四级写作之漫画作文辅导

writingJOANNA1.写作概述2.实际样例参考运用（模考分析+下发资料）3.写作语法黄金结构4.高分策略之词汇替换5.高分策略之句型多样化6.评分标准及建议概述写听读译30mins15%30mins35%40mins35%30mins15%大学英语四级试卷的结构你知道四级的答题顺序吗?作文段落翻译听力长篇阅读仔细阅读在答题纸1上作答,完成后交答题纸1.剩下题目在答卡2上作答.选词填空全国大学英语四级考试答题卡1全国大学英语四级考试答题卡21.审题（1-2mins)2.构思提纲(3-5mins，确定主题)3.写文章(20mins)4.修改检查(5mins)写作概述Stepspre-writing:仔细阅读题干，确定写作主题Para.1:describethepicture简要描述漫画（who,what,when,where…）开门见山TIPS:1.写作的directions部分虽然给出了大致的主题，但是也要求考生对漫画进行描述，切忌抛开漫画内容直接议论！！！（模考作文问题一）TIPS:2.漫画的内容一定要符合图片，切忌无中生有！！！（模考作文问题二）TheboythoughtdeeplyTheboyfeelashemedandsaysnothing.Theboystopsplayingandlearningalot.Theboyismakingaplanandthegrandpaisencourainghimpara2：全文的核心段giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonconveyedinthepictureandinterpretitsmeaning/message揭示主题（观点）并加以解释和说明论证;揭示现象(问题)并阐述现象（问题）产生的原因。TIPS：可以从2-3个方面进行阐述，也可以将这部分分为两段。Para3.：giveyourconclusion.(a)提出建议，重申观点主题句(b)对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理建议或总结观点。TIPS：主题句的复述不是简单地重复，通常需符合1.如果在段末，用强调词转换方式连接。2.与主题句保持意思一致，更进一层。3.转换方式：词对应，同根，逆向EXAMPLES主题句：youshouldconfirmeveryappointmentwhenyoudobusinessinUS.主题句复述：InbusinesscircleinUS,businessmanusuallymakessureeveryappointment.2.主题句：Toperceiveismoreimportantthantojudge.主题句复述句：Itisofgreatimportancetoperceivetojudge.ORToperceiveisnolessimportantthantojudge.实例运用+模考分析模考一一、语法问题1.时态，人称，单复数的混用，不统一。eg:1.Theboyplaycomputergamesandhisgrandpawatchhim.2.Playcomputerisausualactivityforuniversitystudents.3.Lifeplanmusthasadestination4.Ifsomeonedon'thavealifeplan...2.词性的使用错误eg:1.ifyouhaveaplan,youshouldworkhardly.2.sosheissucceedatlast/ayoungpeoplecan'tbesuccess3.weshouldfacedifficultbravely4.wehavemanychooses3.Therebe句型使用错误eg:1.Therearemanyyoungpeoplewastetimetodosomeboringthings.2.Therehaveaprobleminthefutureifwedon'thavelifeplan.4.被动语态的使用错误eg:1.asshowsinthepicture,theboyis...2.everyonehasalifeplan,maybenotwrite...3.ThefirstConfuciusInstitutebuildin20044.confuciusinstitutessettospreadchineseculture.4.run-onsentences串句无法理解的句子EG:1.Therearemanythisphenomenons2.ifeverythingisalie,wearen'tneedalifeplan.3.Otherpeoplemakingalifeplanfromsth.4.Asayoungpeople,weshouldhave....二、佳句欣赏1.Therefore,wearesupposedtomakealifeplanfromnowontomakeourlifemoremeangingfulandcolorful(章笑盈)2.AsfarasIamconcerned,makingalifeplanisveryimportantforyoungpeople.(李程鹏)3.Itisobviousthatthedrawerofthepicturewantstodrawourattentiontowardsthatweshouldmakealifeplanfromanearlyage.Makingalifeplanshouldbeattachedgreatsignificancetobyourselves.(赵建宏)4.Onlyyoumakealifeplananddevoteyourselfintoit,canyouhavenoregretwhenyouareold.(卞涵)5.Weareeasytobocomeconfusedwithourlife.Makethelifeplanrightnowandfocusonthethingsyouwanttodobecausetimedoesn'twaitforanyone.(钱林豪)三、看图作文的解题思路应用1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：漫画信息“focusonthetopicaboutmakingalifeplanandexplainwhyitisimportantforyoungpeopletodo”确定写作主题：年轻人应该做好人生规划以及人生规划的重要性的原因2.作文提纲（结构）第一段：简要描写图画内容（who,what,when,where…）:爷爷教导孙子：如果年老的时候写自传，你会看到自己去过哪里，（whereyouhavebeen）如果年轻时候写，你就会知道你将去哪里(willseewhereyouaregoing)。Thepicturedepictsayoungmansittinginfrontofacomputerandtypingsomethingwithhisgrandfatherstandingbehind.Thecaptionbelowsays,“Whenyouwriteyourautobiographyinoldage,you’llseewhereyouhavebeen,butwhenyouwriteyourautobiographyatayoungage,you’llseewhereyou’regoing.”Itrevealsprofoundlythatyoungpeopleshouldshapetheirownfutureandmaketheirownlifeplans,whichiscosistentwithwhatIadvocate第二段：解释图画深刻含义（揭示主题）并加以解释和说明论证。Firstly,planningyourlifehelpsyousetupspecificlifegoalsandfollowthroughonyourgoals.Whenyouhavespecificgoals,you’remorelikelytobeself-motivated.Secondly,lifeplanninghelpsyouhaveafullunderstandingofyourlifedeficienciesandmakepromptadjustments.Ifyoufailsomeofyourlifegoals,youcanre-examineyourlifeplananddecidewhethertomakemoreeffortstofulfillthosegoalsorchangesomeofyourgoals.Lastbutnotleast,youcanmeetmanynewopportunitiesaftersomeofyourlifeplanscometrue,becausesuccessbreedsmoresuccessandopportunitiesbringinmoreopportunities.第三段：给出自己的看法（总结全文，强调正确的做法）。Tosumup,itisquiteessentialforyoungpeopleespeciallytheuniversitystudentstomakelifeplanearlysoastofacethechallegingsconfidentlyaftergraduations.Whatweshoulddoistotakeactionsimmediately,includingchoosingcorecouresandinterest-basedminorcoursesandfiguringoutexactschedulesforstudyorfuturecareer.Onlyinthisway,canouruniversitytimeisrewardinginthelongrun.实际样例参考运用（见资料）Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.四级写作新题型--看图作文2013.06真题看图作文的解题思路应用1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：漫画信息“expressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig”确定写作主题：做任何大事前都应该从小事做起（一屋不扫，何以扫天下。）2.作文提纲（结构）第一段：简要描写图画内容（who,what,when,where…）:父子之间的对话，儿子关注核废料处理（disposalofnuclearwastes）,父亲认为要从小事做起（emptythedustbinfirst）；DoingBigThingsStartsfromDoingSmallOnesSAMPLE1Asisvividlyrevealedinthepictureabove,theboyexpresseshisworriesaboutthedisposalofnuclearwastes,whilethefathertellshimtoemptythedustbinintheroomfirst.ThepictureremindsusofanoldChinesesaying—Ifyoudon’tli