第04讲 读后续写之“脱险类”主题（练）（解析版）

资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】►第04讲脱险类（练）目录模拟12023年江苏省镇江第一中学校考模拟预测模拟22023年湖南省郴州统考三模模拟32023年福建省厦门高三厦门一中模拟测试模拟42023年江苏南京第一中学三模检测模拟52023年广东省校联考三模模拟62022年广东省校联考三模模拟72023年广东省高三校联考模拟82023年辽宁省高三校联考三模模拟92023年安徽省临泉一中校联考模拟102023年湖北武汉黄陂第一中学高三测试模拟112023年河北高三校联考模拟模拟122023年全国高三校考测试模拟132023年河北高三测试模拟142023年浙江省高三校联考三模模拟152023年安徽合肥市六中阶段测试_____________________________________________________________________1．（2023·江苏省镇江第一中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。PamBaleslefthercarandsteppedontothesnow-coveredJewellTrail.Sheplannedasix-hourhikethroughNewHampshire’sMountWashingtonStatePark.ThehikeupthelowerpartofJewellwaspleasant.At8:30am,stillbelowthetreeline,shetookthefirstinaseriesofon-the-trailselfies.Lessthananhourlater,shetookanotherphoto,aftershe’dclimbedintocolderairanddeepersnows.Shemadeherwayacrossthesnow-coveredridgetowardMountWashington.Thenshenoticedsomething:asinglesetoffootprintsinthesnowaheadofher.She’dbeenfollowingfainttracksalldayandhadn’tgiventhemmuchthought,becausesomanypeopleclimbJewellTrail.Butthese,sherealized,hadbeenmadebyapairoftrainers,notsuitableforhikingonsnow.By11am,Baleswasgettingcoldanddecidedtoabandonherplan.TheonlythingkeepingBalesonGulfsideTrailwasthetrainertracksinthesonw.Asshefoughtthewindandheavysleet(雨夹雪),thetracksmadeahard资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】left-handturnoffthetrail.Nowshealarmed.ShewassurethehikercouldgetthroughintheowvisibilityandwasheadingstraighttowardthechallengingtrailsoftheGreatGulfWilderness.Balesstoodthere,stunned.Thetemperatureandcloudswereinaracetofindtheirlowestpoint,anddarknesswasmerehoursaway.Sheturnedtotheleftandcalledout,“Hello!”intothefrozenfog.Nothing.Shecalledoutagain:“Isanybodyoutthere?Doyouneedhelp?”Thestrongwesterlywindscarriedhervoiceaway.Sheblewintoherrescuewhistle.Forafleetingmomentshethoughtsheheardsomeonereply,butitwasjustthewindplayinggameswithhermind.Shestoodlistening,thenturnedandwalkedcautiouslyinthedirectionofthesinglesetoftracks.Balesfollowedthetrackscautiouslyfor20to30meters.Sheroundedaslightcornerandsawamansittingmotionless.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Whensheapproachedhimandsaidhello,hedidnotreact.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterwakingthemanup,Balesrecognizedthattheyhadtogetoutoftheresoon.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Whensheapproachedhimandsaidhello,hedidnotreact.Takingadeepbreath,Balesgotcloser,checkedhispulseandsuddenlyrealizedthatthemanmusthavepassedout.Sheknewshehadtowakehimupimmediatelyorthedreadfulweathercouldputhimingreaterdanger.Outofherbag,Balestookacarpettowraptheman,gavesomehotwatertohim,calledoutrepeatedlyandshookhimhard.Fortunately,itdidn’ttakelongbeforethemancametohimself.Afterwakingthemanup,Balesrecognizedthattheyhadtogetoutoftheresoon.Thewindkepthowlingwiththeheavysleetdrivingfiercely,andevenworse,darknessbegantofall.Anxious,Balesstruggledtohelpthemanup,supportinghisweightandinchingalongthetrail,followingthetracksleftbyherhikingboots.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,theyfinallymadeittothefootofthemountain.Themanwasrushedtohospitalimmediately.Exhaustedasshewas,Balesfeltawaveofhappinesswelledupinside.资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了帕姆·巴勒斯计划在新罕布什尔州的华盛顿山州立公园徒步六小时，不到一小时后，她已经爬进了更冷的空气和更深的雪中。她穿过白雪覆盖的山脊，向华盛顿山进发。然后她注意到了一件事：她前面的雪上有一组脚印。她一整天都在跟踪微弱的轨迹，并没有给它们太多的思考，因为有太多人爬珠尔小道。但她意识到，这些鞋是由一双运动鞋制成的，不适合在雪地上徒步旅行。后来，她在一个小角落，看见一个人一动不动地坐着。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当她走近他打招呼时，他没有反应。”可知，第一段可描写巴勒斯救助这名已经失去意识的男子的过程。②由第二段首句内容“在叫醒那个人后，巴勒斯意识到他们必须尽快离开那里。”可知，第二段可描写巴勒斯和那名男子一起下山，脱离险境的过程。2.续写线索：检查——拿出物品给男子取暖——唤醒男子——扶起那名男子——一起下山——脱离险境——感受3.词汇激活行为类①检查：check/examine②唤醒：wakeup/awaken③努力：struggletodo/makegreateffortstodo情绪类①高兴：happiness/joy②焦急：anxious/worried【点睛】[高分句型1]Takingadeepbreath,Balesgotcloser,checkedhispulseandsuddenlyrealizedthatthemanmusthavepassedout.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Anxious,Balesstruggledtohelpthemanup,supportinghisweightandinchingalongthetrail,followingthetracksleftbyherhikingboots.(运用了形容词和现在分词作状语)[高分句型3]Exhaustedasshewas,Balesfeltawaveofhappinesswelledupinside.(运用了让步状语从句的倒装结构)2．（2023·湖南郴州·统考三模）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。EveryearlymorningGleenwouldruntoschooltostartthefireandwarmtheroombeforehisteacherandclassmatesarrived.Theirlittleschoolhousewas