2019-2020学年高中英语 Module 1 Deep South Section Ⅴ Writ

Module1DeepSouthSectionⅤWriting——如何介绍旅游景点写作技法指导[文体指导]介绍一个旅游景点，就是对其大致状况进行描述，向人们展示该地方的地貌特征、风土人情、历史文化等。写此类文章应注意以下几点：1．内容一般包括该地方的位置、面积、人口、历史、气候、特产等。也可以适当地融入人文风貌，简单介绍当地的文化遗址、民间风俗及有趣的生活方式等。但是一定要抓住该地方的主要特色，这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。2．要遵循一定的写作顺序。描述该地方的位置时，首先要找好中心点，再由近及远，也可以先整体后局部，或按照一定时间层次或空间层次。描述时可以适当使用过渡性连接词。3．可以适当运用比喻句式。形象的比喻可以给读者展示一幅生动的画面。[亮点句式]1．belocated/situatedin；liein...；besurroundedby...；beborderedon；thenorthby；totheeastof2．Itcoversanareaofabout/over...squarekilometres；Itsareais...squarekilometres.3．Ithasapopulationofabout/over...；Itspopulationis...4．Ithasahistoryofabout...years.5．Theclimateispleasant.Theaveragetemperatureis...；Thecoldestmonthsare...6．befamous/well­knownas/for...；berichin(mineralresourcesincluding...)满分佳作构建[写作任务]假设某英语报社正在举办以“地球母亲大家说”为主题的征文比赛。请你根据以下要点，写一篇介绍南极洲的英语短文，向该报社投稿。内容包括：1．位于地球的最南端，面积约1400万平方公里，几乎占地球陆地面积的1/10；2．它是世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖；3．冬天很长，从四月持续到十月；4．植物很少，但有许多有名的动物像企鹅、鲸等。5．它的自然资源很丰富，有铁、煤等；6．目前只有一些科学工作者居住在那里。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[审题谋篇]体裁说明文时态一般现在时主题介绍南极洲人称第三人称结构第一段：介绍南极洲的地理位置和面积；第二段：介绍南极洲的气候、生物、自然资源以及利用情况。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接模块词汇1．n．南极洲2．adj.极端的，极度的3．适应4．形成；组成AntarcticaextremeadapttomakeupⅡ.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1．南极洲是位于地球最南端的一个洲。Antarcticaisacontinenttheearth.2．它占地面积约1400万平方公里，几乎占地球陆地面积的1/10。Itabout14millionsquarekilometersandmakesupalmostonetenthoftheworld'stotallandarea.coversanareaofintheextremesouthof3．它是世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖。Antarcticaisthecoldestcontinentonearthand________________________________________．4．它太寒冷了，很少有植物生长。It'sveryfewplantscangrowthere.socoldthatiscoveredwithiceandsnowalltheyearround5．它有许多有名的动物像企鹅、鲸等，它们已经适应了极端状况。Ithasmanywellknownanimalssuchaspenguins,whales,whichhave___________________________．6．它的自然资源很丰富，有铁、煤等。Itmineralresourcesincludingiron,coalandsoon.isrichinadaptedtoitsextremeconditions(二)句式升级1．用现在分词短语作状语改写2句2．用含有定语从句的复合句改写3句Itcoversanareaofabout14millionsquarekilometers,makingupalmostonetenthoftheworld'stotallandarea.Antarcticaisthecoldestcontinentonearth,whichiscoveredwithiceandsnowalltheyearround.[妙笔成篇]【参考范文】Antarcticaisacontinentintheextremesouthoftheearth.Itcoversanareaofabout14millionsquarekilometers,makingupalmostonetenthoftheworld'stotallandarea.Antarcticaisthecoldestcontinentonearth,whichiscoveredwithiceandsnowalltheyearround.Itswinterisverylong,whichlastsfromApriltoOctober.It'ssocoldthatveryfewplantscangrowthere.Butithasmanywellknownanimalssuchaspenguins,whales,whichhaveadaptedtoitsextremeconditions.What'smore,itisrichinmineralresourcesincludingiron,coalandsoon.Uptonowonlysomevisitingscientistslivethere.Maybeonedaylotsofhouseholdswilllivethere.[读后续写]阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ApiginthefamilyIwasayoungveterinary(兽医的)studentwhohadbeenaskedtomaketheroundsofthelocalfarmsoneweekintheabsenceofmyboss，Dr.Johnson.Mostoftheweekwasuneventful;Isawtheusualhorsevaccinations(接种疫苗)，spraineddogpaws，andsickcows.However，whenIgottoMacPherson'sfarm，Isawsomethingextraordinary．WhileIwastalkingtoMacPherson，apigcamewalkingaroundthecornerofthebarn.Whatwasextraordinaryaboutitwasthatthepighadthreeartificiallegs!IaskedMacPhersonaboutthiscuriousanimal.Whywouldanybodygiveapigevenoneartificialleg，muchlessthree?Hedrawled(慢吞吞地说)，“Wow，thisisn'tanordinarypig.Letmetellyou.OnedayIwasworkingonmyfarm，andIjumpedoffthetractortocheckthetire，whichwaskindofwobbly(摇晃的)．Wouldn'tyouknowit，thetractorstartedtorollofitsownaccord，andtrappedmerightthereunderthewheel.JustthenoldPinky—thepig，sawwhathadhappenedandhurriedbacktothehouseandfastenedhisteethinmywife'sdress，andwouldn'tletgountilhedraggedherouttowhereIwaslying，andthenshegotthetractoroffme.That'sasmartpig—mylifesaver，I'dsay.”Iwasquiteimpressed.Iknewpigswereprettyintelligent，butIhadneverheardofapigdoinganythinglikethat.“That'samazing．”Isaid，“Butthatstilldoesn'texplainthethreeartificiallimbs.”注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。“Wow，letmetellyouaboutanothertime，”MacPhersonsaid.“Mysonwasdownattheswimmingpooloverthereacouplesummersago“Wow，lastyeartheoldfarmhouseburneddown，”thefarmercontinued.【参考范文】“Wow，letmetellyouaboutanothertime，”MacPhersonsaid.“Mysonwasdownattheswimmingpooloverthereacouplesummersago，andbecausemysonhadjustlearnedswimming，helosthisbalanceinthewater，somehow.Heyelledoutforhelp，butmywifeandIwereinthehousewatchingTV.Fortunately，Pinkyheardmysoncallingforhelp.Thepigranquicklytomyhouseandhititsheadonthefrontdoor.Thenoisewassoloudthatwehurriedoutandheardmysonwascryingforhelp.”IwasverymovedbyMacPherson'sstory.“Unbelievable！”Iexclaimed.“Buttheartificiallegs...”“Wow，lastyeartheoldfarmhouseburneddown，”thefarmercontinued.“Ithappenedatmidnightinacoldwinter.Wewereallasleepwhenthebigfireswallowedourhouse.Pinkywokeupandkeptrunningandscreamingintheyard.Justbeforetheroofcollapsed，wewerewokenupbythepig'snoise.Thankstoitshelp，otherwise，weallwouldhavelostourlives.Unfortunately，whenthepigwasrunningintheyard，itsthreelegsgotstuckinthedrainandwerebadlyhurt.Sowegotitthreeartificiallegs．”