonFuture”为题，描述一下将来人们工作、学习、生活三个方面的情景。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：本文为描写未来的；2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第人称；3．确定时态：主要以为主。二、构思1．首先说明未来生活在各方面都会有很大提高。2．然后逐一列出在智能机器人、高科技、环境、教育、旅游等方面具体的变化。3．最后总结未来生活难以预测，但对其充满了期待。说明文三一般将来时第二步：核心词汇想周全1．随着……的发展2．科技3．结果；因此4．有可能……5．成就6．在……的帮助下7．居住环境withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyasaresultbelikelytoachievementwiththehelpoflivingenvironment8．科学地9．摆脱，去除10．渴望，渴求11．总体上，总的来说12．过着……的生活13．确保，确定14．在太空中scientificallygetridofbethirstyforonthewholeleada...lifeforsureinspace第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．随着科技的发展，人们的生活发生了巨大的变化。(简单句)2．在电脑、机器人和其他高科技产品的帮助下，人们做的工作将会更少。(将来进行时)Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,ourlifehaschangedalot.Peoplewillbeworkinglesswiththehelpofcomputers,robotsandotherhi­techproducts.3．人们的居住环境会更干净，因为人们开始科学地处理垃圾。(getridof)4．人们重视保护环境。(stresstheimportanceof)5．每个渴求知识的人都可以受到高等教育，无论他们年轻还是年老。(whether...or...)Thelivingenvironmentwillbecleaner,becausepeoplebegintogetridofwastesmorescientifically.Peoplestresstheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Everyonewhoisthirstyforknowledgecanreceivehighereducation,whethertheyareyoungorold.6．总的来说，人们将过着幸福自由的生活，他们不仅可以在全世界旅游而且可以在宇宙中旅游。(and并列句；notonly...butalso...)7．未来是难以预测的。(主语＋be＋形容词＋todo)8．但是我们确切地知道先进的科技一定会给我们创造美好的未来。(advanced)Onthewhole,peoplewillleadahappyandfreelifeandtheycantravelnotonlyallovertheworldbutalsoinspace.Thefutureishardtopredict.Butweknowforsureadvancedscienceandtechnologywillshapeourbrightfuture.第四步：句式升级造亮点1．用分词作定语合并句3和句42．用让步状语从句合并句7和句8Thelivingenvironmentwillbecleaner,becausepeople，stressingtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment,begintogetridofwastesmorescientifically.Thoughthefutureishardtopredict,weknowforsureadvancedscienceandtechnologywillshapeourbrightfuture.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇AnOutlookonFutureWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,ourlifehaschangedalot.Asaresult,Ithinktherearelikelytobegreatachievementsineveryarea.Peoplewillbeworkinglesswiththehelpofcomputers,robotsandotherhi­techproducts.Thelivingenvironmentwillbecleaner,becausepeople,stressingtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment,begintogetridofwastesmorescientifically.Everyonewhoisthirstyforknowledgecanreceivehighereducation,whethertheyareyoungorold.Onthewhole,peoplewillleadahappyandfreelifeandtheycantravelnotonlyallovertheworldbutalsoinspace.Thoughthefutureishardtopredict,weknowforsureadvancedscienceandtechnologywillshapeourbrightfutureifweuseitproperly.