2019-2020学年新教材高中英语 Unit 5 Into the wild Section Ⅳ课

SectionⅣWritingPeoplewhohavetheskillstogetbackupfromafallwillengageinsmarterrisksandmorecourageousbehavioursthanpeoplewhodon't.—BreneBrown有能力从跌倒中爬起来的人会比那些没有能力的人进行更明智的冒险和更勇敢的行为。——布芮尼·布朗(研究教授)题目要求：据报道，藏羚羊(Tibetanantelope)因遭到非法捕杀而濒临灭绝，总数从1990年的100万只锐减到现在不足10万只。假设你是李华，现请用英语给中国野生动物保护协会CWCA(ChinaWildlifeConservationAssociation)的会长写一封建议信。内容应包括：1．简述藏羚羊的现状；2．陈述原因(取羊皮获利等)；3．提出你的建议(加大宣传力度、增加资金、选派志愿者等)。注意：1.词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数(可根据内容需要适当增加细节)。DearPresident，I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstofurtherprotecttheofTibetanantelopes.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely，LiHua[背诵范文]DearPresident，I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstofurtherprotecttheofTibetanantelopes.Asisoftenreported,toomanyTibetanantelopesarebeinghuntedandkilledillegallyfortheirfur,fromwhichtheillegalhunterscanmakegreatprofits.Asaresult,thenumberoftheTibetanantelopesisdecreasingrapidlyfromabout1,000，000in1990tolessthan100,000atpresent.Immediatemeasuresmustbetakentoimprovethepresentsituation.Firstly,theimportanceofprotectingtheTibetanantelopesshouldbepromoted.Secondly,wouldyouprovidemoremoneyfortheconservationoftheTibetanantelopes?Lastbutnotleast,IsuggestthatsomevolunteersbesenttheretohelpprotecttheTibetanantelopes.ThesearemysuggestionsandIhopetheycouldmeansomethingforabetterfutureoftheTibetanantelopes.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely，LiHua[高分亮点]1．本文作为一封建议信，格式正确，行文连贯，其中提建议的部分使用了firstly,secondly,lastbutnotleast等进行分条，使文章条理清晰。2．作者写作功底深厚，对语言的掌控力较强，全文有多处用词生动形象，表意恰当充分，如decreaserapidly,from...to,immediatemeasures,improve,promote等。3．文中多处使用被动句，为文章增色不少，如arebeinghuntedandkilled,mustbetaken,shouldbepromoted,besentthere等。4．全文使用了很多高级句式，如定语从句“Asisoftenreported”“fromwhichtheillegalhunterscanmakegreatprofits”，suggest引导的宾语从句中的虚拟语气，Ihope后跟宾语从句等。[通技法——学写作规范]本单元的写作要求是描写动物。关于动物的体裁有三种形式：1.说明文：介绍某种动物，可从动物体型、习性、特点等方面展开；2．议论文：动物与人类的关系以及如何保护动物；克隆动物的利和弊；3．应用文：建议信(如何保护动物；写信投诉人类对动物的伤害)，保护动物的演讲稿及倡议信等；保护动物的文章常常是首先说明现状，比如数量减少，分析造成的原因，然后提出一些可行建议。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章一、说明缘由和背景的句式1．I'mwritingtosaysomethingabout...andgivesomesuggestionstoimprove...2．Asisknowntoall,thenumberof...isreducingforthefollowingreasons.3．Therearemanyreasonsaccountingforthat.4．Manyhuntershuntandkillanimalsillegallyfortheirskinsandfurinordertomakeprofits.5．Asaresult,thehabitatsofthemareonthedecrease.6．Theyarebecomingendangeredanimalsasaresultof...二、提出建议的句式1．First,thepublicshouldbeeducatedtoraisetheawarenessofprotectinganimals...Besides,effectivemeasuresmustbetakento...2．It'stimetodo...3．Itishightimethat...4．Itisagoodideatodo...5．Weshallsparenoefforttodo...三、表达愿望的句式1．Iwouldbegratefulifyoucantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.2．Ithinkitnecessarytocallonallpeopleto...3．Ifeveryoneofuscancontributealittle,itwillmakeadifferenceto...4．Onlyinthiswaycan...[即时练——靓句带你飞]完成句子1．Thereareatpresent,sohowtoprotectthemhasbecomeourtoptask.目前，濒危动物越来越多，因此如何保护它们成为我们的首要任务。2．What'sworse,moreandmorewildanimalsbecauseofvariousreasons.更糟的是，由于各种原因，越来越多的野生动物正处于巨大的危险中。moreandmoreendangeredanimalsareingreatdanger3．Notonlybutalsoendangersthelivingenvironmentofhumanbeings.这种行为不仅破坏了自然平衡，而且也使人类居住环境陷入危险。4．Itissuggestedthatpeopleshouldofprotectinganimals.建议人们应当意识到保护动物的重要性。5．Onlyifwehumanbeingswildanimalsbepreserved.只有我们人类采取有效的措施野生动物才能得到保护。doesthebehaviourbreakthebalanceofnaturebeawareoftheimportancetakesomeeffectivemeasurescan