雅思写作8分-逻辑一点通PPT模板

雅思写作8分-逻辑“一点通”--(澳洲墨尔本)游洋雅思学校杨琳老师传说中的“例证”topicsentence:Oncealocationisestablishedasamaintouristdestination,theeffectsonthelocalcommunityareprofound.例证+启下Whenhill-farmers,forexample,canmakemoremoneyinafewweeksworkingasportersforforeigntrekkersthantheycaninayearworkingintheirfields,itisnotsurprisingthatmanyofthemgiveuptheirfarm-work,whichisthuslefttoothermemberofthefamily.结果一+承上Insomehill-regions,thishasledtoaseriousdeclineinfarmoutputandachangeinthelocaldiet,becausethereisinsufficientlabourtomaintainterracesandirrigationsystemsandtendtocrops.结果二：Theresulthasbeenthatmanypeopleintheseregionshaveturnedtooutsidesuppliesofriceandotherfoods.Oncealocationisestablishedasamaintouristdestination,theeffectsonthelocalcommunityareprofound.Whenhill-farmers,forexample,canmakemoremoneyinafewweeksworkingasportersforforeigntrekkersthantheycaninayearworkingintheirfields,itisnotsurprisingthatmanyofthemgiveuptheirfarm-work,whichisthuslefttoothermemberofthefamily.Insomehill-regions,thishasledtoaseriousdeclineinfarmoutputandachangeinthelocaldiet,becausethereisinsufficientlabourtomaintainterracesandirrigationsystemsandtendtocrops.Theresulthasbeenthatmanypeopleintheseregionshaveturnedtooutsidesuppliesofriceandotherfoods.并列Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.Discussboththeseviewsandgivenyourownopinion.Thosewhofeelthatsportsstars’salariesarejustifiedmightarguethatthenumberofprofessionalswithrealtalentareveryfew(有才),andthemoneyisarecognitionoftheskillsanddedicationapersonneedstobesuccessful（成功标记）.Competitionisconstant（压力持久）andaplayeristestedeverytimetheyperformintheirrelativelyshortcareer（职业生涯短）.Thepressurefromthemediaisintense（压力大）andthereislittleprivacyoutofthespotlight（丧失隐私）.Soallofthesefactorsmayjustifythehugeearnings递进“Preventionisbetterthancure.”Outofacountry’shealthbudget,alargeproportionshouldbedivertedfromtreatmenttospendingonhealtheducationandpreventativemeasures.Towhatextentdoyouagreeofdisagreewiththisstatement?Topicsentence:Obviously,thereisastronghumanargumentforcatchinganymedicalconditionasearlyaspossible.Thereisalsoaneconomicargumentfordoingso.Statisticsdemonstratethecost-effectivenessoftreatingconditionintheearlystages,ratherthandelayinguntilmoreexpensiveandprolongedtreatmentisnecessary.Thentherearesocialoreconomiccosts,perhapsintermsoflossofearningsforthefamilyconcernedorunemployedbenefitpaidbythestate.Obviously,thereisastronghumanargumentforcatchinganymedicalconditionasearlyaspossible.Thereisalsoaneconomicargumentfordoingso.Statisticsdemonstratethecost-effectivenessoftreatingconditionintheearlystages,ratherthandelayinguntilmoreexpensiveandprolongedtreatmentisnecessary.Thentherearesocialoreconomiccosts,perhapsintermsoflossofearningsforthefamilyconcernedorunemployedbenefitpaidbythestate.自省:tourism优缺点Storiesabouttheproblemsoftourismhavebecomelegioninthelastfewyears.Yetitdoesnothavetobeaproblem.Althoughtourisminevitablyeffectstheregioninwhichittakesplace,thecoststothesefragileenvironmentsandtheirlocalculturescanbeminimized.Indeed,itcanevenbeavehicleforreinvigoratinglocalculturesandagrowingnumberofadventuretourismoperatorsaretryingtoensurethattheiractivitiesbenefitthelocalpopulationandenvironmentoverthelongterm.Storiesabouttheproblemsoftourismhavebecomelegioninthelastfewyears.Yetitdoesnothavetobeaproblem.Althoughtourisminevitablyeffectstheregioninwhichittakesplace,thecoststothesefragileenvironmentsandtheirlocalculturescanbeminimized.Indeed,itcanevenbeavehicleforreinvigoratinglocalculturesandagrowingnumberofadventuretourismoperatorsaretryingtoensurethattheiractivitiesbenefitthelocalpopulationandenvironmentoverthelongterm.2012年12月15日考题Weliveincitiesortownswhichhavemuseumsdisplayinghistoricalandculturalimportance,butpeopledonotvisitthem.Whydoyouthinkpeopledonotvisitmuseumsintheirlocalareas?Whataretheimportanceofmuseumstosociety?Storiesabouttheproblemsconcernedhavebecomelegioninthelastfewyears.Yetitdoesnothavetobeaproblem.Althoughsomemuseumsinevitablylosemorepopularitythaneverbefore,othersdisplayingartisticmasterpieceortechnologicalbreakthrougharestilllistedamongthemostfrequently-visitedplaces.Thatdoesnecessarilymeanthatcultureorhistory-basedmuseumsareofnoimportance.Indeed,....(今日作业）活动提示：每周三下午：YY80151北京时间：3:00-4:00PM墨尔本时间：6:00-7:00pm课件+录音下载：视频课程：作业批改：关注微博：hs_澳洲墨尔本游洋雅思学校注意：微博“作业评论贴”的评论中留下作业答案公众微信号mel_游洋雅思下周一推送答案