2020版高考英语二轮复习 专题五 书面表达 第二节 庖公解牛 层层突破课件

专题五书面表达第二节庖公解牛层层突破增分方案1写好开头句——开门见山明意图Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。文章的开头应当做到新颖、吸引人、感染人。英语写作的特点是开门见山，用简洁的语言、恰当的句式引出文章的主题，使读者清楚文章要表达的主题。一、赏析近三年全国卷写作范文的开头模式1.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅱ)AreyouexcitedaboutourcomingvolleyballgameagainstYucaiMiddleSchoolnextFriday?2．(2019·高考全国卷Ⅲ)I'mdelightedtoinformyouthatthisyear'smusicfestivalwillbeheldshortly.3．(2018·高考全国卷Ⅰ)I'mdelightedtoknowyouareinvitedtoadinnerpartybyyourChinesefriend.4.(2018·高考全国卷Ⅱ)AnEnglishshortfilmcalledGrowingTogetherwillbeshownintheschoolhallat7：30pm.5．(2018·高考全国卷Ⅲ)I'mgladtohearfromyou.Inyourletteryouaskedmeaboutthesportsinourschool.6．(2017·高考全国卷Ⅰ)IamverydelightedtoknowyouareinterestedinTangPoems.NowI'mwritingtotellyoutheplanforthenextclass.7．(2017·高考全国卷Ⅱ)I'mLiHua.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheChinesepapercuttingexhibition.8．(2017·高考全国卷Ⅲ)Howiseverythinggoing？Ihavegoodnewstotellyouthatourschool'sTableTennisTeamisadmittingnewmembers.二、可套用的两个黄金句式在书信写作中我们可用I'mwritingtodosth.来表示目的；用I'dliketodosth.来表示叙述。求职信可说：I'mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.../Learningfrom...,I'dliketoapplyfortheposition...咨询信可说：I'mwritingtoinquire/askforsomeinformationabout...感谢信可说：I'mwritingtoexpressmythanksfor.../I'dliketoconveymyheartfeltthankstoyoufor...建议信可说：I'mwritingtoexpressmyviewconcerning...投诉信可说：I'mwritingtocomplainabout...道歉信可说：I'mwritingtomakeanapologytoyoufor...邀请信可说：I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabout.../Wouldyouliketo...?增分方案2组好中间段——层峦叠嶂显功底技巧一精准选词，妙笔生花(一)选用高级词汇“四原则”1．具体性原则在具备一定词汇量的条件下，具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起读者的共鸣。例如：当描述一个具体的事物或人时，类似anice/goodman的表达让人感觉很空洞，我们可以用有个性的、具体的词描绘一个人，如kindhearted(好心的)；generous(慷慨的；大方的)；easygoing(随和的)等。再如：Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedagoodatmosphere.→Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.2．新颖性原则写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbedifficult.→Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbechallenging.3．短语优先原则多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。Developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant.→Developingagoodhabitisalsoofimportance.4．避免重复原则尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches.→Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches.(二)高级词汇积累50例1．(突然)想到think→occurto2．意识到realize→beawareof/that3．应该should→besupposedto4．机会chance→opportunity5．选择choice→alternative6．考虑consider→take...intoaccount/consideration7．最终finally→eventually8．勤奋的hardworking→diligent9．分发handout→distribute10．后果result→consequence11．决定decide→makeupone'smind12．理解understand→makesenseof/figureout13．可用的usable→available14．使用use→employ/makeuseof15．帮助某人helpsb.→dosb.afavor16．种类繁多的allkindsof→awiderangeof17．和and→aswellas18．反对beagainst→objectto19．厌烦beboredwith→befedupwith20．忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with21．发生happen→comeabout22．提高improve→promote23．重要的important→vital24．立即immediately→inaflash25．参加join→participate26．巨大的large→enormous27．有意义的meaningful→rewarding28．许多many→alargequantityof29．明显的obvious→apparent30．合适的proper→appropriate31．丰富的rich→abundant32．事实truth→thecase33．走了/读了walk/read→cover34．有助于behelpful→contributeto35．想到thinkof→comeupwith36．留出save→setaside37．经常usually→moreoftenthannot38．很，十分very→morethan39．大多数most→themajorityof40．参加takepartin→participatein/getinvolvedin41．重要beimportant→count/matter42．与……不同bedifferentfrom→differ/varyfrom43．渴望做……beeagertodo→bedyingtodo/longtodo/haveadesiretodo44．因为becauseof→onaccountof45．因……而闻名befamousfor→haveareputationfor46．记住remember→keep...inmind47．越来越多moreandmore→anincreasingnumberof48．感到舒心feelcomfortable→feelatease49．成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit50．临近near→around/roundthecorner技巧二句式丰富，表述地道1．肯定不如双否好(1)IntheneighborhoodI'mfamous.→Intheneighborhoodthereisnobodywhodoesnotknowme.(2)Webelievethathewillsucceedincarryingouttheexperiment.→Wedon'tdoubtthathewillsucceedincarryingouttheexperiment.(3)Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.→Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.2．陈述不如倒装妙(1)Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary.(地点状语置于句首)(2)Onlybytakingexercisecanwekeephealthy.(“only＋介词短语”置于句首)(3)Badlyinjuredashewas,hemanagedtotakedownthecar'snumber.(形容词＋as＋主语＋...)3．主动不如被动巧Wecanborrowfivebooksatmostatatime,andwecankeepthemfortendays.→Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.4．非谓(语)结构不可少(1)Beingastudent,I'dliketoknowthepriceforstudents.(2)Tomaketheclassgosmoothly,youaresupposedtoknowaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.(3)Facedwithdifficulties,weneedfriendstogiveuscomfortandhelp.(4)TheexhibitionwillbeheldintheCityMuseum,locatedinthenorthofourcity.(5)Ourclasscameupwiththeideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials.5．各类从句要善用(1)Ifyouareinterestedinit,letmeknowandI'llsendyoumoreinformation.(条件状语从句)(2)Though/Although/Whileregularexerciseisveryimportant,it'sneveragoodideatoexercisetooclosetobedtime.(让步状语从句)(3)FromthisexperienceIhavelearnedthatquestioningcanserveasabridgethathelpsustoseekthetruth.(宾语从句；定语从句)(4)Lastbutnotleast,everyonewillbehappyifpraised,whichisthecommonpositiveemotionthateverybodylikestoshare.(定语从句)(5)“Youcan'tjudgeabookbyitscover，”astheoldsayinggoes.(定语从句)(6)MyquestionhowIshallgetintouchwithhimhasnotbeenanswered.(同位语从句)(7)WhatIwanttostressisthatIhavealreadybeenavolunteerfort