2020届高考英语二轮复习 疯狂专练十七 短文改错集训

疯狂专练十七短文改错集训假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。passage1Tina,14,ishard-workingstudent.Shestudieshard,followstherulesatschool,anddowhateverherparents,teachersandevenfriendtellhertodo.Sheseemstobeusedtosay“yes”toeverything.ButTinaisnotalwayshappyaboutthis.“Sometimesherfriendsinvitemetodosomethingtogether,butI’vegottheotherplansalready,”Tinasaid.“Andsometimespeopleasktoomuchfavorsfromme.Forexample,everydayastudentisindutytokeeptheclassroomclean,andthereisonegirlwhomalwayswantstochangeshifts(轮班)withme.Idon’tfeellikehelpingher,becauseIjustcannotsayno.”“IwishIcouldchange,”Tinathoughttoherself.passage2NoahWebster,ateacherwhichgraduatedfromYaleUniversityin1778,oncefoughtagainsttheBritishintheAmericanWarofIndependence.HefeltthatwritingEnglishinthenewlyindependentUnitedStatesshouldhavedistinctive“American”look.Hisfirstbook,TheElementarySpellingBook,suggestedsimplifythespellingofEnglishwords.Thebookwasextremepopular.Bythe1850sitwassellingonemillioncopiesayear,makingthemoneofthemostpopularschoolbooksever.What’smore,WebsterisbestknowforhisAmericanDictionaryoftheEnglishLanguage,whichfirstwasappearedin1828.Today,itwasstillthenumberonedictionariesforAmericanstudents.passage3OseolaMcCartyspentmorethan75yearswashingandironotherpeople’sclothes.Likealaundrywoman,shewaspaidonlyafewdollareachtime.Certainlynobodywouldconsiderherrich,buttheywereallamazedwhenMissMcCartydecidedtodonate$150,000totheUniversityofSouthernMississippi.Shecouldsavesuchlargeamountofmoneybecauseofshelivedaverysimplelife.Sheneverlearnedtodrive,andwhenshewantedtogosomewhere,shejustwalked.Sheneverfliestoanywheretillthedonation.Herdonationwasforstudentswhoclearneededfinancialhelp.Heleftschoolinthesixthgradeandnevergotmarriedorhadchildren.Shesaidtothereportersthattheideaofhelpingsomebody’schildgotocollegegavehermanypleasure.passage4OnJuly18,I,togetherwithmyparents,leaveforQinhuangdaoatsix,whichwereabout100kilometersaway.Asmyfatherwasnotfamiliarwiththeroute,soittookusoneandahalfhoursarrive.Wefirstwenttothebotanicalgarden,wheretherewerevariouslykindsofflowersandplants.Atteno’clock,wesetofftopayavisitfortheGreatWallinLaolongtou,wherewecouldseethesightsoftheBohaiSea.Touchingbythegreatbuilding,westayedontheGreatWalltoappreciateitforalongtime.Intheafternoon,wearrivedinYansaihu,whichsceneryimpressedmegreatly.Theyreturnedatfouro’clock,laughingandtalking.Tiredandhappy,wearrivedhomesafeandsound.passage5Simon’sfatherboughthimthenewbikethedaybeforeyesterday,whichmadehimveryexciting.Thenhebegantorideitfastontheroad.Seeingamangettingcloselytohim,Simoncouldn’tstopitandasaresult,heknockintotheman.Beingverykind,sothemandidn’tscoldhimatall.Instead,hetoldhimhowdangerouslyitwastorideabikesofast.Heaskedhimtokeepthelessoninmind.Simonfeltregretfulbutashamed.Hepromisedkeepthelessoninmindforever.Then,themanbentonandbegantorepairhisbike.Afterawhile,hegotthemrepaired.Simonwasgreatlymoved.Hethankedthemanandlefthappily.passage6Mygrandparentshadasmallfarm,thattheygrewcropsandvegetables.Theyalsoraiseddozenofhensandcocks,whichwerekept,inanareasurroundedbyafenceforprotect.However,therewerealwaysseveralchickensescapedthroughthefence,wanderingfreelyinthefields.Lastspring,Ivisitedtomygrandparents’farmandplaynearthewheatfield.SuddenlyIcaughtamazingsight:ahenwaswalkingpast,followingbyfivechicks!Nooneknewwhereandwhenthehenhatchedhislittlekids.Mygrandmawashappyandhurriedpreparedanewhomeforthemotherandthechildren.passage7Inrecentyears,thefishpopulationintheoceanhasbeenfacingwithaseveresituationwiththequantityoffishandtheirspeciesdropsharply.Itishumanbehaviorwhichistoblame.Industrialandagriculturewastesuchaschemicalsandoilispouredintotheocean.What’stheworse,overfishingdestroysthebalanceoflifeintheocean.Tohandlethissituation,thegovernmentshouldmakelawsbutpunishthosewhobreakthelaw.Besides,overfishingshouldbestrictbanned.Also,manyfishermancantakeotherjobssothattherehavelesspeoplelivingonfishing.Onlybytakingthesemeasuresweeventuallypreservefishingresources.passage1【答案】1.hard-working前加a2.do→does3.friend→friends4.say→saying5.her→my6.去掉theother的the7.much→many8.in→on9.whom→who10.because→but【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了好好女孩蒂娜的烦恼——不会拒绝别人。第一处：考查冠词。句意：14岁的蒂娜是一个勤奋的学生。student是可数名词，此处用不定冠词表泛指，故在hard-working前加a。第二处：考查主谓一致。句意：她努力学习，遵守学校的规定，做父母、老师甚至朋友让她做的任何事情。主语为“She”，谓语动词用第三人称单数，故do改为does。第三处：考查名词复数。句意同上，friend是可数名词，此处表示不止一个朋友，用可数名词复数表泛指，故friend改为friends。第四处：考查非谓语动词。句意：她似乎习惯于对一切都说“是”。beusedtodoing表示“习惯于做某事”，故say改为saying。第五处：考查代词。句意：蒂娜说：“有时我的朋友邀请我一起做些事情，但我已经有其他的计划了”。根据句意可知此处表示“我的”，故her改为my。第六处：考查theother与other的区别。句意同上，theother表示“两者中的另一个”，other表示“其他的”，故去掉other前的the。第七处：考查toomuch与toomany的区别。句意：有时人们向我要求太多的帮助。toomuch修饰不可数名词，toomany修饰可数名词复数，修饰的是“favors”，故much改为many。第八处：考查介词。句意：每天都有一个学生负责保持教室整洁，有一个女孩总是想和我换班。beonduty表示“值日”，故in改为on。答案与解析第九处：考查定语从句。句意同上，此处为定语从句，关系词指代先行词“onegirl”并在从句中作主语，故whom改为who。第十处：考查连词。句意：我不想帮她，但我就是不会拒绝。根据句意可知前后是转折而非因果关系，故because改为but。passage2【答案】1.which→that/who2.wr