高考英语作文(校公开课)

TheBeautyofWriting高三2017.9.5Whyiswritingsotough?InputOutput高考作文高分卷的特点外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。like→befondof,beaddictedto/help→dosbafavor句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。衔接美：使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛，就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为8小时”这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写一份发言稿，内容要点如下：1.保证充足睡眠2.提高学习效率3.增加自主学习时间注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.辩论稿的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。Asaseniorhighstudent,Istronglyrecommendthat语法篇这第一句写的…IstronglyrecommendthatThisisrightweasaseniorhighstudent….Istronglyrecommendthatshouldshortenschooltimeintoeighthours.你再看这开头……Istronglyrecommendthatthetimestudentsdevotedtostudyinginschoolshouldbereducedtoeighthoursaday.Themainreasonsaccountingforitareasfollows.这动词错的…Shortstudent’stimeinschoolcanhaveagoodeffectonstudy,itcanimportantforstudent’sstudyxiaolu,andincreasestudent’sowntime.原来改书面表达就是改错……Inmyopinion,wemusthaveenoughtimetostudy,butwealsoshouldkeepenoughtimetorelaxandsleep,eitherofthemareimportant.Becauseofwehavetimetorelax,wecanstudyenergetic.Reducestudytimealsocanimprovethequalityofourschoollife.这词汇…你再看这词汇…欣赏一下这篇文章的句式结构…Ifequalamountofworkhavetobeaccomplishedwithadeclinedschooltime,studyefficientlyisexpectedtobeenhanced.Moreover,extra-curriculartimewillmakeupmoreofthestudents’schedule.Thatistosay,chancesarewecanmakeabetteruseofourtime.卷面篇养眼的…当批到下午两点看到了它们…老师最恨的作文…老师最喜欢的作文…一点提示…好练的字笔笔过长答题不可越界作文五档：（从教师阅卷印象角度划分）漂漂亮亮（21—25分）有模有样（16—20分）马马虎虎（11—15分）稀里糊涂（6—10分）一塌糊涂（0—5分）ThreeRules:1.Youlearntowritebywriting.2.Thereisnogoodwriting;onlygoodrewriting.3.Whenindout,refertoRuleNo.1and2.FiveSteps:Analyzethewritingtask.Organizeit.Draft.Revise.Edit.高考英语写作中怎样使用复杂结构1.适当的语态2.使用不定式3.使用过去分词4.使用V.+ing形式5.使用名词性从句6.使用定语从句7.使用虚拟语气8.使用倒装句,感叹句怎样运用复杂结构：怎样运用复杂结构：1.主动转被动Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般)thattheconferencebeputoff.(高级)Theadvisorisexpectedtowork4hoursaweek.Weexpecttheadvisortowork4hoursaweek.Itissuggested2.使用不定式3.使用过去分词InordertoearnmoneybymyselfandbroadenmyhorizonsShewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.(一般),shewalkedoutoftheroom.(高级)，Iintendtolookforapart-timejobasasalesman.（为了独立赚钱和拓宽视野）Followedbymanystudents4.使用v-ing形式2）,I’llvisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation.（天气允许的话）1）Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers.Theyteach48pupils.(一般)NowourSchoolhasthreeteachers，Weatherpermittingteaching48pupils.伴随状语Whatisthemostimportantisthat5.使用名词性从句2.IcanhelpchildrenimprovetheirEnglish.(最为重要的是)1.Iamsorry.Ididn’treplywithoutdelay.IamsorrythatIdidn’treplywithoutdelay.6.使用定语从句1）Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(一般)Thegirlwashighlyspokenof.(高级)2)maybeIwillworkasavolunteerforaschoolasateachingassistant__________.(这将丰富我的生活)whichisabletoenrichmylife.whichwillmakemylifecolorful.whosecompositionwaswellwrittenenrichingmylife．7.使用虚拟语气我相信如果你是我，你也会做出同样的选择。Ibelievethatifyouwereme,youwouldmakethesamechoice.8.使用倒装句、感叹句earnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.(我不仅能独立赚钱)1.IwouldreadandreplyyouremailassoonasIreceivedit.(我多么希望)2.notonly…butalso…引起的倒装HowIwishNotonlycanI高考英语写作中要学会使用恰当的关联词III.常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：what’smore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless否则:orelse5.表示时间关系当…的时候:when;while在…之后:after在…之前:before直到:until直到…才…:not……until……一…就…:assoonas后来，然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recently自从…:since从那时起:fromthenon6.表示特定的顺序关系首先:firstly最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;8.进行举例说明例如，比如:forinstance;forexample;like;suchasthatistosay,namely,actually,andsoon,believeitornot,totellyouthetruth,forthisreason9.用于陈述事实实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth10.对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,finally,inconclusion,generallyspeaking,asyouknow,intheend,11.其它常用到的副词therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;Thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;12.表示结果：thus,therefore,so,asaresult,seeingthat,luckily,unfortunately13.表示强调：aboveall,indeed,surely,certainly,ofcourse,afterall,withoutanydelay,atleast,atmost,mostimportant,undoubtedly背诵一些题材的常识性语句复习开学初所发的８８个短句讲义！