高考-概要写作---2017.11-maggie

概要写作Summarywriting高考新题型Asummaryisashortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth,notthedetails《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》读者在正确理解文章的基础上,在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。Itisabrief,thoroughandobjectiverestatementofthemainideaandkeypointsofalongercomposition.01Whatisasummary?•a60-wordsummary•useyourownwords•inthethirdperson•withabriefsentence•connectionbetweensentences(句子衔接)02RequestsofSummaryWriting概要写作评分标准第五档（21–25points）：1.理解准确，涵盖所有要点2.准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇3.完全使用自己的语言。(60-80W)4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要结构紧凑contents(内容)languageskills(语言)structure(结构)TheelementsofanargumentationArgumentationastrongstatementofopinionsupportfortheopinionconclusion/suggestionstopicsentencessupportingsentencesthepurposeofthepassage1.shutdown2.fine3.complain4.overcharge5.threaten6.staff6.checkout7.netizens8.due9.relevant10.standby11.investigate12.authority13.Illegal14.severelyShutdownClosedownfinemakesbbesurethat…complainhandicappedattempttrytodosththenandthererightawayRecently,awildfishrestaurantwasorderedtoshutdownInHarbin,northeastChina’sHeilongjiangProvince.Asaresult,theowneroftherestaurantfacedafineof500,000yuan.ChenYan,atouristfromChangzhou,eastChina’sJiangSuProvince,complainedonlineonFebruary12thathewasovercharged10,000yuanforthreebigfishatalocalwildfishrestaurantinSongbeiDistrictofHarbin.Worsestill,heclaimedthathisfamilymemberswerebeatenandthreatenedbytherestaurantstaffwhenthehequestionedthebillatthecheckout.Chen’scomplaintimmediatelyspreadonChina’ssocialmedia.Theinvestigationshowedthattherestauranthadnofault,sincetheyhadalreadytagged(标签)theprice,whichraiseddoubtamongnetizensagain.Furtherinvestigationshowedthatonetypeofthefishserved,Huso,wasnottherealwildspecies,butakindoffarmedfishatamuchlowerprice.Sincethepricesofthefishdidhaveviolatedtherightsofconsumers,therestaurantgotitsduepunishment.Meanwhile,relevantgovernmentdepartmentsthathavestoodbythesideoftherestaurantinthefirstplacewouldalsobeinvestigatedandpunished.Similarcasesoffraudulent(欺骗)pricingatscenicspotshavealsoreportedelsewhereinChina.InOctober2015,forinstance,atouristwasoverchargedforacourseofshrimp(虾)InthecoastalcityofQingdao,eastChina'概要写作难点1•Howtogetthekeypointsquicklyandcorrectly?(如何快速、准确地捕捉要点)抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息Para1：Recently,awildfishrestaurantwasorderedtoshutdowninHarbin,northeastChina’sHeilongjiangProvince.Asaresult,theowneroftherestaurantfacedafineof500,000yuan.detailedexample忽略具体事例topicsentence概要写作难点2•Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?(如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑)1.Recently,awildfishrestaurantwasorderedtoshutdowninHarbinandfacedaheavyfine.•______________,awildfishrestaurantwas_____________toinHarbinandfacedaheavyfine.Lately,notlongagoAsked/required/requested近义词替换closedownYoupaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurable.spentmuchmoneyontreasuretreatitkindlyYouspentmuchmoneyonitandtreasureit.Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurableYouspentmuchmoneyonitandtreasureit.Para1.useitcarefullyNowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldn’tlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!topicsentencedetailedexamplescharacteristicsresult忽略具体事例Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldn’tlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!1.Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldn’tlastalongtime.2.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.3.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresources.ModernIndustrymadeusbelieveconvincednotpermanentModernindustryhasconvincedusthatproductsarenotpermanent.short-lived近义词替换2.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.•Tothrowthemawayischeaperthantorepairthem.•Itismoreexpensivetorepairthemthantothrowthemaway.改变主语（形式主语）正话反说、反话正说Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresources.whichhasresultedinagreatwasteoftheearth’sresources.改变句式resultinModernindustryhasconvincedusthatproductsarenotpermanent.Tothrowthemawayischeaperthantorepairthem,whichhasresultedinagreatwasteoftheearth’sresources.Para2.Para3：提炼相关信息Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycan’tweactbeforethishappens?Whycan’twetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?过渡句Weneedtosaveresourcesbeforeit’stoolateThiswastefulnesshascausedusalotoftrouble.Wearerunningoutofresourcesandweneedtotakeaction.Thiswastefulnesshascausedusalotoftrouble.Wearerunningoutofresourcesandweneedtotakeaction.Weneedtosaveresourc