2019年高中英语 Module 2 Fantasy Literature Section Ⅴ Wr

Section_ⅤWriting—_如何写科幻故事科幻故事是开放式作文的一种，一般给出一段材料，要求我们充分发挥想象力来拓展原材料内容，运用逻辑推理的方法，沿着材料的纵横方向延伸，给故事添加开头、结尾或中间过程。想象必须合理而且内容丰富，要抓住主题，运用恰当的词汇、句型与语句间的连接成分写出连贯的表达，语言要流畅、具有美感。一、写作流程写科幻故事需要遵循以下步骤：1．仔细审题，确定文章结构科幻故事的写作一般可分为三部分：第一部分为故事的开始；第二部分为故事发展的过程及结果；最后一部分提出故事的教育意义。2．根据需要确定时态科幻故事通常是发生在过去，因此应以一般过去时为主。3．筛选词汇科幻故事一般为虚构的故事，要求语言比较夸张，为了吸引读者，故事的语言要生动、富于虚幻性。二、增分佳句(一)科幻故事的开端1．Onceuponatime,therelivedaking.很久以前，有一位国王。2．Withscienceandtechnologydeveloping,ourliveshavechangedalotinthe21stcentury.随着科技的发展，21世纪我们的生活发生了很大改变。(二)科幻故事的发展和高潮1．Theringsuddenlybegantospeak,whichmadethebraveyoungmanveryamazed.戒指突然开始说话了，这使得这位勇敢的年轻人很惊异。2．NoonelikedtotalktoWilbur,aweakpig,exceptaspidernamedCharlotte,whotreatedWilburashergoodfriend.除了蜘蛛夏绿蒂，没有人喜欢和身体虚弱的小猪韦尔伯说话，夏绿蒂把韦尔伯当作她的好朋友。3．In2146,weareflyingintheair,conveyingsignalsthroughourminds.在2146年，我们在空中飞翔，用意识传递信息。(三)科幻故事的结局Theyfinallydefeatedtheevilwitch,livingahappylife.他们最终战胜了邪恶的女巫，过上了幸福的生活。[题目要求]某英文报社正在举行英文科幻故事大赛，请你根据所给出的故事的开头(不计入总词数)，续写一篇100词左右的科幻小故事参赛。Onceuponatime,ayoungmanwaswalkingthroughawoodwhenhesawashiningringlyingontheground.Hejuststood,wonderingandthentheringsaid,“Youngman,akindgirlistrappedbyawitchinthecastleahead.Ifyouarebraveenoughtorescueher,youwillgainhappiness.PutonmeandIwillhelpyou.”第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：科幻故事属范畴；2．确定人称：主体为；3．确定时态：以为主。二、构思第一部分为故事的开始。第二部分为故事发展的过程。最后一部分提出故事的结果。记叙文第三人称一般过去时第二步：核心词汇想周全1．犹豫做……2．把……戴上3．看不见的4．向……走去5．接近，靠近6．用咒符镇住7．在……的帮助下8．使消失9．和……一起10．打败hesitatetodo...put...oninvisibleheadforapproachputaspellonwiththehelpof...removetogetherwithdefeat第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．年轻人没有犹豫，戴上了这枚戒指。(简单句)2．他吃惊地发现自己消失了，其他人都看不见他。(that宾语从句)3．他感到更有自信了，向前面的城堡走去。(简单句)Theyoungmandidn'thesitateandputtheringonhisfinger.Surprisingly,hediscoveredthathedisappearedandwasinvisibletootherpeople.Hefeltmoreconfidentandheadedforthecastleahead.4．一靠近城堡，他就戴上了戒指，进入了城堡。(assoonas)5．最终他找到了那个女孩，她被女巫施了魔咒。(“介词＋关系代词”定语从句)6．他了解到除非有人将女巫的魔棒(magicalclub)毁掉，否则女孩永远不能动。(unless条件状语从句)Assoonasheapproachedthecastle,heputontheringandenteredthecastle.Eventually,hefoundthegirl,onwhomthewitchhadputaspell.Helearnedthat,unlesssomeonedestroyedthewitch'smagicalclub,thegirlcouldn'tmoveforever.7．在戒指的帮助下，他在一个金盒中找到了魔棒。并成功地将其毁掉，解除了女巫对女孩施的魔咒。(and连接多个并列动词)8．这个年轻人和女孩一起打败了女巫，他们幸福地生活在一起。(简单句)Withthehelpofthering,hefoundthemagicalclubinagoldenbox,destroyeditsuccessfully,andremovedthespellputonthegirlbythewitch.Theyoungman,togetherwiththegirl,defeatedthewitch,andtheylivedahappylifetogether.第四步：句式升级造亮点1．将句1和句2合并成用动词­ing形式作状语的句子2．用on＋动词­ing形式改写句4Theyoungmandidn'thesitatetoputtheringonhisfinger,surprisinglydiscoveringthathedisappeared,invisibletootherpeople.Onapproachingthecastle,heputonthering,andenteredthecastle.3．用动词­ing形式作状语改写句7Withthehelpofthering,hefoundthemagicalclubinagoldenbox,anddestroyeditsuccessfully,thusremovingthespellputonthegirlbythewitch.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Onceuponatime,ayoungmanwaswalkingthroughawoodwhenhesawashiningringlyingontheground.Hejuststood,wonderingandthentheringsaid,“Youngman,akindgirlistrappedbyawitchinthecastleahead.Ifyouarebraveenoughtorescueher,youwillgainhappiness.PutonmeandIwillhelpyou.”Theyoungmandidn'thesitatetoputtheringonhisfinger,surprisinglydiscoveringthathedisappeared,invisibletootherpeople.Hefeltmoreconfidentandheadedforthecastleahead.Onapproachingthecastle,heputonthering,andenteredthecastle.Eventually,hefoundthegirl,onwhomthewitchhadputaspell.Helearnedthat,unlesssomeonedestroyedthewitch'smagicalclub,thegirlcouldn'tmoveforever.Withthehelpofthering,hefoundthemagicalclubinagoldenbox,anddestroyeditsuccessfully,thusremovingthespellputonthegirlbythewitch.Theyoungman,togetherwiththegirl,defeatedthewitch,andtheylivedahappylifetogether.