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五、润色升级菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语一、使用高级词汇写作时，“高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两个，也会为你的作文增添色彩。1．标新立异写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩，别人有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地标新求异。Weallhavethesamechance.→Weallpossessthesamechance.Wehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.→Wehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend.菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语2．短语优先多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.→Icannolongerputupwiththewayhespeakstous.Theboyrealizedthedangerandbegantorunaway.→Theboywasawareofthedangerandbegantorunaway.3．避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches.→Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches.菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语二、使用高级句式，让句子靓起来1．恰当使用被动语态Aboveall，wemustdosomethingtostoppollution.→Aboveall，somethingmustbedonetostoppollution.2．使用强调句Theaccidenthappenedtheotherday.→Theaccidentdidhappentheotherday.Hedidn'tcometothepartybecausehewasverybusy.→Itwasbecausehewasverybusythathedidn'tcometotheparty.菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语3．使用倒装句WecanonlyimproveourEnglishinthisway.→OnlyinthiswaycanweimproveourEnglish.Wedon'tknowitsvalueuntilwelosehealth.→Notuntilwelosehealthdoweknowitsvalue.4．使用省略句Althoughtheywerefacedwithmanyproblems，theydidn'tloseheart.→Althoughfacedwithmanyproblems，theydidn'tloseheart.5．使用感叹句Wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday.→Whatagoodtimewehadwiththepeasantsthatday!菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语6．使用with复合结构Becausetherewastoomuchnoise，Icouldn'tgoonstudying.→Withthenoisegoingon，Icouldn'tgoonstudying.7．使用虚拟语气Ididn'ttakehisadvice，soIfailedintheexam.→IfIhadtakenhisadvice，Iwouldn'thavefailedintheexam.It'stimeforustotakemeasurestoprotectthewildanimals.→It'shightimethatwetookmeasurestoprotectthewildanimals.菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语Ⅰ.用较高级词汇代替画波浪线部分的词或短语1．ThebookshopisinabuildingonFrancoStreet.lies2．IhavedecidedtostudyEnglishharderthisterm.made_up_my_mind3．Idon'tknowhowtoenlargemyvocabulary.have_no_idea4．We'lltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.spare_no_efforts；promote5．We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealsobuiltalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.set_up菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语Ⅱ.用较高级句式转换下列句子1．IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.(强调句)It_was_when_I_entered_senior_high_school_that_I_realized_the_importance_of_English.2．Wecanliveahappylifeonlybythismeans.(倒装)Only_by_this_means_can_we_live_a_happy_life.3．Hefellasleep.Thelightswerestillon.(with复合结构)He_fell_asleep_with_the_lights_still_on.菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语4．Ifitisn'twellorganized，themeetingwillbeafailure.(省略句)If_not_well_organized，the_meeting_will_be_a_failure.5．Theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students.(被动语态)A_survey_was_carried_out_among_260_students.6．Weloveourmotherlandverymuch.(感叹句)How_much_we_love_our_motherland!7．BecauseIwasillthatday，Ididn'ttakepartinthesportsmeeting.(虚拟语气)I_was_ill_that_day.Otherwise，I_would_have_taken_part_in_the_sports_meeting.菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语8．Theydidn'trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotectinguntilallthefishintheriverdiedout.(倒装句或强调句)Not_until_all_the_fish_in_the_river_died_out_did_they_realize_the_importance_of_environment_protecting.或：It_was_not_until_all_the_fish_in_the_river_died_out_that_they_realized_the_importance_of_environment_protecting.菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语Ⅲ.翻译句子1．只有通过这种方式，我们才能生活在更加美丽舒适的环境中。(倒装句)Only_in_this_way_can_we_live_in_more_comfortable_and_beautiful_surroundings.2．公园里空气清新，喷泉美丽，阳光灿烂并且伴有鸟儿在歌唱。(with复合结构)The_park_was_full_of_freshness_and_beauty_of_spring，with_the_sun_shining_and_birds_singing.菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语3．在昨天下午的篮球比赛中，苏华和李江在抢球时撞在了一起。(分词作伴随状语)During_the_basketball_game_yesterday_afternoon，Su_Hua_and_Li_Jiang_bumped_into_each_other，trying_to_catch_the_ball.4．经验告诉我，不是你得到的东西而是你如何利用它决定了你是怎样的一个人。(被动语态；强调句)My_experience_tells_me_that_it_is_not_what_you_are_given_but_how_you_make_use_of_it_that_determines_who_you_are.菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语5．他说英语说得如此清晰，以至于大家都能听得懂。(倒装句)So_clearly_does_he_speak_English_that_he_can_always_make_himself_understood_by_everyone.6．是我们做出决定的时候了。(虚拟语气)It_is_high_time_that_we_made_a_decision.菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语7．由于开车太快，他在事故中受了伤。(强调句)It_was_because_he_was_driving_too_fast_that_he_got_injured_in_the_accident.8．如果人们被说服了吃更多的水果和蔬菜，那么死于心脏病的人数将大大减少。(被动语态)The_number_of_deaths_from_heart_disease_will_be_reduced_greatly_if_people_are_persuaded_to_eat_more_fruit_and_vegetables.菜单隐藏山东金太阳书业有限公司高考总复习·英语本小节结束请按ESC键返回