英语写作句型多样化

SentenceHowtomakeyoursentencesvaried?•Pre-test:Rewritethefollowingsentencesaccordingtotherequirementinthebracket.•1.Manypeoplethinkthattheglobalwarminghasmovedfromasubjectforadisastermovietoaseriousscientificissue.(以it为形式主语)•2.Theprofessorisyoungandambitiousandaimshigh.(以形容词开头)•3.Wealmostforgetthisevent.（以theevent为主语）•4.Becauseoftechnologicaldevelopment,thereappearmanycybercrimes.（改为被动句）•5.Povertyistheonlythingthatcanbegotwithoutpains.(双重否定)•6.Mandidn’tknowwhatheatisuntiltheearlyyearsofthe19thcentury.(倒装句)•7.Asoneofmoderncollegestudents,IgetonlineeverydaytoacquiretheinformationIneed.IalsodownloadthemusicllikeontheInternet.AndIchatwiththefriendsImiss.（排比句）•8.Therearemoreandmorepeoplewhorealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotection.(替换moreandmore)•9.Ifwedon’trecognizetheseriousproblemofgrowingpopulation,wewillmakeabigmistake.(简单句)•10.Culturalheritagesitesmakepeoplehaveadeepinsightintothepast.(替换make…have)Therearemanyreasonsformetochoosethisoccupationoverothermorelucrativeones.First,teachingislearning.Ihavetoreadmorebooks.Ihavetoexplorenewknowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld.Iliketodoitinmylife.Second,teachingmeansfreedom.Icanfreelyexpressmyopinionsandexplaintheminmyownwayandnobodywillinterferewithme.Finally,teachingisstable.Idon’thavetorushtocatchamorningbus.Idon’thavetopleaseaboss.Idon’thavetoworryaboutbeinglaidoffbecauseIamgettingold.•11个句子中，有8个简单句，1个therebe句型，5个youhave/youdon’thaveto开头的短句。•Avarietyofreasonshaveledmetochoosethisoccupationoverothermorelucrativeones.First,teachingislearning.Tomakemylecturesmoreinteresting,Ihavetoreadmorebooks,explorenewknowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld—theverythingIliketodoinmylife.Second,teachingoffersalargespacetodevelopmyownthinking.Asateacher,Icanfreelyexpressmyopinionsandexplaintheminmyownwaysincenobodywillinterferewithme.Finally,teachingbringsacertainpeaceofmind.Nomorerushingtocatchamorningbus,nomoreanxietytopleaseaboss,andnomoreworriesaboutbeinglaidoffbecauseyouaregettingold.•文中有4个词的短句,也有30多个词的长句;有简单句、复合句、排比句等，因而文章读起来节奏感强。•所谓句子变化，主要是指句子的开头要有变化，句子的结构要有变化，句子的词汇使用要灵活多样，句子的长度要有变化。•I.改变句子开头•II.句式要富于变化•III.升级词汇VarietyofSentencesVarySentenceBeginnings•不要总是以有生命的名词和人称代词开头(I，People，We等)，有时可改用it做形式主语。•1.ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.•ItiswidelyacceptedthatbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.•2.Collegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesandeconomicsuccessaccordingtoarecentreport.•Itisrecentlyreportedthatcollegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesandeconomicsuccess.•可用形容词、副词、分词短语、介词短语等做开头。•1.Manypeoplehaveambitiousplansbutnoability,sotheyaccomplishlittle.•Highinambitionbutlowinability,manypeopleaccomplishlittle.•2.Schoolworkexertspressureonteenagers,andtheirpeersalsoencouragethem.Undersuchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.•Pressuredbyschoolworkandencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersoftenresorttosmoking,thoughtheyfeelalittleguiltysometimes.•3.Themanwasindespairandturnedtohisfriendsforhelp.•Indespair,themanturnedtohisfriendsforhelp.•以不定式、从句开头•1.Wehavetocontinuallyupdateourknowledgetoacclimatizetotheever-changingworld.•Toacclimatizetotheever-changingworld,wehavetocontinuallyupdateourknowledge.•2.WeneedtouseEnglishtocommunicatewithmoreandmoreforeignerswhocometoChina,solearningEnglishhasbecomeincreasinglyimportantinourlife.•AsweneedtouseEnglishtocommunicatewithmoreandmoreforeignerswhocometoChina,learningEnglishhasbecomeincreasinglyimportantinourlife.VarySentencePatterns•不要千篇一律地使用主动态，可尝试用被动语态。•1.Studentsshouldcertainlymakecontinuousefforts.•Continuouseffortsonthepartofstudentsarecertainlyrequired.•2.Becauseofsocialdemands,thereappearmanyeveningschools.•Manyeveningschoolsarecalledintoexistencebysocialdemands.•不要总是用肯定句来表达,要学会用否定表示肯定的意思（双重否定，或用没有...更句型）。•1.Everyyoungboyandgirlwantstoearnalittlemoneytohelpcoverhighercollegecost.•Thereishardlyayoungboyandgirlwhodoesn’twanttoearnalittlemoneytohelpcoverhighercollegecost.•2.Wheneveryoupickupanewspaper,youwillalwaysfindadvertisements.•Itisimpossibletopickupanewspaperwithoutfindingadvertisements.•3.Foodisthemostbasicissuetoindividualandnationalsurvival.•Noissueisasbasictoindividualandnationalsurvivalasfood.DoubleNegative•双重否定的肯定程度往往比一般的肯定句强烈•常用的否定词：•None…not,never…without,impossible…without,E.g.不愿听人言者最聋。•Nonearesodeafasthosewhowillnothear.•Without,except,unless,but,until•E.g.凡事皆有例外。•Thereisnorulebuthasexceptions.•恰当地使用排比、平行句(Parallelstructure)。•1.Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen.Ithinkwomenshouldespeciallyhavetherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequalterms.Theyshouldgetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob.Theyshouldalsohaveequalopportunitiesforpromotion.•Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen,especiallytherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequalterms,therighttogetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob,andtherighttoequalopportunitiesforpromotion.•2.ForthefirsttimeinhistoryChinesecitizensheldsuchpowerintheirownhands.Inthepasttheyhaveneverbeenallowedsuchvigorousandunrestraineddebateonpolitics.•ForthefirsttimeinhistoryChinesecitizensheldsuchpowerintheirownhands;forthefirsttimeinhistorytheyhavebeenalloweds