（新课标）2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 4 Earthquakes Section Ⅴ

[文体感知]新闻报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。[写作规范][题目要求]星光中学(XingguangHighSchool)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1．时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(DaqingMountain)；2．活动的过程；3．你对于这次活动的评论。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题谋篇一、审题1．体裁：________；2．话题：________；3．人称：________；4．时态：叙述事件用___________；评论用___________。二、构思第一段：点出活动的时间、地点、人物和目的；第二段：描写活动的过程；第三段：谈谈对活动的认识。记叙文报道活动第三人称一般过去时一般现在时第二步：词汇推敲1．____________________参加户外运动2．____________动身去某地3．____________情绪高涨4．____________落在后面5．____________________对……很有益处6．________________________________组织爬山活动7．________________享受新鲜空气8．________________接近大自然takeoutdoorexercisesetoffforinhighspiritsfallbehindbeofgreatbenefittoorganizeamountain­climbingactivityenjoyfreshairgetclosetonature第三步：句式锻造1．为了鼓励同学们参加户外运动，我们学校于4月10日组织了登山活动。____________________________________________________,ourschoolorganizedamountain­climbingactivityonApril10.2．我们几百个人参加了这项活动。Hundredsofus____________thisactivity.3．有些人落后了。Some____________.Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercisetookpartinfellbehind4．其他的人愿意来提供帮助。Otherswouldcomeand________.5．我们沐浴在阳光下。Wewere________sunshine.6．我们高兴得欢呼跳跃。Wejumpedandcheered________.offerhelpbathedinwithjoy7.这不仅让我们接近了大自然，从沉重的学业中得以放松，也增强了我们的友谊。Itnotonlygotus________natureandgaveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.closeto第四步：句式升级8．用定语从句合并1、2句。Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain­climbingactivityonApril10,____________________________.9．用when合并3、4句。________________________________________________.10．用非谓语动词合并5、6句。________________,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.11．用倒装句改写第7句。________________usclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.whichhundredsofustookpartinWhensomefellbehind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelpBathedinsunshineNotonlydiditget第五步：妙笔成篇______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：Inordertoencouragestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain­climbingactivityonApril10,whichhundredsofustookpartin.Itwasafineday.At8am,wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMountainandsetoffforthetopinhighspirits.Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Whensomefellbehind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreachedthetop.Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.Theactivityisofgreatbenefittous.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,butalsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime![写作提升]假设你是李华，是校英文报“环球实事”栏目组的小编辑，日本港口城市熊本发生了连续的地震，请根据下列要点写一篇报道。1．地震的基本信息：前震：2017年4月14日晚上21点26分；震源深度11千米。主震：2017年4月16日凌晨1点25分；震源深度10千米。2．伤亡情况：至少40人死亡、上千人受伤、大量建筑倒塌起火、许多人搬出他们的家。3．祝愿灾区早日重建。注意：1．词数：100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词汇：熊本市Kumamoto前震foreshock主震mainshock答案：TheKumamotoearthquakesareaseriesofearthquakes,includingamainshockwhichstruckat01：25amonApril16,2017,atadepthofabout10km,andaforeshockearthquakeat9：26pmonApril14,2017,atadepthofabout11km.Thetwoearthquakeskilledatleast40peopleandmorethanonethousandpeoplegotinjured.Withsomanybuildingsfallingdownandcatchingfire,agreatnumberofpeoplehavemovedoutoftheirhomes.Wehopethatpeopleinthedisasterareacanleadanormallifeandhavetheirbeautifulhomesrebuiltsoon.[增分佳句]1．陈述事实常用的句型：(1)Aterriblestormhit/struckJapan.强风暴袭击了日本。(2)Itwasacoolautumnnightwhentheaccidenthappened.事故发生在一个凉爽的秋夜。(3)Withthehelpoftherescueteam,peoplewhoweretrappedinthefloodweresaved.在救援队的帮助下，困在洪水中的人们得救了。2．陈述观点常用的句型：Clearly/Obviously/Inmyopinion/Itseemedthatpeoplewereshocked.显然/在我看来/似乎人们震惊了。3．揭示原因常用的句型：Becauseof/Asaresultof/Thankstothehelpofthearmy,peoplewhogotinjuredweresenttothehospitalimmediately.因为/幸亏有军队的帮助，受伤的人们被立即送往医院。4．总结全文常用的句型：Inaword/Todrawaconclusion/Ibelievewewillbuildanewcity.总之/我相信我们将重建一个新城。