高考英语一轮复习构想作文第十讲作文怎样“赢”_整体要巧要顺课件7

[写作技巧指导]一、“起”好开头[常用开头词汇]表示“起”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first,firstly,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,aboveall,tobegin/startwith,today,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto等。First,Ithinkeveryoneneedsfriendsandiseagertogetfriendship.Firstofall,wemustmakefulluseofevery45­minutelesson.Nowadays/Recently,peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplainingabouttheheavytraffic.Inthefirstplace,shecanreadattherateof100wordsaminute.Tobeginwith,smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.Generallyspeaking,themoreyoupractise,themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.[常用开头句式](见黑体部分)Astheproverbsays/Asthesayinggoes,“Timeismoney.”Ascanbeseenfromthetable,nearlyeveryoneownsonemobilephoneinChina.WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,computersplayanimportantroleinpeople'slife.Thereisnodenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.Itisbelievedthathealthisabovewealth.Itiswellknownthatanelephantisaverykindandgentleanimal.I'mexcitedtolearnthatwearegoingtostartamagazine.[满分作文选粹]IamsorrytosaythatIcannotgotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.(2016·全国卷丙)Asastudent,Icantellyouthatthereisnothingbetterthanbeingpraisedbymyteacherbeforemyclassmates.(2015·湖南高考)I'mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoourschoolasanexchangestudent.(2014·天津高考)二、“承”好上下[常用顺承词汇]表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly,also,besides,inaddition，soonafterwards,afterthat,what'smore,furthermore，moreover,what'sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,whatisworse,worsestill,forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,meanwhile,atthesametime等。Secondly,weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.Obviously,agoodlearninghabitcanhelpustoreachourdestinations.What'smore,goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.Inaddition,weshouldn'tneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.Meanwhile/Atthesametime,Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentclean.[常用顺承句式](见黑体部分)TakeBeijingforexample,itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon'tcherishwildlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.[满分作文选粹]Besides,IhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIamelectedasassistanttomyEnglishteacher.(2015·陕西高考)What'sworse,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.(2015·江苏高考)Besides,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.(2014·全国卷Ⅰ)Moreover,itseemsthathealwaysthinksmoreofhimselfthanofothers.(2014·重庆高考)Worsestill,Itookmanyfallsoffthebike.(2014·福建高考)三、“转”好过渡[常用转折过渡词汇]表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but,yet,however,while,otherwise，or(else),onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,contraryto，inanycase,though,although,as,evenif/though,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof等。ButunfortunatelyImindmyownbusinesswithoutconsideringmyparents.However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Onthecontrary,thevolunteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth.ContrarytowhatIhadoriginallysaid,thetripturnedouttobefun.[满分作文选粹]However,whatamazesyoumostisthefollowingnewfunctions.(2014·湖南高考)Otherwisewe'llhavetoanswerforourselfishnesssoonerorlater.(2014·重庆高考)Butnow,becausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.(2014·北京高考)四、“合”好结尾[常用结尾词汇]表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally,lastbutnotleast,inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,ina/oneword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole，ingeneral等。Allinall,travelingisthebestchoicetorechargeourselvesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.Inconclusion,agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.Inaword,successisimportant,andsoisfailure,becauseit'sthemotherofsuccess.Tosumup,environmentalprotectionisofgreatimportance.Onthewhole,Ifindabikemoreenjoyablethanamotorcycle.[常用结尾句式](见黑体部分)I'dappreciateitifyoucoulddeliverthemassoonaspossible.Onlywithcombinedeffortscanweexpectourhometowntotakeonanewlookinthenearfuture.Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousaspeaceintheworld.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthatwemusthaveself­confidenceifwewanttoachievesomething.[满分作文选粹]IamsurethatIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.(2015·陕西高考)Inaword,mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful.(2014·全国卷Ⅱ)I'llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.(2014·浙江高考)综合演练提能Ⅰ.用适当的词汇或句式完成句子1．______________(首先),themostsignificantthingistosetagoal,workoutaplanandcarryoutyourplanstepbystep.答案：Firstofall/Tobeginwith2．________________(就我而言),Ilovewealth,butIvaluehealthmore.答案：AsfarasIamconcerned3．__________________(事实上),advertisementplaysaninformativeroleinourdailylife.答案：Asamatteroffact/Infact4．__________________(况且),listeningtosomesoftmusicdoesrelaxyourmoodandgiveyouanewstart.答案：Besides/Inaddition/What'smore/Moreover5．Ilostmywayintheforestand________________(更糟的是),itbecamedark.答案：tomakemattersworse/worsestill/whatwasworse6．__________(因此),Isuggestwebegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep.答案：Therefore7．____________(总之),changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtuscomfortandconvenience.答案：Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief8．__________________________(确实到了……的时候了)wetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem.答案：It'shightimethat9．_____________________________