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1三、读写任务类——说明文典例请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。1.Theotherday,anetizen(网民)sharedaphotoonSinaWeibo.Itwasaboutanoldladystandinginfrontofacarthatwasonabicyclelane,andinsistingthatitleavethetrack.Thephotodrewabout7,000commentsonthesocialmediaplatform.Despitethethumbs-up(点赞)giventotheoldlady,somearguedthatattentionshouldbepaidtoourheavyroadtraffic.2.Someridersofe-bikesandbicyclescomeandgoinalldirections,ignoringtrafficlightsandothervehicles.Suchruderidingcontributestothedisorderoftraffic.Thustheavoidableroadaccidentsbecomeunavoidable.写作内容1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2.结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的满分作文Thetrafficissueisahardnuttocrack.Itnotonlyaffectsoureverydaylife,butmayalsothreatenpeople’slives.Threeselectionspresentedabovearetypicalexamples.Quiteafewthingsgiverisetothetrafficproblems.Inspiteofthelarge-scaleconstructionofroadsandhighways,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement,becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears.What’sworse,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.Infact,trafficrulesarepartoftherulesandregulationscloselyrelatedtop阅卷老师点评1.本文在高级词汇的使用,过渡词句的运用,以及句式结构的多样化等方面做得非常到位。要点齐全,层次分明,过渡自然,结构紧凑。2.范文严格按照“三步走”的格局:第一段用30词(不含标点)概括了所给材料,得益于使用了notonly...butalso...这一经典句型。第二段分析了导致交通问题的原因,使用了giveriseto,large-scaleconstructionof,theincreasingnumberof,(be)vitalto等高级词汇,同时what’sworse衔接2主要原因;3.根据你的分析,从社会规范(rulesandregulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。ublicorder.Withoutthem,peoplecouldnotenjoyharmonyorthecountrywouldbeinchaos.Butrulesalonedon’tsecureanorderlysociety.Itisthepeoplewhoobeytherulesthatmatter.Itiseverybody’sdutytoobservethemtokeepoursocietyinorderandgoingontherighttrack.词的恰当使用使该段条理清晰。3.第三段句型多样,使用了without虚拟语气,itis...that...强调句型,itisone’sdutytodosth.等句型,为文章增色不少。一、说明文的概括技巧说明文通常会有明确的主题句,先抓住关键词,并根据各段落的主题,有序地组织语言,完整表达出文章的中心内容。如果是分析型说明文,概括时要找出文章所说明的现象、产生该现象的原因及解决问题的方法或建议,然后用自己的话重组信息点。概括时要找出:1.文章说明的是什么现象?2.造成这种现象的原因是什么?3.解决这种现象或问题的措施或建议是什么?二、说明文读写任务类常用句型1.Thisarticledealswith/discusses/analyzes/stronglyemphasizestheimpactof...2.Thisarticlenotonlydescribes...butalsosuggests...3.Thisarticlecomparesthedisadvantages/benefitsof...andsummarizeskeyfindings...4.Thisarticlegivesanaccountof/providesananalysisof/providesamethodof...5.Thisarticleshows/tellsusthat...6.Theauthorfindsitnecessaryto.../Thepurposeofthereportistoshowthat...7.Theauthorholdstheideathat...,givingitanexampleofsb.who...8.Theauthorstronglyemphasizesthebenefitsofgettingupearlysuchas...9.Thisarticlepointsoutthecommonphenomenon,which...(补充解释)3XueZhaofeng,aprofessorfromPekingUniversity,reportedlyhasmorethan170,000subscriberstohisonlineteachingcourseandcouldbemakingabout35millionyuan($5.3million)ayear.Xueisonlyoneamongthehundredsofonlineteachersmakingmillionsofyuanamonth.AccordingtoiResearch,anagencyspecializinginInternetdatacollection,theonlineeducationmarketwasworth156billionyuanbytheendoflastyear,anditisexpectedtoreach260billionyuanby2019.Onlineeducationhasalsofoundmentioninthisyear’sCentralGovernmentWorkReport,whichPremierLiKeqiangdeliveredtotheannualNationalPeople’sCongress.Wecanthusconcludethatonlineeducationnotonlyhashugeeconomicpotential,butitalsoenjoysgovernmentsupport.Onlineeducationisnotwithoutproblems,though.Someonline“educators”areextremelypopularyettheyhardlyteachstudentsanythinguseful.Worse,thereishardlyanysupervisionofonlineeducationagencies.AChinaCentralTVreportonNov17saidquiteahighpercentageofsuchagenciesarebeingoperatedwithouttheeducationbureaus’acknowledgement.写作内容1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120个单词阐述网络课程流行的原因以及你对网络课程健康发展的建议。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。参考范文Withtheavailabilityofricheducationalresources,onlineeducationisbecomingincreasinglypopular,bringingonlineteachersandagenciesalargefortune.However,onlineeducationhascausedsomeproblemsworthpayingattentionto.Therearemanyreasonsaccountingforitspopularity.Nowadays,4Chineseparentsattachgreatimportancetoeducation,willingtopayforextracoursestoensuretheirchildren’sacademicsuccess.Besides,itisconvenientforstudentstogetaccesstoonlinecoursesandfollowtheirownpaceofstudy.Thusonlineeducationalsohelpspeoplesavetimeandmoney.Frommypointofview,onlineeducationisawiseoption,butessentialmeasuresshouldbetakentoguaranteeitshealthydevelopment.Educationauthoritiesshouldstrictlyregulatethenationalstandards.Moreover,onlineteachersandagenciesareexpectedtoofferqualityeducation.Aboveall,studentsshouldrealize,nomatterhowusefulonlineeducationis,itcannotcompletelyreplaceschooleducation.
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