（新课标）2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 1 Friendship Section Ⅴ W

1SectionⅤWriting—如何写建议信[写作规范][题目要求]假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封100词左右的信。1．要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2．要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3．友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。第一步：审题谋篇1．体裁：书信；2．话题：向好友提建议；3．时态：一般现在时为主；4．人称：第二人称。5．结构第一段：点出写信的目的；第二段：列出所提的建议；最后一段：写出写信人的希望。第二步：词汇推敲1．交朋友makefriends2．做……有困难havetrouble/difficulty(in)doing...3．做朋友beafriend4．和……同甘共苦sharehappinessandsorrowwith...5．需要callfor/need第三步：句式锻造1．知道你在交友方面有麻烦我很难过。Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtrouble/difficulty(in)makingfriends.2．如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种处境很容易。Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.3．想要交朋友，首先要做一个朋友。Ifyouwanttomakefriends,youshouldbeafriendfirst.4．你要和朋友同甘共苦。Youshouldsharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend.5．患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。2Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.6．友谊需要时间和投入。Friendshipcallsfor/needstimeandeffort.第四步：句式升级7．用whynot改写句3。Ifyouwanttomakefriends,whynotbeafriendfirst?8．用would'titbeagoodideaif...改写句4。Wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?9．用justasasayinggoes来丰富句5。Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.第五步：妙笔成篇(注意使用however,tobeginwith,inaddition,lastbutnotleast等关联词)参考答案：DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends?Inaddition，wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes，afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast,wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyouputyourheartintomakingfriends?Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours，LiHua[写作提升]假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你给他写一封回信。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．开头和结尾已给出；33．词数100左右。DearPeter，I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua参考答案：DearPeter，I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.①Hereareafewsuggestions.②First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.③Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,youcanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.④Yours，LiHua亮点点评：①文章首句点明写信的原因，并表达自己的观点，开门见山。②引出下文。③该句是一个复合句，其中as引导的是原因状语从句。④文章结尾暗含盼望回复并表示期望，言简意赅。[题型分析]建议信是书信的一种，是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文本。注意事项：1．建议信一般由开头、正文和结尾三部分构成。2．建议信开头要做到开门见山，直接点出写信的目的。3．正文一般要给出2～3条建议，可以利用适当的过渡词让正文结构更有层次性，从而引出所给的建议。44．使用“希望这些建议会很有用”来结尾，简短有力。[增分佳句]1．建议信开头常用句式：(1)I'msorry(that)youarehavingtrouble/difficulty/problemsinmakingfriends.很遗憾听说你在交友方面有麻烦/困难/问题。(2)Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你目前在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。(3)I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。2.表达建议常用句式：(1)First(ly),whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothisyoucanmakefriends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部呢？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。(2)Second(ly),youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway,youwillfeelbetter.其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。(3)Third(ly),itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis,youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。(4)Lastbutnotleast,youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最后同样重要的，你应该先和她谈一谈。(5)AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion,youshouldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。3．建议信结尾常用句式：(1)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.希望你会发现这些办法有用。(2)Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldconsidermysuggestion.如果你考虑我的建议我将不胜感激。5(3)I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.盼望早日收到你的答复。