（江苏专版）2020版高考英语大二轮复习 专题5 书面表达 第一节 写作技能点拨 三 增加细节的5大

1三、增加细节的5大策略在英语书面表达中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容，否则很有可能造成内容不充实、字数要求不达标或者结构不连贯。适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。微技能(一)列举具体的实例进行补充说明1.我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.→Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample，wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags，refusetousesingle-useproducts，plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.2.我要花一些时间和父母待在一起。I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents，chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.3.我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.→I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible，wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.4.我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。I’mahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch.→Iamahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch，especiallyoutdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime，I’llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.题组过关1根据括号内提示完成句子1.TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.Wecannotonlyreadnewsfromhomeandabroad(我们不仅能阅读国内外的新闻)，butalsogetinformation，sendemailsandattendonlineschools.2.LauraisastandardAmericanstyle.ShespeaksperfectAmericanEnglish(她说一口完美的美式英语)，andthat’swhyIamcrazyabouther.3.However，itseemspeopleareunawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexam2ple，manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontoface-to-facecommunication(比如，很多人开始越来越不重视面对面的交流).4.However，everycoinhastwosides，sodoestheInternet.Forexample，beinglostintheInternetmayaffectourstudyandwork(比如，沉溺于因特网也许会影响我们的学习和工作).微技能(二)增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容1.我有时去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Thewaterintheriverwasveryclear.(背景渲染)→Weatherpermitting，Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相关背景)2.我发现了一些不良行为。Ifoundsomebadbehavior.→Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall；somepeopleplayedsocceronthelawnandsomepeoplethrewrubbisheverywhere.(相关行为描述)3.晚饭后，这位男士走向了卧室。Aftersupper，themanwenttohisbedroom.→Afterarichmeal，thefatmanslowlymadehiswaytohisbedroom.(神态、动作)题组过关2根据括号内提示完成句子5.Consideringtheactivityisofgreatvalue/ismeaningful(考虑到这项活动很有意义)，weintendtodesignauniformsuitedtoourownclass.6.I’lltrymybesttomakeyourunclehappyhere.Iameagerlylookingforwardtohisvisittoourcity(我热切地期盼着他来我们城市参观).7.Manyteenagersdon’tpayanyattentiontotheirhealth，especiallyduringtheholiday.TheyspendtoomuchtimewatchingTV(他们花费太多的时间看电视)，playinggamesandchattingontheInternetallnight.8.LookingbacktomystayinBritain，Ifeltveryhappyandsatisfied(我感到非常高兴和满意).9.Inthesummervacation，Iamlongingtoget/haveapart-timejob(我渴望得到一份兼职工作).微技能(三)增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容1.我要和父母一起去超市购物。I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.→I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwon’tbebackuntilabo3ut5∶00intheafternoon.(增加时间)2.我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。Ihavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.→IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.(增加地点)题组过关3根据括号内提示完成句子10.YaoMing，whowasborninShanghaionSeptember12,1980(1980年9月12日出生于上海)，startedplayingfortheShanghaiSharksasateenager.11.TheChineseSilkRoad，whichstartsfromtoday’sXi’anandfinallyfinishesattheeastcoastof(起源于今天的西安，并最后达到……的东海岸)theMediterranean，iswell-knowntotheworld.12.TodayIpaidavisittooneofthegreatestcitiesinAsia，BeijinginChina(在亚洲，中国的北京).13.Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthecitythemoment/immediately/assoonas/directly(一……就……)Iarrivedhereat6o’clockinthemorningbyplane.微技能(四)适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的、地点等内容1.假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要点写一封回信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。1.休息；2.读书；3.参加社会活动。(1)Ineedagoodrest.I’lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse，I’lldosomereadingforfun，andforknowledgeaswell.(因果关系)(2)I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.→IfIhavefreetime，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)→Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)→Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(结果状语)2.Tracy来电话：咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)见面取消。Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.→Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehadsomethingimportanttodo.(原因状语)3.帮助邻居的孩子们补习英语。IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.4→IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy，theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.(增添结果)题组过关4根据括号内提示完成句子14.TombSweepingDay，oneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals(传统的中国节日之一)，usuallyfallsaroundApril5everyyeartohonorthedeadandsatisfytheirancestors.15.Withtheglobalclimatebecomingwarmerandwarmer(伴随着全球气候变得越来越暖和)，ourearthisfacedwithgreatthreat.16.Situated/Locatedinnortheast(坐落在东北部)，Beijingiswell-knownforitsculturalrelicswhichhavebeenthereforalonghistory.17.Duringthisperiod，peoplewillgotocleanthegravesandpayrespecttotheirancestors，carryingfoodandfruit(带上食物和水果).18.Beingaseniorschoolstudent(作为一名高中生)，it’severyone’sdutytodosomethingtosaveourearth.19.Asisknowntoall/Aseveryoneknows(众所周知)，EarthHourisan