开放作文--沟通

Honorroll1.翟怿94.522116.52.赵雨彤87251153.吴悠8425.5109.54.刘宛琪77251025.陈润泽7821.599.5Honorroll1.徐然9223.5115.52.张一阳77.527104.53.张璐79241034.李征65.523.5895.吴睿婧671986开放作文之沟通交流篇•立意：合作中的沟通交流很必要合作三思而后行做事要有计划、方向•描图：木匠carpenter锤子n.；锤v.hammer钉子n.；钉v.nail长椅bench•解、议图：1.不幸的是，他们只管自己的事情，不和搭档交流。2.正如大家所知，合作很重要；但合作中的沟通更重要。3.没有沟通的合作是无力的。4.合作需要有效的交流。如果没有的话，我们会盲目地做事情。5.否则的话，所有的努力都会白费，正如图中的工人一样。1.不幸的是，他们只管自己的事情，不和搭档交流。Unfortunately,theymindtheirownbusinesswithoutcommunicatingwitheachother.2.正如大家所知，合作很重要；但合作中的沟通更重要。Asweallknow,cooperationisofgreatimportance;butthenegotiationincooperationcountsmore.3.没有沟通的合作是无力的。Cooperationwithoutnegotiationispowerless.4.合作需要有效的交流。如果没有的话，我们会盲目地做事情。Cooperationneedseffectivecommunication,withoutwhichwewilldothingsblindlylikethetwoworkersinthepicture.5.否则的话，所有的努力都会白费，正如图中的工人一样。Otherwisealltheeffortswillbemadeinvain,justlikewhatthetwoworkersdointhepicture.主旨句要明确！Sample1及格文•Inthepicture,Icanseetwoworkersaretryingtomakeabench.Bothofthemareworkinghard,sweatingalot.Butobviouslytheyarenailingthelegsondifferentsides.•Seeingthepicture,Ican’thelpthinkinghowridiculousitis.Itconveysthemessagethateffectivecommunicationisveryimportantincooperation.Justasisshowninthepicture,theyworkasateamandbothofthemdomaketheirefforts.Butunfortunatelytheymindtheirownbusinesswithoutcommunicatingwitheachother.Cooperationneedseffectivecommunication,withoutwhichwewilldothingsblindly.•Sobeforetakingactions,planthingscarefullyandcommunicatewellwithyourpartners.Otherwisealltheeffortswillbeinvain,justlikewhatthetwomendointhepicture.Sample2优秀文（6班张一阳）•Asisshownvividlyinthepicture,twomenaretryingtorepairawoodenbenchwiththeirfulleststrength.However,whatappearstobeprettyabsurdisthattheyarehammeringthelegsinoppositedirections.Obviously,theireffortsarelikelytobemadeinvain.•Inmyownperspective,thepicturetriestoconveythemessagethatweshouldlearntocooperatewithothers.Therearesurelylotsoftasksthatcannotbecompletedbyourselves,thereforefailingtoachievemanygoalsmaybethetragicconsequenceifwecan’tcooperatewithourteam-matesproperly.•Fromthispicture,Ithinkwecansafelyarriveattheconclusionthatlearningtocooperatewithothersisofgreatimportanceonourwaystosuccess.Inaword,wisemenalwaysknowhowtomakethebestuseofothers’powertogainwhathewants.