英语议论文写作课件

CompositionWritingHowtowriteanargumentationLearningaims1.wewillmasterthebasicstructureofanargumentativearticle.2.Wewilllearnhowtoorganizeideasinwritinganargumentation.3.WearesupposedtoavoidsomeerrorsormistakesandChinglish.Whatisagoodwriting？Content:1.Everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整)Structure:1.Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)2.Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:1.NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)2.NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误)3.Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)Introduction:anintroductiontotheessayBody:evidencetosupportyouridea(用论据说明自己的观点)Conclusion:stateorrestateyouridea结论(重申自己的观点,呼应前文)ThebasicstructureofanargumentationHowtoorganizeideas现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。55％的学生认为45％的学生认为１．应该春游１．不应该春游２．接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康２．高考临近，没有心情玩３．活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习３．春游耽误学习Theoutlineofthewriting:Conclusionparagraph:…Introductionparagraph:…Point2…BodyPoint1…supportingidea1supportingidea2supportingidea1supportingidea2Step1IntroductionHowtoputforwardopinions?1.QuestionShould…?Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.2.DescriptionofthediscussionInourclassroom,weheldaheateddiscussionabout…Opinionsaredivided.Nowadays,atopicabout…isbeingheatedlydiscussedin…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Justhaveatry:1.____________________________________________.2.____________________________________________.Moresentences:1)Nowadays,…playamoreandmoreimportantroleinourdailylife.2)Should……?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsontheissuesof…3)Recentlywehadaheateddiscussionon…Opinionsarevariousamongdifferentpeople.(11年陕西):学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始?DifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsontheissuesofwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood.Step2Givereasons观点陈述1：Point1:55%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）Sentencepattern:1.Mostofus(about55%)holdtheopinionthat…,sinceittendsto…,whichisbeneficialto…2.Moststudents,about55%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康Sentencepattern:Theythinkitgoodtodosth……/sthdogoodtosthIntheiropinion,itisofgreatbenefittodosth……Eg:TheythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairReason2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习（注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进what’smore；besides;moreover;inaddition；furthermoreEg:theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Point2:45％的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）Sentencepattern:However,otherspreferto…Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion…..Ontheotherhand….Eg:Ontheotherhand,about45%studentsareagainsttheidea.Reason1:高考临近，没有心情玩Sentencepattern:Theysay/believe/holdtheopinion…that….Eg:Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.Reason2:春游耽误学习（注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.TheythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudiesConclusion(结论)：1.Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemayreachtheconclusionthat…2.Therefore,itiseasytodrawtheconclusionthat…3.Tosumup/inaword/inconclusion/inshort/aboveall/ingeneral/generallyspeaking,Istillholdtheviewthat…Eg:Personally,Iwill_____________________.WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about55%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat’smore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.Ontheotherhand,about45%studentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies.Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.Iwillgooutingtorelaxmyselfthoroughlyafterfinishingtheimportantexam.Howtoavoidsomeerrorsormistakes1.Ihaven’tseeyouforseveralmonth.2.SuddenlyIhadaidea.3.Iaskedhewhathappened.4.Ifeltsadly,becauseofmanypeoplelaughatme.5.ThisisallwhatIknowaboutit.6.Therearemanypeoplewanttogothere.7.Idon’tknowwhereisthenearestpostoffice.HowtoavoidChinglish1.Inthefootballmatch,ourclasswonClass4.2.Whenyoucome,givemeatelephone.3.Iamverymissyou.4.Ihave180cmtallandmybodyisverygood.5.Outsideisverycold.Youhadbetternotgoout.Appreciationandimitation1.Thereisnodenyingthateducationisbeneficialtousstudents.2.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthateducationisveryimportanttous.3.Itwasnotuntilmanyyearslaterthatpeoplefoundwhatenvironmentmeanttous4.Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.5.Onlybytakingexercisewillwealwaysstayhealthy.6.HardworkingasIam,I’mstillunabletofindasuitableplacetolivein.7.Themoreeffectiveactionswetake,thebetterlifewewilllive.Moreexercises当堂清学在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的英语班会上，同学们对上网的利弊争论不休，不能统一。请你根据下列信息写一篇文章，并发表自己看法。大多数同学少数同学1.时间是自己，提倡多上网1.上网可以，但必须限时2.网络使我们交流方便，获得国内外知识及最新消息2.多数人上网是玩游戏而不是学习3.因特网使学生丰富了业余生活3.个别同学甚至逃学上网注意：可适当添加细节使文章连贯；词数120左右。