How-to-write-a-suggestive-letter(高考英语建议信写作课件)

writingWhatisagoodwriting？语法篇这第一句写的…IstronglyrecommendthatThisisrightweasaseniorhighstudent….你再看这开头……Istronglyrecommendthatthetimestudentsdevotedtostudyinginschoolshouldbereducedtoeighthoursaday.Themainreasonsaccountingforitareasfollows.这动词错的…Shortstudent’stimeinschoolcanhaveagoodeffectonstudy,itcanimportantforstudent’sstudyxiaolu,andincreasestudent’sowntime.卷面篇养眼的…当批到下午两点看到了它们…老师最恨的作文…老师最喜欢的作文…Whatisagoodwriting？Howtocatchtheexperts'eye?Whatisagoodwriting？Whatisagoodwriting？Structure:*Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误)*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)三个步骤Step1Identifyoverallrequirementsandlistthekeypoints（审题列要点）Step2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish（成文润色）Howtowriteawritealetterofadvice？AsampleofasuggestiveletterDearJack:Iamsorrytohearthatyoufeelextremlynervousbeforeanimportantexam.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.First,makecarefulplansbeforeexamstomasterwhatyouhavelearnedcompletely.Itwillhelpyoubuildupyourconfidence.Second,takeproperexerciseregularly,whichwillhelpyoukeephealthyandenergetic.Lastbutnotleast,don’tstayuplatestudying.Itisveryimportanttohaveagoodsleepatnightifyouwanttobeenergeticduringtheday.Ihopemysuggestionscanhelpyoureducethepressureofexamsandperformwellinthem.Layout（谋篇布局）EndingexpressyourhopeBeginningstateyourpurposeBodygiveadvice&reasonsA.stateyourpurposesentencepatternsB.giveyouradviceC.expressyourhopeA.stateyourpurpose1.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon…2.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.HereI’dliketogivesomesuggestions.3.Knowingthat…,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.4.Itismypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon…B.giveyouradvice1.It’shelpful/important/necessaryto…2.Itwouldbeagoodideato…3.Iwouldliketosuggestthat…4.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…5.IfIwereyou,Iwould…6.Firstofall.Ithinkitwouldbebetterif….7.Itwillcertainlyhelpalottodosth/ItalsohelpstodosthC.expressyourhope1.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.3.I'msureifyoutakemyadvice,youwill…4.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.5.I'msureyouwill…….常见连接词——罗列观点•Firstly,•Firstofall,•Aboveall,•Tobeginwith,•Inthefirstplace,•Foronething,•Secondly,•Besides,•Moreover,•Inaddition,•What’smore,•Furthermore,•Worsestill,•Tomakemattersworse,•Foranotherthing,•Finally,•Atlast,•Intheend,•Lastbutnotleast,AtemplateofasuggestiveletterDear___,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon____.\I’mgladtowritethelettertoyouon____.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourreference.First,itisimportantto____.Asyou’ll____.Then,italsohelpsifyou____.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato____.Because____.youcanalso____.I’msurethat_____.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Sincerelyyours,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonHereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto,asyou'll.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatobecauseInaddition,youcanalsoI’msurethat.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHuatakeaChinesecoursebeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.watchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinese.learnandsingChinesesongsbydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.makemoreChinesefriends.howtolearnChinesewell.You’lllearnChinesewellSummaryWhatisagoodwriting？Structure:*Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误)*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)Howtowriteawritealetterofadvice？SummarySummaryDearJack:Iamsorrytohearthatyoufeelextremlynervousbeforeanimportantexam.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.First,makecarefulplansbeforeexamstomasterwhatyouhavelearnedcompletely.Itwillhelpyoubuildupyourconfidence.Second,takeproperexerciseregularly,whichwillhelpyoukeephealthyandenergetic.Lastbutnotleast,don’tstayuplatestudying.Itisveryimportanttohaveagoodsleepatnightifyouwanttobeenergeticduringtheday.Ihopemysuggestionscanhelpyoureducethepressureofexamsandperformwellinthem.Layout（谋篇布局）EndingexpressyourhopeBeginningstateyourpurposeBodygiveadvice&reasons1.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon…2.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…3.Knowingthat…,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.A.stateyourpurposesentencepatternsB.giveyouradvice1.It’shelpful/importantto…2.Itwouldbeagoodideato…3.Iwouldliketosuggestthat…C.expressyourhope1.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.3.I'msureifyoutakemyadvice,youwill…Summary假设你叫李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数100左右。1、健康饮食2、多锻炼3、喝足够多的水DearJane,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon____________First,itisimportantto____.Asyou’ll____.Then,italsohelpsifyou____.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato____.Because____.youcanalso____.I’msurethat_____.Ihopeyouwillfind