2017年中考英语二轮专题书面表达课件：科技生活

【话题解读】随着科学技术的发展，每个人在生活中都会与各种科技产品打交道。这些高科技产物一方面给我们带来了便利，另一方面也给我们造成了一些困扰。有关科技的话题，尤其是手机、网络等，成了时下热点，也成了中考的焦点。针对此类话题的写作通常需要考生分析当前的现象，然后阐明自己的观点。写作结构一般为：描述现象——正面观点——反面观点——最后表明作者的观点。写这类议论文时，要注意观点必须鲜明，不能模棱两可，而且要有严密的逻辑性。【真题回放】对于“中学生在校是否可以使用手机”,不同学生有不同的看法,请你根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文,向某英语报社投稿。观点1.浪费时间：……1.浪费时间：……理由2.危害身心健康:……2.危害身心健康:……你的观点及理由要求：①包含所有要点，不逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；②书写规范、工整，条理清晰；③文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等；④词数:80—100词，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。Canmiddleschoolstudentsusemobilephonesatschool?Nowadays,moreandmoreteenagersusemobilephones.Canmiddleschoolstudentsusemobilephonesatschool?Differentstudentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2016四川南充)【真题分析】该书面表达任务是命题写作，题目中给出了作文的标题并在首段描述了要讨论的现象。从首段最后一句中的differentopinions以及表格中的提示信息可知接下来要先列举正反方的观点，最后再表明自己的观点及理由。文章是议论文，应以一般现在时态为主。写作时要列举清楚理由，并注意各个理由之间的衔接。【标准范文】Canmiddleschoolstudentsusemobilephonesatschool?Nowadays,moreandmoreteenagersusemobilephones.Canmiddleschoolstudentsusemobilephonesatschool?Differentstudentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Somestudentsthinktheycanusemobilephonesatschool.First,it'sconvenientforthemtocalltheirparents,teachersorfriends.Second,theycansearchwhattheyneedontheirmobilephones.Forexample,theycanlookupnewwordsandlookthroughnews.Ontheotherhand,otherstudentsdisagree.Theythinkusingmobilephoneswastestime.ManystudentsspendtoomuchtimeinplayinggamesandchattingonQQ.Besides,it'sunhealthyforstudents'mindandbody.Inmyopinion,studentscan'tusemobilephonesatschool.It'sbadfortheirhealthandstudies.【高分突破】Canmiddleschoolstudentsusemobilephonesatschool?Nowadays,moreandmoreteenagersusemobilephones.Canmiddleschoolstudentsusemobilephonesatschool?Differentstudentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Somestudentsthinktheycanusemobilephonesatschool.Aboveall,mobilephonescanhelpthemkeepintouchwithothers.Secondly,informationisimmediatelyavailable.However,otherstudentsdisagree.Theythinkusingmobilephonesisawasteoftime.Besides,it'sharmfultothemindandthebody,becausestudentscangetunhealthyinformationordamagetheireyesight.Inmyopinion,studentsshouldbeallowedtousemobilephonesatschool.Everycoinhastwosides.Thoughmobilephonesbringusproblems,theyalsohavemanyadvantages.SoIsuggeststudentsusemobilephonesonlywhennecessaryatschool.【高分揭秘】1.文章段落层次清晰，正反方观点表述清楚，时态使用正确。2.作者在介绍正反方理由时，用到了aboveall,secondly,besides等连接词，使得文章富有条理性和逻辑性。3.作者在表明自己的观点时有理有据,语言准确、凝练，并且还使用了一句谚语。4.作者使用了一些地道的表达，如keepintouchwith,awasteoftime,beharmfulto,beallowedto等，这为文章增色不少。【素材积累】1.词汇手机的优点：communication,message,picture,video,information,contact,emergency,surftheInternet,getintouchwith手机的缺点：electromagneticradiation(电磁辐射),sightloss,ring,interrupt,disturb,noisy2.句子Scienceplaysanimportantpartinourlife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.Computerscandomostofthethingspeoplecando.Usingsmartphonesdistractsourattentionfromourlessons.Throughtheabove,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeonline,playingelectronicgamesandsendingtextmessagesafterclass.【写作任务】随着互联网的发展，智能手机(smartphone)已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息，以“Refusetobephubbers”为题写一篇120词左右的短文。现象弊端影响与家人、朋友的关系(relationship)；容易引发交通事故；对身心健康有害，不利于学习和工作。观点正确使用手机；面对面交流胜过网上聊天……要求：1.短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；2.题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：1.haveeffectson2.concentrateon3.face-to-faceconversation4.makegooduseofRefusetobephubbersWiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,smartphonesarewidelyusedamongpeople.Phubberscanbeseenhereandthere.____________________________________________________________________(2015山东烟台)【参考范文】RefusetobephubbersWiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,smartphonesarewidelyusedamongpeople.Phubberscanbeseenhereandthere.Whileeatingwithfamilymembersorgettingtogetherwithfriends,somepeoplearealwaysusingtheirsmartphones.Itcanhavebadeffectsontheirrelationships.Evenworse,whensomepeoplecrossthestreet,theystillconcentrateontheirphones,whichcanbedangerous.Andothersstayuplateatnightplayinggamesontheirphones.Ithinkitisreallyharmfultotheirhealth,studiesorwork.Inmyopinion,weshouldmakegooduseofsmartphonesandnotdependonthemtoomuch.AndIdobelievethatface-to-faceconversationismoreenjoyablethanchattingonline.Let'sputdownoursmartphonesandrefusetobephubbersfromnowon!