中考英语作文课件-ppt课件(完美版)

中考专题复习课Writing书面表达:是中考英语中的必考题，占卷面总分的12.5%，分值为15分。文章的形成过程：单词短语，结构+符号句子段落文章如何把这些组织一篇文章？分析文章的形成过程首先，我们必须在头脑中构成一幅mindmap.在map的帮助下，我们就能有效的到达我们的目的地。分析结构Mikeiscrazyaboutfootball!Heloveswatchingfootballmatches.Ofcourse,helovesplayingfootballtoo.Heoftenspendsaboutonehourplayingfootballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Hisparentsdon’tlikethisandhaveaskedhimtogohomebefore5.30.Hethinksitisimportantforhimtospendsometimeonhishobbies.Hewisheshisparentscouldgivehimtheirsupportforhishobbies.IntroductionMainbodyConclusionDiscussionHowtoWriteEnglishCompositions抄组集连抓审作文集句成段组段成篇审清题意连词成句抓住要点抄写规范Writingskills—sixsteps自从实施教育新政策，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇:makegooduseof,interestgroupssocialactivities,dosports,netbar不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游3.……看法我认为……建议（至少3条）1.合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组3.……Hello,everybody!It’stimeagainforourEnglishBroadcastingProgram.Today’stopicis“HowtoMakeBetterUseofOurSpareTime”._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第一步:审清题意认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息具体做法：用笔勾画自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏3.……看法我认为……建议（至少3条）1.合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组3.……注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数主题体裁人称结构时态字数已知信息未知信息以一般现在时为主第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！IntroductionMainbodyConclusionproblemsopinionssuggestionsWriteanoutline1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏3.------------1.合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组3.------1.Listsomekeywordsaboutproblems.Phrases:________________________________________________________________________2.Listsomekeywordsaboutopinions.Phrases:________________________________________________________________________3.Listsomekeywordsaboutsuggestions.Phrases:________________________________________________________________________第三步：抓住要点，列关键词1.Listsomekeywordsaboutproblems.spendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesbecrazyaboutplaycomputergameswatchtoomuchTVrefusetodohomework2.Listsomekeywordsaboutopinions.notgoodforourhealthandstudydoharmtofocusonPaymoreattentionto1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏......3.Listsomekeywordsaboutsuggestions.plantimecarefullyachieveabalancebetweenstudyandbobbiestakepartindifferentafter-schoolactivitiesjoininterestgroupsdosomesportsdosomehousework1.合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组spendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesrefusetodohomeworkwatchtoomuchTVbecrazyaboutplaycomputergamesWhat’sworse,1.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutproblems.sothatManystudentsspendmuchtimeontheirhobbiestheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.someofthemwatchtoomuchTV,othersstudentsoftengotothenetbarandarecrazyaboutplayingcomputergames.Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethanbefore.Butquiteanumberofstudentsdon’tknowhowtousethetimeproperly.Wedon’tthinkit’sgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.2.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutopinions.第四步：连词成句第五步：集句成段，组段成篇第五步：集句成段，组段成篇wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.cansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,andtakepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?ForexampleBesidesthese,AndalsoweWe注意添加主题句，连接词！plantimecarefullyachieveabalancebetweenstudyandbobbiestakepartindifferentafter-schoolactivitiesjoininterestgroupsdosomesportsdosomehousework3.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutsuggestions.Therearemanythingswecando.Howtogivethiswritinganend?Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourliferichandcolorful!Whynotputourfreetimetobetteruse?Itisagoodwaytohaveamorecolorfulfuture.范文展示Hello,everybody!It’stimeagainforourEnglishBroadcastingProgram.Today’stopicis“HowtoMakeBetterUseofOurSpareTime”.Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethanbefore.Butquiteanumberofstudentsdon’tknowhowtousethetimeproperly.Theyspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.AlsosomeofthemwatchtoomuchTV,What’sworse,somestudentsoftengotothenetbarandarecrazyaboutplayingcomputergames.Wedon’tthinkit’sgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?Therearemanythingswecando.Forexample,wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.Andalsowecansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.Besidesthese,wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourliferichandcolorful!howtowriteagoodcomposition开头:开门见山中间结尾:书面表达六步法（审-抓-连-集-组-抄）抓要点,列短语短语扩句找连接词连句成段与主题相呼应，紧扣主题1.压线2.斜度一致3.扁4.饱满5.间隔常见错误时态是否正确主谓是否一致要点是否全面人称是否正确语序是否有问题语言是否符合习惯固定短语是否恰当如今，中国掀起了广场舞(publicsquaredancing)热潮。对于这种现象，人们褒贬不一。请你根据下列提示写一篇短文，谈谈广场舞的利与弊，并提出解决措施。要求：1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；尽量运用本讲的重点句子。2．词数：80－100词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：遭受sufferfrom；音量volumeNowadays，publicsquaredancingisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Mostofthepublicsquaresarecrowdedwithdancers，especiallyinthemorningandeven