2020版高中英语 Unit 4 Body language Section Ⅴ Writing课件

SectionⅤWriting——慰问信技法指导1.文体特点(1)慰问信是向对方表示关怀和慰问的信函。它是以组织或个人的名义向对方表示问候和关心的一种信函。(2)慰问信的格式和一般英文信件格式相同，要明确慰问信的对象。(3)明确文章结构：开头部分表明写慰问信的原因；主体，向对方的遭遇表示同情并鼓励对方或表达自己想帮助对方的愿望或具体措施；结尾，表示写信者的良好祝愿或同情之心。(4)语言要亲切、生动，感情要充沛、真挚。2．亮点句式(1)I'mshocked/sorrytohearthatyouareworriedaboutyourfigure/shape.听说你在为你的体型而忧虑，我感到很惊讶/抱歉。(2)I'mwritingtoexpressmydeepsympathy/careforyou.我给你写信来表达我对你的关心。(3)Iunderstandhowyoufeelnow./Iknowthewayyoufeelverywellnow.我理解你现在的感受。3．写作模板Dear××，I'msorrytoknowthat(问题).Thetruthiseveryonewillexperience________，soyoudon'thavetoworrysomuch.Herearethreeusefultips.First________(建议).Thisisagoodwayof________.Second,________(建议)...Lastbutnotleast,________.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical/useful/helpful.典题演练[2019·大连高一检测]假设你叫李华，是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信，提到自己偏胖，想节食减肥，征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信，谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下：1．健康的重要性；2.学生的任务；3.合理建议。注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2．词数：100左右。3．参考词汇：stateofmind心态4．不需要写题目。[谋篇][遣词]1．减肥2．多锻炼3．不健康的饮食习惯4．影响你正常的生活yournormallife5．保持一个健康的心态keepofmind6．克服困难loseweightget/takemoreexerciseunhealthyeatinghabitsaffect/influenceahealthystateovercomedifficulties[造句]1．完成句子(1)Younggirlshopetolookbeautiful.Itis.像你这个年龄的女孩希望看起来漂亮。这是很自然的。(2)Forastudent,studyingiswhileappearanceisthesecond.对一个学生来说，学习是最先考虑的而容貌是其次。atyouragenaturalthefirstthingtoconsider(3)todoitbygettingmoreexerciseandchangingunhealthyeatinghabits.通过多锻炼以及改变不健康的饮食习惯来减肥是一个好主意。(4)isthatyoukeepahealthystateofmind,asitwillhelpwithyourstudies,andwillalsohelpyouovercomedifficultiesindieting.最重要的是你要保持健康的心态，因为这有助于你的学习，而且有助于你克服节食中的困难。ItisagoodideaThemostimportantthing2．句式升级(5)合并(1)younggirlsatyouragehopetolookbeautiful.(6)用非限制性定语从句改写(4)Themostimportantthingisthatyoukeepahealthystateofmind,willhelpwithyourstudies,andwillalsohelpyouovercomedifficultiesindieting.Itisnaturalthatwhich[成篇]DearXiaoWang，Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyoumentionedthatyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【参考范文】DearXiaoWang，Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyoumentionedthatyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.Itisnaturalthatyounggirlsatyouragehopetolookbeautiful.However,inmyopinion,healthismoreimportantthanbeauty.Forastudent,studyingisthefirstthingtoconsiderwhileappearanceisthesecond.Sodonotletothers'opinionsaffectyournormallife.However,ifyoudowanttoloseweight,itisagoodideatodoitbygettingmoreexerciseandchangingunhealthyeatinghabits.Themostimportantthingisthatyoukeepahealthystateofmind,whichwillhelpwithyourstudies,andwillalsohelpyouovercomedifficultiesindieting.IhopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyouandI'mlookingforwardtoyournextletter.Yours，LiHua实战演练假定你是李华，从报纸上得知你的美国笔友James的家乡遭遇了飓风。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，给予关心和安慰。注意：1．词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJames，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua【参考范文】DearJames，Iwasgreatlyshockedtolearnthatahurricanetookplaceinyourhometownfromtoday'snewspaper.Iamwritingtoextendmydeepestsympathy.Itbrokemyhearttoseelotsofhomeshadbeendestroyedinthetragichurricane.Icanimaginehowdifficultthistimemustbeforyouandyourfamily.Butwherethere'slifethere'shope.Someorganisationsinmycountryarelaunchingvariouscampaignstocallonpeopletodonatemoneyinthehopethatyoucangothroughthedifficultiesassoonaspossible.Pleasepassmyconcernsontoyourparents.IfIcanbeofanyhelp,don'thesitatetoletmeknow.Yourssincerely，LiHua