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新年词汇春节SpringFestival拜年payanewyearvisit爆竹鞭炮firecracker除夕EveofChineseNewYear春联Springcouplets辞旧迎新ringouttheoldyearandringinthenewyear饺子Jiaozi庙会templefair鸣钟辞旧岁ringouttheoldyear年画(traditional)NewYearpictures年夜饭theEvefeast;年终大扫除Year-endhouseholdcleaning守岁stayuplateontheNewYear'sEve团圆饭familyreuniondinner压岁luckymoney,giftmoney舞龙dragondance一、Languageerrorsinwriting纠错１.be多余或缺少I’menjoystudyingEnglish.Itbadforourhealth.IenjoystudyingEnglish.Itisbadforourhealth.2.时态错误Atthattime,theyalwayshelpmewithmyEnglish.IhadenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImeethim.Atthattime,theyalwayshelpedmewithmyEnglish.IhaveenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImethim.Myfavoritesportisrun.Ithinkdosomesportsisveryimportantforus.Myfavoritesportisrunning.Ithinkdoingsomesportsisveryimportantforus.3.非谓语动词错误Ilikedosports.IwishtakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.IwishtotakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.Ilikedoingsports.4.副词位置错误Iverythankher.Iverylikefootball.Ithankherverymuch.Ilikefootballverymuch.5.代词错误Theyaregoodforusbody.Ihopemealsobecomeabasketballplayer.Theyaregoodforourbody.IhopeIalsobecomeabasketballplayer.6.缺介词或介词错误IthankhimverymuchhelpmestudyEnglish.Heevencametomyhomeforhelpme.IthankhimverymuchforhelpingmestudyEnglish.Heevencametomyhometohelpme.Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealthy.IhaveevergivedupEnglish.(单词错误)(动词P.P.错误)Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealth.IhaveevergivenupEnglish.7.其他错误It’sgoodformyhealth.Notonlymakemebrave,butalsomakemebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itimportantforyoutotakeanhourtosportseveryday.It’sgoodformyhealth.Itnotonlymakesmebrave,butalsomakesmebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itisimportantforyoutospendanhouronsportseveryday.（缺主语）（句型错误）Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼写）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter（大小写）Punctuation（标点符号）6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithoughtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Tense（时态）Verbagreement(主谓一致)Wordform(词形）10.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoGuiyangbyabuswithmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveitupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Phrases(短语和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldladylying…16.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏词）18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order（词序）Usingwrongword（选词错误）22.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoGuiyangbybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoGuiyangonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英语）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so1.是否有大小写错误(capitallettersorlowercaseletters)2.是否有拼写错误(spellingmistakes)3.是否有标点错误(punctuationmistakes)4.是否有语法错误(grammarmistakes)•主谓是否一致•动词的时态•语态的使用是否正确•词组的搭配是否合乎习惯…CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，看不清，占不满格。3字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，不会得高分。规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写以“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文，提示如下：1孙老师，25岁，1.65米,打扮入时。2关心热爱学生。3教学方法生动有趣。4与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；实战训练Pre-writing1.审：2.定：“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字作文记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时篇章结构：三段式首段：个人简历正文：教学特色尾段：作者的评价befashionablelovestudents,andcareaboutthestudentsbelivelyandinterestinggetonwellwith…,bepopularwith…Writing:3.列1.打扮入时2.热爱学生，关心学生3.生动有趣4.相处融洽，深受欢迎MyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.①Sheisveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!Writing4.连：连词成句，连句成篇复写Rewriting：5、美——润色丰富要点；6、改——查错改错7、抄——修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。MissSun,ourEnglishteacher,is25yearsold,and1.65meterstall.Sheisveryfashionable.Sinceshelovesusandcaresaboutourneeds,sheisveryhelpfulinourdailylife,Notonlyissh